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Pump It Up


Dead, but also undead. It's complicated.

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Pinkie Pie is trying to call for some "meese."


This story was written for the One-Shotober challenges started by CartsBeforeHorses and Redigar. I hope you enjoy!

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Comments ( 18 )

Pinkie, y u so wandom?

Ahahahaha!:rainbowlaugh: Awesome! But them how was there a mousse moose on MMMystery on a train?

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Wait, what? Is it a moose made of mousse? And the moose do exist, it's just they (the "professionals") say they don't.

Not enough mooses

*ahem* Season 2 episode 24, "MMMMystery on the Friendship Express":

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So yeah.

But still a cute story even with that little flub.

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As I have already explained, moose do exist, it's just they (the "professionals") say they don't. People make ice sculptures of mythical creatures and such.

This was just funny.

It was just a fun little story that was just fun to read. Pinkie Pie was completely in character in this story and I did enjoy that, because she's one of my favorite characters and it's nice to see her portrayed to be the fun loving character she is. I don't really know what the Fluttershy scene was about since it really never went anywhere. You could have probably taken that out and it wouldn't have made too much of an impact.

I wish we could have continued on with the whole trying to create a moose thing. I thought that would have been interesting to see. I would have liked to have seen that.

Overall, just a fun story. Have a good day and I'll see you next time. Take care. :pinkiehappy:

Your story has been officially graded an...

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Opal by the Gem Hunters,

Overall cute story. It was simple, yet notably fun to read. No real errors to note from initial glance. Nice job. :twilightsmile:

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“Oh Pinkie,” Twilight sighed as they trotted past a space between two houses. It was a particularly nondescript space, except for one thing.

A moose poked its head out from behind one of the houses and lifted a hoof to its mouth, silently snickering. It quietly called out, “Moooooagoooa!” before going back behind the house.

:rainbowlaugh: Wow XD

So what you could say is that it was a wild moose chase?

Haha! :rainbowlaugh: I'm so funny, hehe... yeah... :ajbemused:

*awkwardly clears throat* Anywho, great story! I immensely enjoyed it and Pinkie was an absolute delight! :pinkiesmile:

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Thanks! And thanks for the fave!

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