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TigerSwirl448


Howdy fellow readers and writers. My name is Tiger; I'm a storyteller and I want to write epic stories no one has ever written before.

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It has been ten years since Octavia has seen her mare friend Vinyl Scratch since they parted ways for their careers. But when the cellist meets Vinyl again she noticed something was very off about her. It turned out her fears were true after receiving a call for help from the DJ. Only thing is that seeing Vinyl again just unlocked a hidden trail of a murderer. Octavia must find out who the pony is and what was his motive for hurting Vinyl. But sniffing around might lead to more trouble for both Octavia and Vinyl. She won’t be alone of course, she’ll have old friends helping her including, Lyra Heartstrings, Bonbon, Apple Fritter, Beauty Brass, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle and Ditzy Doo.

Can Octavia and her friends uncover this murderer’s plot in time or will her efforts to save the mare she loved come too late?


(Edited by: Xhoral1865 & Roybgp)

Chapters (11)
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Comments ( 62 )

You switch between past and present tense a lot. You should probably fix that.

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Ohh . . .:twilightoops: Thanks for letting me know. This was written so long ago since I wrote this that my writing wasn't as perfect as my other fic. I'll fix this up. Again thanks for noticing that and telling me. :twilightsmile:

3483908 Uh hate to be a bother, but um, where is the worst of this problem? You see I had a hard time learning about the past and present tenses as a kid and I still have that problem today. You think you can point out where the worst of it is for me? :applejackunsure:

3484005 If it's on Google Drive, can you just share the file with me?

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Uh, I don't know what Google Drive is.:twilightblush: My sister might since she uses Google Chrome a lot if that's the same thing. FIMfiction is my first ever social website if that gives you an idea how computer literate I am. :ajsleepy:

But after I sent you that last comment I started rereading Chapter 1 and going through it and making changes. I can see what you meant by the problem. I'll replace chapter one in a little bit. But I can still use the help in the future, you can PM me and I might give you my email address if that helps. Unlike TMS where I actually read my story at least five times before I started submitting, this story wasn't edited well. That's my mistake. :facehoof:

Chapter 1 is fixed, at least the first time. Sorry about that folks.:ajsleepy: I should have double checked it before putting it up. I think that was the reasoning behind the thumbs down number. Future chapters will be fixed and double checked before submitting.

hoping it is not one of those stories where the other ponies are killed one by one or something....... especialyl considering we have some of the mane six involved and a living wrecking ball of a mail mare.

will see how thigns goes. though technically twilight could always give a message to Luna for help in finding the assailant. the dream walker would need to look for a dreamer who is fantasizing horrific things, and with vinyl scratch in his dream.

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No, no, no, the story won't be like that! No killing and stuff.
It's mainly a rekindling love story as well as a tiny mystery. Twilight won't come up until a later chapter. Her part even with other members of the main six were mainly there as support to Octavia in the later part of the story.

(Also I wrote this before season 3 came on and it was about completed when "Sleepless in Ponyville" came up. Don't expect Princess Twilight or anything from season 3 in this story. That's why I put up the Alternate Universe Tag; it's based on the idea of Equestria ten years after Twilight came to Ponyville.:twilightblush: Does that make sense?)

3621896 can get the whole twilight not becoming a princess thing. though luna's dream walking is an attribute of hers. be like rarity not being able to telekinetically manipulate dozen aand dozens of objects at once, or rainbow dah not being able to sonic rainboom.

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Yeah . . . :unsuresweetie: but I didn't really put Luna into the story. She's a cameo in the later part of the story though.:pinkiesmile: (No dream walking though. Sorry to disappoint.)

Well, that was hurtful to read. (not in a bad way. I'm always hurting when I read Vinyl being terribly sad or in this case hurt.)

Anyway, nice little story going on. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Save Vinyl, Tavi! Get the &""!(!(è!!!! who did this!:flutterrage:

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Yeah, but not to worry no pony does in the story. The next chapter will be up when I get it fully edited. When, I'm not sure yet. Glad you like the story so far.:twilightsmile:
EDIT: Sorry I mean no pony *dies in the story* :facehoof:

octavia gonna have to stomp some stallion into a mare im sure..if you get my meaning

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hmm, maybe she might. You just have to wait and see.:raritywink: chapter three will be up this coming weekend.

Yay! I've been hoping to see an update for this, and now it's finally here. Great chapter and I look forward to the next one.

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Sorry that you had to wait.:fluttershyouch: I felt horrible making dates but not following through. But now with a new editor I can get more updates going and on time. I'll be send chapter 3 to my new editor in a day or so.

Other than that I'm glad that you are enjoying it.:twilightsmile:

I have a bad feeling that this fic is going to make me cry.

Fantastic fic so far!
I'll have to get around to reading the other chapter, its gonna bug me :P kinda cruched on time with classes and all..

A like from me, and I will be following this.

cheers!
-VD

i want more of this and the pony who did this to her will rue the day he thought of it RUE IT I SAY :pinkiecrazy: :flutterrage: :twilightangry2:

im glad she seems to be getting better :pinkiehappy:
p.s. i might try that foot detox... might

The story was good and I look forward to upcoming chapters

4025932 glad you like it. :twilightsmile: more updates coming soon.

Comment posted by Fireside Stories deleted Mar 10th, 2014

i like it and i still hope that stallion gets whats coming to him :pinkiecrazy:

Glad to see Vinyl coming back to life :raritywink:
Can't wait for what's next!

ok read throw all chapters in one go. now let me start by saying i dont normaly like fimfic with the banner DARK in it, because that normaly meens death of somepony early on, but this fic is so far soooo gooooooood i love it to bits :pinkiehappy: pleas keep them comeing so i can keep reading them :twilightsmile:

The cliffhanging is starting to hurt my fingers.

Raaaa, the tension!!!!!
Keep going ^^

Tis` a Octavia/Vinyl story, so I`ll read it.:twilightsmile:

Tonight...:applejackunsure:

4390851 Hope you enjoy.:twilightsmile: Oh and Thanks for the Fave.

this is my favorite chapter:heart:
i loved the songs you put in

Will things finally turn alright? Will Octavia assault more underpaid receptionist? Will octavia and vinyl adopt a colt and name him "Epic Music"?
...

So many questions that need answers :pinkiecrazy:

Luckily there are the next chapters that will bring the answers:raritywink::twilightsmile:

4598630 Maybe your questions get answered in the next two chapters.:raritywink: I'm working on the editing for Chapter 10 now.

OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH *GASP* OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH

wooo that was a fun ride too bad its over but maybe a sequel in the future?

Just getting into this story. All i have to say so far is they all better get this guy and come out fine!

I actually clapped out loud at the end of this. It was so good that it needs to be made into an actual film.

4660586 :twilightblush: I'm happy you enjoy the story. I thought the ending was the best part too.

A film ... Well I don't know about that. :twilightblush: But who knows what will happen.

I Don't usually read dark stuff. Sometimes i do in order to keep an open mind.

Things are getting happy. Which means bad things are about to happen...

4660925 I know people who know people. I want this to be a film.

Please, please, please, please....

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