Days of Wasp and SpiderNo humans. In Equestria's past, ponies exist only to serve their creators. One such pony is accidentally released from her mental chains, but how can one mare save herself and her people if she doesn't even know she's a slave?by Luna-tic Scientist
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Final SolutionDirect sequel to Days of Wasp and Spider. SF/no humans: rebellion, mind control, pre-apocalypse.by Luna-tic Scientist
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411549 No, not at all. The irony is that in the post where I said I'd left a comma out, you found a genuine mistake, rather than the deliberate error. Also I forgot to answer your question about Apology: It's almost all true, with the exception of the whole 'hallucination and torture' thing -- and the fact that I'd say 'no' to Celestia (I mean, really!).
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No, not at all. The irony is that in the post where I said I'd left a comma out, you found a genuine mistake, rather than the deliberate error.
Also I forgot to answer your question about Apology: It's almost all true, with the exception of the whole 'hallucination and torture' thing -- and the fact that I'd say 'no' to Celestia (I mean, really!).
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I fail to see the irony. Did I make a comma-related mistake, chapters 9 and 10 are those on which I started pointing out these mistakes, or what?
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The irony is delicious; better make that two missing commas!
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for Luna's sake use the occasional comma - should be
for Luna's sake, use the occasional comma
Now I've had my monthly dose of comma.
On a more serious note, I'll read C9 and 10 later and check what's so great about them. Hopefully I'll spot a comma or two missing!