• Member Since 18th May, 2013
  • offline last seen January 29th

Pump It Up

Dead, but also undead. It's complicated.


Rainbow's friends are ignoring her, and she's quite frustrated. She wants to know why, but ends up running to Zecora's. Will she find out why?

This was based off of Black Piraka is Lonely, Black Piraka Gets Noticed Part 1, and Black Piraka Gets Noticed Part 2.

This story was written for the One-Shotober challenges started by CartsBeforeHorses and Redigar. I hope you enjoy!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 36 )

I thought you were no longer in the one-shotober challenge?

I never quit; others did, but not I! :rainbowdetermined2:

October is going to be the death of my sanity.

i have lost every bit of sanity:pinkiecrazy:. first i am saddled being mickey mouse for halloween,:ajsleepy: second, one-shotober has many random stories:facehoof::eeyup::raritystarry::derpytongue2:

My sanity has gone out the window :facehoof: This was funny, but if this is what One-shotober is gonna be like... oy vey. October's gonna be the vein of my existence lol. Nah jk, this pretty funny, but a little messed up. There's a little bit that you could have improved on, but I didn't mind it

:pinkiecrazy: Nobody expects the Penguin. He'll be back with a vengeance.
So was Zecora trying to say that it was a Penguin Elemental?

Would a strawberry fajita be related to a chimicherrychanga? :pinkiehappy:

Hah! I have no idea what just happened, but it was pretty cute!:pinkiehappy:

No. That was a line from Black Piraka is Lonely.

Not sure. I don't know what that is.

Thanks! :twilightsmile:

What... Just... Happened... :rainbowderp:

Comment posted by Nyperold deleted Oct 13th, 2013

Well no wonder, because Pinkie Pie made it up! (Nevertheless, some fans have taken the concept and made it into a real foodstuff; I suspect the same could be done with Rainbow Dash's "strawberry fajita".)

Yeah, but IDK how tasty it might be; here's a picture of one:
Yeah... It'd take a lot to make it work.

I did look at the cherry thingy... It looks pretty good! :pinkiehappy:

I don't... what?

Anyway, just read everything but dialogue in Morgan Freeman's voice for a good time. Read dialogue in his voice for an even better time.

Inspired lunacy. Upvote from me.

Your story has been Reviewed!
This link here!

Alright then. That managed to kill like 7 minutes.

:rainbowlaugh: You don't know how much I like reading the reactions of those who read this.

Thanks. :twilightsmile:

So random it's good! :rainbowlaugh:


I take it you've never watched the Jaller series before?

6251838 Jaller series? No, I don't believe so.

As you probably saw, I put a some links to three episodes in the description. It's all one big series with different, random shorts, all revolving around Jaller Inika (who is an idiot), Hewkii (his slightly less of an idiot brother), Axon (their uncle because reasons), Kyle (an Ehylek who only speaks in grunts), Black Piraka (who, up until the episodes in the description and another episode, couldn't interact with anyone), and after a certain point, Hoo (a Swedish-sounding Mark Surge 2.0). It's very random but hilarious and does not adhere to BIONICLE canon at all with the exception of the names (excluding Nuparu, who was called Hahli, Photok being called Juaquen(?), and Black Piraka, obviously) .

6251930 Huh, interesting. I'll have to check it out sometime! :derpytongue2:

You very much ought to! It's great.

Welp... There could have been more drama to this story. I'm sad to say, you wasted a good plot :ajsleepy:.

To be fair, I wrote this too heavily relying on the source material, and this was during One-Shotober, when I was trying to get a lot of stories out. I was also a lot younger when I wrote this, and I had a tendency to focus more on dialogue than anything else then.

Understood. I tried to write a simple one-shot myself... but ended up writing three decent-length chapters :twilightsheepish:... Can't get a hold of the characters, who make the plot go on. But the dialogue really pushes the plot forward, that's for sure. Nothing like a dialogue-driven plot!.. One doesn't just make it through thanks to dialogues, though.

Login or register to comment