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Dyon


We live, we love, we die. Hopefully in that time I can leave something of value, so tonight I type away at my keyboard to clear my head of these stories. I hope you enjoy.


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During a playful conversation two friends accidentally open a portal to a different world and are forced through. They find themselves in Equestria and as ponies which in and of itself isn't terrible, but it turns much worse when they realize that they are children as well. Now they have to figure out a way to outsmart Equestria's Social Services, get along at school, earn a living, and keep up their cover as an independent set of brothers; all while trying to figure out how to get back to Earth or at least make themselves their proper ages again. Puberty sucked enough the first time around.


6/6/2014 Just hit the first time this story has been in the featured box. Thanks everyone for reading and supporting.

Chapters (21)
Comments ( 322 )

Hey, whadda ya know... First to comment... Ahem.

I like this, can't wait for more. You can has :moustache: for making me lol as hard as I have. Seriously this reminds me of some of the weird conversations I've had with a friend of mine. Keep up the awesomeness!

This is hilarious. I cant wait to see how they react to Ponyville!

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I actually started out writing this with a friend of mine, but we dropped it for some reason then I come back and dig it out five months later and finish the first chapter. I don't really write much comedy so I'm glad that at least some people thought it was funny.

2848745 Well if ya ever want a bit of help writing for Pinkie, look me up. Apparently I channel her well :pinkiehappy: Must be because I'm nuttier than a star fish.

Oh my this story is hilarious.i need moar

2849367Can't wait to see how your story turns out. In fact, I've got another one of your stories (The Day it Began) open in a different tab. 100k words, and HiE. I'm definitely reading it when I get the chance... which sadly may not come soon. I start summer school today.:ajsleepy:

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Don't worry about it the stories aren't going anywhere. Good luck at school btw :ajsmug:

2849497Don't really need luck. It's independent study. Meaning I go, they give me a giant fucking packet of work, I come back one week later to take tests, repeat. For about 5 weeks.

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Sounds...fun...:pinkiesick:

2849514Much better than actually going to school every day of the week for eight hours.:ajbemused:

This story pleases me greatly.:pinkiehappy:

Can't wait to see you write more of it.

No idea why I wasn't following you. New stories from you keep getting better and better. And lol, follower #50

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Thanks for the follow

This made me laugh a couple of times. Keep it up, dude!

P4

More please, this is the first fanfic I have read that has a brony go to equestria that I have liked :twilightsmile:

Ah, assholes make for the most fun of friends. :ajsmug:

Hmmm.... hmmm.... hmmm... Read Latered. Normally I would be all over this, but I have faved far too many stories.

I feel this is the start of an amazing journey...:pinkiesmile:

i really like the concept and ideah from the story summary thing under the title and when i read it was hilarious! keep up the good work k? yay!

This is the start of an amazing journey. :rainbowderp:

2858661 I love you profile pic!!! :333

Wow, I'm loving this story! Not only does it follow a path that avoids clichés like I'm sure every HiE reader has thought of but never wrote down, but it's hilarious to boot! Can't wait for future updates. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks, that is actually what I am trying to accomplish with this story.

Well...Shit.
We all know what the conflict is going to be next...

lol can't wait for more

...Rich? Filthy Rich?! Ohhhh snap!
...and that means they will be living with...
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Yeah, boys, keep planning out loud how things usually go in HiE's. I'm laughing at the karmic reversal of tropes because I'm not there, you are. :ajsmug: This is totally getting worth that star and thumb I tossed in. :rainbowlaugh:

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A very important rule.

“Hey don’t make me Kaiba, dude. Actually nevermind I like Kaiba, so I guess that could work. At least that way they shouldn’t separate us which would be a huge benefit right.”

Oh the YGOTAS references I wanna make...

Diamond Tiara now has two adopted brothers? Both of whom know what she's like? Oh shit, this is about to get GOOD.!

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Until they prove to be too damned trouble and Filthy Rich sells them to the next available underground foal merchant...
It'll make a good threat anyway to keep a pair of troublesome boys in line. :rainbowlaugh:

At the very least, we get some fun school shenanigans. And it would simply GALL that stuck up filly, Tiara, if they get to be the next two CMC. Here's hoping they have some fun with Cherri', correcting her again and again during the math/sciency stuff.

Awesome, I don't know why but HiE Age regression stories have really been interesting me. I guess because it has to do with all the stress it puts on the character, New world, New body, and a new age on top. That and with age regression you get to laugh at the disparity between the mental age and physical age as emotions run a muck.

(dont read text after this) you should have pink fluffu unicorns dancing on rianbows to mess with them (now take me seriously:pinkiehappy:) i like this story for the lack a cliches alone! and its funny and creative good job!...... oh and diamond is going to be mind raped so hard soon!:pinkiecrazy:

Now the are in the Rich household with the intent of civilizing them... If they are smart and play their cards right, this can work out. Unfortunately, so far they have not been... :raritywink: -and of course there is that walking monkey wrench in everyone's plans, DT herself...

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Well fuck, here comes the shit storm.
Well even if he didn`t have that outburst she still would have hated him

they should fuck with them and say they killed some one:rainbowwild:

Hmm, from the beginning of this chapter to when they arrived at the mansion seemed a mite rushed.

I've got this weird feeling things are gonna take a decidedly "Pretty Woman" sort of turn here.... Wonder who Filthy went and placed a bet that he could reform two rough and tumble colts with...?

P4

They should use the CMCs to get to AJ, also great story, I hate how everyone has that cliche, basic story where they go to equestria and get what they want, I also like how they use their knowledge of FanFics in the story.

now whats going to happen here,sayyy,is going to be a night to remeber by the amount of wining!:moustache:yes wining,sayyyyyyyyyyy!:moustache:

A dark cover art of a story with the tags Comedy, Slice of Life, and Random. I question the relevance.

very good story so far.
i like it. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

So they]didn't drop that grenade, but there are more they are juggling, next one is school

Heh, I still think it would have been funny if those two didn't put up that charade of hating meat and instead just went at it with gusto... like a human! Raar! Omnomnomnom! :rainbowlaugh:

Hey, didn't they say they lived in the Everfree forest for awhile? Who knows what that place will do to a pair of young, impressionable ponies. Gotta do what you need to do to survive. It turned them into meat-eaters! :rainbowwild:

2958757 Heh. I was half-expecting them both to just grab the meat and bite into like an animal, tearing chunks right off the bulk with jaw strength alone. That would merit a couple of awkward stares and a decent bit of "What? Is there something on my face? Uh... Oh, meat. Ohhhhh. Meat. Yeah."

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