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FLASHFICTION! Twilight Sparkle is having a depressed moment years after her friends passings and can't sleep, she goes out onto a balcony and is comforted by the princess of the night.

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That was cute :)

2490043 Thank you very much :pinkiehappy:

I appreciate the melancholic conundrum presented by longevity/ immortality, the sharp sense of sorrow for those whom we love, who have shed their mortal forms. The loneliness that often accompanies those with longevity/ immortality. Then, the despair of making new friends, given that in time, they too will pass away, precious bonds shattered by the cruel impartiality of death. But, even in all that, there is hope, in her fellow immortals, and the companionship they share/ offer. And the appreciation of beauty, even after the passage of many years, and made the more poignant and precious, by the sadness and loneliness that loosing precious friends to the embrace of death. The character/ protagonist is made more beloved, by the trials and tribulations in some form or another, for a character that faces, in some way or another, issues/ problems/ dilemma that we face, we can relate and therefore love, than a protagonist that never struggles with any such issue/ problem/ dilemma.

2503534 I believe that you smacked the nail on the head with that one! Great summary, have a moustache for your extensive vocabulary :moustache:

2511960 I wouldn't go as far as to say that :twilightblush: But thank you anyways, my friend :pinkiehappy:

This is amazing. :raritywink:

5966062 Thank you very much kind sir/ma'am

Fuller review here, but in brief: a potentially satisfying, simple scene between Luna and Twilight. Unfortunately it's overwritten, and the song lyrics feel shoe-horned in.

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