Fluttershy sends Angel to a reformation program run by Iron Will.
This story was written for the One-Shotober challenges started by CartsBeforeHorses and Redigar. I hope you enjoy!
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Dead, but also undead. It's complicated.
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BAD ANGEL BAD
sorry i just can not believe iron wil would get overpowered like that so no fav
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Oh, okay. :( There were +30 bunnies; what would you expect? (Sorry I was so blunt.
3277744 still
This sounds interesting, also funny.
Adds to the read list.
Is this a typing error, or is her speech muffled because she picked up Angel with her mouth? If it's the latter, you might want to point that out, as well as modify the rest of her sentence.
Missing some commas.
Pretty sure you meant "paint".
I would make this a single sentence. Rather than a period, I would suggest a dash or even an ellipsis.
My inner eight-year-old thinks this is hilarious.
Without the errors, it's an okay story. I won't be voting either up or down.
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Thanks for pointing out the typos.
Iron Will+30 bunnies= owned XD
Poor guy never stood a chance.