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Whether it is because of fear, anger, or jealousy, Luna feels she has to talk to Twilight Sparkle the day before her transformation. What happens between the both of them could either change their relationship, or ruin it.

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Lazruth

Lazruth #1 · Feb 20th, 2013 · 8 · ·

Pretty good start, I gotta say.

I must admit, I'm... iffy at best about Twilight being an alicorn now. Don't get me wrong, there's tons of potential for story and character development from it, but I'm just worried that those potentials won't be recognized or done well. Guess we have to wait until season four to find out, eh?

khatre

khatre #2 · Feb 21st, 2013 · 5 · ·

Dewey Decibel system ...Is that like the Canterlot Royal Voice system?

King Sombrony #3 · Mar 1st, 2013 · 1 · ·

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Nebula1701 #4 · Mar 9th, 2013 · · ·

ehh I thought this wasn't a one shot when I first read it... now it's marked complete. heh

still awesome.

Cool_Story_Reader

Cool_Story_Reader #5 · Jul 29th, 2013 · · ·

777 views, lucky. Great story

Metroid Prime #6 · Mar 17th, 2014 · · 1 ·

F*** the finalie

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