A paramedic for a busy ambulance service saves a young girls life while on the job one day. Afterwards, a gift is given to him from the little girl that she says will "come in handy someday." He appreciatively takes the gift, but had no idea that the little girl was right... Now after an accident that should have ended his life, he wakes up in a world which seems to be his own. But he soon finds out differently.
Now, magically transported to Ponyville, he must learn how things are done and ultimately make this place his new home.
Cover Art by jjamess10
Found a typo in your description.
That comma needs to be removed.
Very good story! Keep up the great work.
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Got it! Thanks!
Great start to story
Thanks so much!!
intredasting
A few errors here and there but a good story nonetheless.
Interesting enough to track.
^^
GRREEEAATTT!!!!
~Tony the Tiger
Either way it's a epic story!
I have only one question:
The tags say this is a Crossover, my question is "With what?"
Fair point! Didn't realize I had that one selected.
Please,
MOAR.
Great story, can't wait to see his reaction to moar ponies.
Wow! Thanks everyone!
dang it, why do these chapters feel so short, looking forward to more ^^
Sorry, trying to keep the chapters short to make the updates come a little quicker.
Hmm.,
Interesting.
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Finally an original HiE. My only complaint is that his emotionnal breakdown only lasted one night. If your entire life would be changed like this, I think that his sanity would become a shadow of its former self.
Anyway, great story and continue like that.
Yay awesome chapter! Keep up the good work my friend!
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Thanks a lot!
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LOL! You got it!
hmm.. I would have thought of something like "Paramedic" or something..
Slow is fine. If the chapter is good and explains backstory that is important to the plot you can move pretty much as slowly as you want and will be forgiven... Especially if there are more chapters out already.
Fucking literal cliffhangers
This phrase seems a little awkward.
I would suggest using '...watched as Spike slowly brought his eyes...'
I just want to question how when rainbow had her wing around him a few chapters ago and he thought ' no I can't have these thoughts, that would be cheating n my wife.' But now he has complete amnesia...
(Also I put wife because I am too lazy to go back and see what her name was.)
Dis story is great and needs more love.
Interesting. also the 40th like what what..
Anyways keep up the good work with this INTERESTING fan-fic it has caught my attention so im hoping for big things from you in the future with this story ok.?
What's with your characters being in the hospital? Anyways loving the story please keep it up!
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How? By the magic of Plot Holes. *echoes*
Actually, that's a pretty fair point. I think that his memories got erased with time, and by that, I mean in few days.
We need a cannon / fanon explanation!
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Your explanation has potential... But I would definitely like something more concrete. Perhaps combining your theory with saying that the ambient magic of equestria sapped his memory so that it goes with his new body. Or it could be the change itself and his new mind is rejecting the old memories and locking them away until he can accept he is in a new dimension... Or something.
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Got no answer? Blame magic. Always work.
I hope that you'll explain the memory loss at some point. Other then that I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work!
slow is ok and fine when you are building up to thing later on too the big event and after and dam i love this
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...Whoa! Thanks!
3248165 you're welcome and i all so love too reed more but we all have a life
Really solid chapter.
Nice work.
What? You are literally having somebody fall off a cliff! How could that bore anybody?
That 'I' shouldn't be a capital.