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Pen Stroke

A fan-fiction author and game programmer that lives in Glendale, CA.


This story is a sequel to Into The Depths

The horrors of the catacombs have turned to distant memories for Celestia, Twilight, and Luna. Discord’s change of heart and Twilight’s coronation have helped to ease and erase the mental scars from that harrowing night. The three princesses can even smile and laugh as Nightmare Night moves into full swing.

Yet, it should never be forgotten that those who have been touched by Tirek are forever within his grasp.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 511 )

Another Pen Stroke story

*Takes out popcorn*

I shall enjoy this!:moustache:

A sequel! Awesome! *rereads both before going out*

Considerin the depths of its prequel I shall read this once all chapters are out.
I cant stand massive amounts of mindf*** for too long without closure.

Also, that picture creeps the hell out of me....

PS: One question thou, why does it only have a "Twilight"-tag? I thought this was more about Celestia?

Yes, a sequel for Into the Depths. This will definitely be worth reading!

The vision shall rise.

A sequel to my favorite story? AWWWW YEAH!:rainbowlaugh:

Hmmm... 5 Dislikes, the three comments before Chocolatebunnyhunny all have 4 dislikes and his comment of


has a whopping 5 likes. [Edit: Now 8]
I call votebot:flutterrage:

NOW can we call the First Encounter Assault Recon?!

Who the heck is drawing the pictures for these? They should be commended.

Oh damn...

This is gonna be goooood...

~Skeeter The Lurker

“Did you see them, Twilight1? They’re huge, and the whole ceiling is one big web!”


definitely a dangerous bieng if a goddess can still be hrmed by it.

though i am curiuos. is this taking place in the same storyline as your past sins and nyx storyline?


She was so scared she forgot to hit shift :P


Not related to Past Sins storyline at all.

The story looks nice, and the cover image seems to say that it is going to be a great suspenseful fiction, so I'll give it a chance, I'm a gambler. BTW who made the cover Image? Looks epic! :twilightsmile:


But here's something in the works that is --> Black Angel

Naw, that is just the army of Pen Stroke haters. Trust me, there are a lot of them.

That pic almost made me jump out of my seat. No joke.

Shit just got real....again.
This will be thoroughly enjoyable, i can tell, and if not, well.... you'll fare off worse than my autobot prisoners. :pinkiehappy:
Megatron out.

A third horror story from the author of "Haunting Nightmare" and "Into the Depths"?
Definitely following!
About that picture... I really like their... manes?

The prior story really had me tense as I read it. Looking forward to another mind trip.

OH SWEET CELESTIA!!! A SEQUEL!!!!??? TO my most favorite horror story!? :raritycry::raritycry: im crying in such sweet joy right now, you have no idea how happy this makes me :pinkiehappy: man i love you so much right now, like and a fav, you are the best :raritywink:


"And the feature box shall tremble!!" and all that racket.

A sequel to a good story I loved?

What witchary is this?!

Oh...that's not a good sign. If Discord is scared, then you know we're in for something terrifying.


Yes! Another story to give me the jibblies!

Oh man. I remember reading the first one a long time ago. It was pretty damn good. And now you start a sequel this Halloween. Absolutely freakin' perfect! :moustache:

The first one was wicked creepy so I've got high hopes for this. I'm waiting until it's all up to read it though :derpytongue2:

I enjoyed the first story in this series, I'm sure I'll enjoy this one too. Thanks for sharing it with us!

When Discord is the one who tries to stop what's about to happen, you know it's BAD

I absolutely love your description of Discord, especially back in Winter Bells. You really make him a convincing spirit of chaos who doesn't have a care in the world. So when he suddenly shifted to serious and worried, it actually made me shiver a little.
Looks great, can't wait to see where you take this.

I really enjoyed the first one so I hope this one will live up to its expectations
Also I think Discord might be the sanist one of the bunch after all there experiences(except maybe Candace)


This is what happens when you mix the Ring of Mordor and ponies. It just happens.

Saw this on the feature box, was intrigued.

Realized this was a sequel, read the original in an hour or two.

Now all hyped up. :rainbowwild:

sweet cant wait for the next chapter

I don't know why she should be scared of Tirek when she jogged up and down all over his ass, but I guess we'll see.

Not sure if i should read this or the first one, it seems a bit dark for my tastes.

A sequel? What manner of sorcery is this?!

Instafaved, check.
Instawatched, chech.
Hiding under the bed, check.
Nudging the moster under the bed aside a bit to get comfy. ... In progress. Hey, pass the candy corn wouldya?

There was also a set of stone busts that, for some songs, sang in harmony like a barbershop quartet.

Haunted Mansion reference?

Freaky. I'm not letting Discord decorate for any of my parties. Something tells me things won't be getting any better...:twilightoops:

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