What you love doing or the one you love doing it with? Vinyl and Octavia have composed some of the most wonderful symphonies together but lately, the DJ's traveling has produced some sour notes. When the opportunity to leave again comes, will Vinyl choose to stay with what she loves doing or the one she loves doing it with?
Cover art made byPilkie(aka Time turner on here)
So much feelings in this.
3620925 I honestly wrote it from the heart
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I believe you
N'awww...
I mean, *AHEM*
Nice story.
Sweet and short. Could have used a little more in the way of getting the point to Vinyl that this was a tipping point but otherwise can't complain. Nicely done.
D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! That was so sweet! I particularly liked how you managed to give an overview of their past relationship problems without forcing in a bunch of drawn-out exposition.
One thing though:
I believe you mean she grabbed her by the waist. Grabbing her by the waste sounds all kinds wrong.
3645907how do i edit and it show up
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Go to your chapter. Near the top of the page you should see the 'edit' button. Click on it, and the page layout will change, allowing you to delete and edit as you see fit. One you're done, just hit the save button near the top of the page, next to all the formatting options. (It looks like a floppy disc)
Hope that helps!
3647318 btws i fixed it ficta
Nice
Very sweet and well written and enjoyable to read.
It's and interesting story, I'd really have to read it when my mind is able to concentrate. I've bookmarked it to help me read it before anything else tomorrow.
5521645 alright :)
Alright, here we go. About to get this review going.
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That was so beautiful 20 stars and 2 hoofs up!!!