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Spike's Destiny was decided long before he was even born, but when he is finally told about it, will he go along with Celestia, or will he rebel and run away with his friends to make his own destiny?

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OMG Spike getting with Luna, hella jizz in my pants can't wait for a new chapter.

This is not the first time I've read this story. Why is that?

I swear I've read this before... I just can't put my finger on where...

2187218 for everyone who is asking i have written this story before on a separate account. there was an error in which the story kept getting deleted, and the only answer i found was to try it on a different account. i am taking this chance to fill plot holes and edit it in different ways to make it better. I will be posting on the other account as proof a note with a link to this story. sorry for any confusion and i hope this story does not get deleted. :heart:

That ending, LOL...
It made me think of this song.

Interesting that you made Spike look like a luck dragon,:twilightsheepish: but given the differences between Eastern dragons (peace and wisdom) and western dragons (destruction and greed), it's not surprising. :twistnerd:

Also guys i love to hear feedback and opinions so feel free to comment or even message me what you thin

From apple farming, to gem hunting, to stabbing, and finally to f...you know what I'm not going to finish that sentence. All I know is that for as fast paced as this has been, it is not bad, actually, it's pretty damn good.

I can't really tell if the story is good or bad, cuz it's not really clear what it's abuot. Like Dragonbolt said, this is the #3 love interest we've seen, and everything feels rushed. Specialy this chapter. It's not bad, but yu really need to slow down and give the story some focus.

2187218Same here but, the story is not coming to mind right know.:ajbemused:

you have my interest :moustache:
Q: will Twilight be joining in on the fun? :twilightblush:

I'm... I'm very sorry. But I feel like I just watched a whole Christopher Nolan's movie in only 5 minutes. That's how pretentious this chapter is. And the worst part is that now I have even less idea of what the story is about.

2203596 Well thank you for that opinion. i will take that into consideration in the future and as i continue to write this story, but one thing i wanted to do with this story is that the readers will know nothing spike doesn't know. do not worry spike will understand what is happening eventually and thus you will to. if you do not appreciate that type of writing then that is your opinion and you are very welcome to it. i will not do this in all my stories but i hope to see it through with this one. i will be releasing a chapter a day until i have what i already have written posted. by the time they run out you will know what is going on, and there should be about 10 chapters give or take. if anything i hope you will continue to read, if not i hope you will check what i write in the future

Riz

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Who is Spike shipped with ?

2206205 Like i said you will know nothing spike doesn't, though i will tell you. you have seen all of the love interests that will be in this story apart from a little bit of flutterdash (sorry but i love them :heart: ) so until the next chapter comes out you will just have to wait

Riz

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Hmm...let me remember, there's Rarity, Luna, Applejack ? and Twilight ? right ?

I'll let that FlutterDash slide away...for this fic..

2209748 Twilight is not a love interest. they will have moments of course, but just as brother and sister. and hey there is nothing wrong with a little flutterdash:rainbowwild:

Thats right, you just finished the prologue, things get really intense from here on out. so if you dont like blood and fighting and other stuff like that then rather than complaining when you do read it just end it here, but you will miss out. this is about 1/8th of the total story possibly less depending on how much editing i do on the later chapters

Riz

Celestia smiled as she looked upon Spikes face. “Thank you, my son” ? :pinkiegasp:

Riz

2214240 I hope this story will stay TEEN. Because it will be ashame if it were to be tag MATURE. :pinkiecrazy:

Well at least for me that is...

It will stay teen right ?:fluttershysad:

Also how old is Spike in this story and how big is he ?

2214621 It will stay teen. and spike is only a little older than in the show as it has only been a few years, but he is considerably larger, as a comparison he is about the size of celestia and with his wings spread he is easily larger. Dragons grow fast, and although he is skinny he is still strong and tall

Pinkie not best for dangerous situations? you are kidding me. She can wipe out equestria with her physics bending powers....

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Lauren Faust herself revelead that Celestia was Spike's surogate mother. Not Twilight.

Finall the story has a focus. Good. But the villian is killing it, to me. I hope Shinning Armor will die :raritystarry:

Riz

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I know that...just want to sound dramatic :pinkiehappy:

2220413 Not to spoil anything but Falling star is not even the real villain and many shall die in this story, perhaps shining may be one of them. you will have to read to find out :rainbowwild:

Pet peeve: make sure to capitalize names. Other than that, its great

2225810 I Really don't have an editor and I'm only in high school so some things may be off sorry.....

When you think about it... Never mind. I hope they do end up toghether at the end.

Well the only problem I had right here was, you spelled the best mare ever name wrong my friend. It's Zecora :twilightsmile: Oh and great story, I had my suspicions on that letter being a trap but I guess I was wrong. Good story though keep it up.

:facehoof: Oh my sweet Luna why must you be so naughty with my favorite dragon.

And you made Luna cry, well alright then let me just get my knife so we can have a talk :pinkiecrazy: yes a talk....




Good story Eeyup. Interesting events. :pinkiehappy:

2238095 Fixed, thanks for the advice, yeah i am alone when it comes to edditing so i may make a few mistakes everynow and then but if someone points them out i will fix them

No ofense Spike, but that sounds like a ver horrible idea, that could very easily back fire on you.
I want to know why is so important for him to talk to Chrysalis.

And then the plan goes south.
The situation becomes F.U.B.A.R

Still missing was a conversation between Spike and Twilight, he has not touched his bad temper and how she did it alone for a whole week without it, while the drake slept with on AppleJack.

Spike, a dragon you have been careless with her ​​best friend in the whole world.:facehoof::moustache:

2633488 There is actually a very specific reason i have avoided as much contact with Spike and Twilight and i cannot reveal much but you will see it soon enough. If my pacing is correct book four (we are currently in an offset of book 2) All will be revealed though. patience my child :trollestia:

Also as for his bad temper, it is still there, but as he has grown older he has begun to grow out of it when he isnt around certain people. i can reveal that rarity is one of his triggers as well as a later OC character who is to come in. i wanted you to see how Spike can go from a standard near perfect character back to his old self simply with a little push. Simply keep reading. trust me, you will get plenty of Spike's temper.

Riz

Oh sweet a new chapter after how many long...

TO BE CONTINUED

......

Are you fraking kidding me ?! :rainbowhuh:

2642451 Sorry man set up chapter, and i always end with to be continued. dont worry though i have 6 more days of school left and ill start posting at least once a week again. just got caught up trying not to fail you know? xD

Riz

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Its cool. I understand :twilightsmile:

Nice chapter.
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