• Member Since 28th Mar, 2013
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Tavi Scratch


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Octavia was being chased, Vinyl decides to be brave and stays back to defend Octavia. Tavi Manages to escape and finds her self in the woods where the unexpected happens, and she wakes up screaming what happens next?

P.S. This is what happens when my own Insomnia gives me the middle finger.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 21 )

When did they both step through that magic mirror? ^^

You need to edit this my friend. I haven't read it and I seethe need. In your summary, the thing that's supposed to make me want to read it, you've got one glaring error. Die. In that context, the word should be, "die" not, "died." Fix it while you're still featured bud before the grammar Nazis tear you to bits! :pinkiehappy:

2827289 thanks I was very tired when I wrote this and honestly glanced at it before I published it. Though nearly died when it took a couple hours to pass moderation. Haha..

Ouch. I just got to a proper computer and saw my comment...lol It's not much better than the summary paragraph...lol

2827583 you only combine a word.. haha and like I said tired xD I don't do well when tired but its the only time I get inspired, but when I'm awake I do better at editing.

good story

I had to wait like 20 minutes for this story to load and you know what? It was worth it :ajsmug:
As soon as I saw that you posted a new story I was like "Buck everything. Let me read the story :raritydespair: "
I really like your stories and I want more. Keep up the good work.

2833280 you are probably the follower I'm happiest to have at the moment :) and awe thanks it means so much and I can't believe you had to wait that long for it to load I would have cried.

2832325 Thank you as well :)

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YES. I found a place with internet connection. I'm sitting in a hole on a giant grass field and I think I'm gonna sleep here tonight.... :ajsleepy:

But anyways, I'm honored to be your favourite follower, even when it's just for the moment. I'm will try to defend this status with everything I can :pinkiecrazy:

In seven days I will be back at my home and then real fanboying can start :rainbowwild:

2837464 awesome :3 I can't wait haha and it'll prolly last for a while

pretty good. I still see tons of potential for this. (probably because my imagination runs like crazy)

2872690 thank you very much :) and I may at some point continue this.

2872730. alright. I love OctiScratch ships a lot. x3. can't stop reading them

2872746 then you found the right author :) I only am going to write octascratch and have some lyrabon in the background.

2827256 You know it originally took me a day or two to figure out what you meant by this comment, I'm just getting around now to commenting. I couldn't find a good human Vinyl and Octavia in bed together. So I used this.

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I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to cause confusion ^^
Plus in the picture they had hooves.
Well done.

LIES that dream was real! and Octavia is now dreaming Vinyl is alive and cuddling her!! :flutterrage:

3280969 Ramen, I wouldn't do that. The cake isn't a lie, but it would make a kicker for another story.. I don't want to write a sad fic though, so it will remain unwritten.

Good short one-shot

I enjoyed it but one part kinda ruined it. I see where you were getting at, but i didn't see any legitimate trigger for her to just kiss her out of the blue. It was too sudden in a not so good way.

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