Oh good lord, this is terrible!
Can't wait to see how Twow riffs this chapter!

......I love it

Co-op mode activated.

Dafuq?

Double the trouble...double the fun...heheheh...

Just how

I'm not sure if this is one of those clopfics that's meant to be ironic, or if it's trying to be genuinely sexy.
I mean, at least if my dick was supposed to shrivel up, then I can say the fic did its job.
For now, I'm keeping it at a downvote.

Nice title that goes perfectly well with the chapter

Ha ha, I don't even know anything anymore.

I cant stop laughing. I can't wait for more.

You direct, Ill fire, then we can swap.

Hey, if one in gets a 1 Up, whats the reward for a double in?

After I read the chapter I thought "What the hell?!" out loud.

The references! Jungling! My lungs!

1: Thank you for the Protoss reference. Although it should have been "Looks like you contructed additional pylons" but thats just me
2:The LoL reference was nice too. Although ganking top sucks. Like a lot. I fucking hate it.

WHY WOULD YOU WRITE THAAAAAAAT?

Still...

~Skeeter The Lurker

keep on going i wanna see how this turns out

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Wow, we agree on a clopfic. I'm surprised. Wanna riff this later?

Eh, I've read stranger. (Queen Twilight Sparkle orgasm-ing eggs into a ponies brain from her vagina tube is sexy).

the end I CANT BREATHE

I YOLO'ed so much...

3547589 I remember that one *shudders* truly terrifying, and yet, strangely sexy.

You, sir, are awesome The chapter was both random and hilarious towards the end.

There was SO much YOLOing in this chapter. Also, she gave birth to a 1-up? How the fuck does that work?

I laugh.

...When did I take acid?

This Is Funny. Can't wait to read more.

I'm so confused Buck it, like!

Clop isn't my thing.

But this amused me.

God dammit, Vic.

... GOD DAMMIT, VIC.

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I fell over laughing xD

BWWWAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHHHAAAAAA!!!! HILARIOUS!

Haha love the game references gg man gg

Oh god, video game references ahoy... That last line was cheesy...

"Looks like you've spawned additional pylons..." Really...

so funny hard not to laugh

starcraft and league of legends reference? yes
hilarious chapter? yes
today is a good day

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So....you think you can just wake up and give birth to a one up huh luna well let me tell you this godess of the moon....where the fuck can i meet you for some of that luner ass!?!

THE REFERENCES ARE TOO MUCH! Do a barrel roll HNNNNG

Good thing it was a 1-up,and not a 3-up moon,Because while that would have made more sense,Itd probably hurt like everliving fuck coming out.....Also,Four buttons is one too many,due to lack of holes

3575820 i hate my brother doing things like that i would never do that type of thing*starts thinking about it*never mind i would want some of that luna ass as well

3577899 You know what I hate? Terms and conditions of use
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Now delete them and nopony will get hurt.(joking, of course)

excellent

damn button you did her good!

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Holy shit man, I read this expecting something tooootally different than that XD 'gamer puns' have taken on a whole new life apparently... Fucking hilarious.

Dots or lol?

Wanna know what I hate? Clopfics. Wanna know what I liked? A clopfic! The execution was well done and the amount of references made me laugh almost every sentence. Wanna know what I like when I give them a shot? Clopfics. I guess it's the world and how it works. Anyways, good fic sir.

Sees first chapters name
Proceeds to laugh ass off.

I loved this, and those references made me thank you