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Pump It Up

Dead, but also undead. It's complicated.


Nightmare Moon and Solar Flare have fun at home all the time. This day will be just as fun! Breakfast, Cat-and-Mouse, baths, and stargazing!

This story was written for the One-Shotober challenges started by CartsBeforeHorses and Redigar and the Nightmare Moon is best pony group's first contest. I hope you enjoy!

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Thanks. :twilightsmile: You read this really fast! :pinkiegasp:

Yep. I also type really fast.

Thank you for submitting to the Nightmare Moon is best pony contest! :twilightsmile:

I like it, it's certainly different from most fics :pinkiehappy:
I think you should have a comedy tag as well, it was pretty funny at times too :twilightsmile:
Anyway, good story, and thanks for the submission :pinkiehappy:

So much adorableness. :heart:

I didn't feel that a comedy tag was needed because it's not laugh out loud. Should I really add it? :unsuresweetie:

You're welcome! :twilightsmile:


It's your choice really, I just though it was funny at some points :pinkiehappy:

Really really good competition, I might add. I'm not too sure my own entry will match up.:fluttershysad:
But I'm not out yet.:rainbowdetermined2:
Continue being awesome.

Hmm, competition? I wasn't aware of any competition in the nigtmare moon is best pony group. :rainbowderp:

3342785 Here check this thread it has all the info on the contest:twilightsmile:

As soon as I read "holes" I was like:
:rainbowderp:Oh shit...
And then I read "crystals" and I was like:
Except like twice as big. I think I tore something but I don't care it's that good.

Pretty cool. One question though, why did you changed Nightmares color from her usual black, to Luna's dark blue?

Glad you liked it! Subtlety is the best way to go! :pinkiehappy:

What do you mean?

3346013 Whenever you describe Nightmare you use colors like "night blue" or just simply "blue", when she's actually black. Luna is blue, not Nightmare.

Oh. Oops. :twilightoops: I'll change that. :twilightsheepish:

Great job! It's not often I find a one-shot under 5,000 words that's not cringeworthy.

Really? Huh. Well, thanks! :pinkiehappy:

Congrats! Your story has been reviewed and deemed a masterpiece by the Reviewer!

This link here!

I can't believe no one did this yet.

Best Day Ever


>cover art of Nightmare Moon

That is all. Equestria is ours.


The cover art alone caused me to explosively d'aww.

So...Nightmare is the older sister. Chrysalis and Sombra are the parents. Chrysalis has a second "brood".
What the buck is going on?

It's AU!
No? Okay then.

This was originally a stand-alone. Then I had a multichapter sequel planned that would explain some things. Then that was scrapped.

The sisters are adopted, and in this universe, Chrysalis also tried to attack Canterlot, and is trying again.

And no one picked up on who Nightfall was? Shame.


Considering dragon wings and the show's list of godlike characters, would that be Discord?

Nightfall is a synonym for twilight. The name Ethereal Queen was Xelos' creation for a "nightmare version" of Twilight.

Awww:rainbowkiss: so sweet.

Comment posted by Aqua Shimmer deleted May 14th, 2014

It's so cute!~ <3 :rainbowkiss:

You're very welcome.

I take it Sombra is the dad? Another amazing story by you! Congrats!

Yes he is!

Thank you! :pinkiehappy:

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