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Crash Jet

Just a humble brony checking out some of the awesome fanfiction being made!


Everypony has their secrets. Their own 'guilty pleasures' that they try to hide even from those closest to them. What kind of secret does Twilight Sparkle keep to herself, and can she indulge in it when she has the whole library to herself?

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Oh Twilight, you're such a silly filly :rainbowlaugh:

I think I just dropped dead laughing, and now my soul is writing this. :rainbowlaugh:

I saw that picture on DeviantART. I'm gonna check this fic out at some point.

:facehoof: plot twist win

Oh god, I can't imagine twilight dancing the napoleon dynamite dance.

You should submit this to hasbrO, they may actually make an episode On it, seriously, it's amazing

Haha, I've had the goofiest grin on my face all the way through this. I actually managed to keep up with it as the song played, which shows that you're a good pacer when it comes to writing, so congrats to you for that. The thought of Twi actually doing this though is totally freaking adorkable!


Something like this MUST be made into an episode.
I'm Serious.
Think about it, its rated everyone and there is a lesson at the end: TRUE friends would accept you for who you are. :twilightsmile:


That ending sold it. :rainbowlaugh:

Work of art.
Or maybe work of lols

Today, my friends discovered my secret dancing routine. I had been keeping it from them for so long, that I had feared that when they saw just crazy my dancing was, they’d think I was strange and not want to be friends with me anymore.....................

I learned today that while it’s easy to fear what your friends would think of you if they found out your ‘guilty little pleasures,’ your true friends will not only accept it, but maybe even applaud you for it

I can't believe nopony else has noticed this yet. Brony metaphor much?

I reading this just before bed and I know its going to invade my dreams. That ought to be fun. Go Twilight! Dance!

You sir, are a winner and you may have five mustache spikes!

I loved this story. It's pacing was pretty much exactly in time with the music as I read it. 5 stars for you, my good man.

WIN. A simple but fun story.

Submit this to Hasbro and Equestria Daily. NOW!

Take my stars, all of them!

so much awesomeness!


The misdirection.
It's just too perfect. :rainbowlaugh:


... This is the greatest thing I've ever read. :rainbowlaugh:


If an episode can't be made, at least a Flash video must be done.:pinkiehappy:

"I know you can't control yourself any longer
Feel the rhythm of the music getting stronger
Don't you fight it till you've tried it..."

Dance my little ponies! Dance! =^_^=

Well written! It's hard to describe so much continuous action without getting repetitive.

Nice. Happy Valentines/ Hearts and Hooves day everypony!

We are all God, isn't it obvious?

Haha :rainbowlaugh: This was a really funny start to my day.


... The "everyone" rating ruined it, at least partially. I still choked when it started..

And then I grinned. This story deserves to be an episode, or a public service announcement, or SOMETHING. Just too damn cute.

I don't like random fics, but was really good to read it.

This would be a good script for a future episode easily. :D

Ridiculous, hilarious, and a moral anyone in this fandom can appreciate.

I give this fic 5 embarrassed Twilights...


...out of five.

I thought it was gunna be clop fic.. Im sad now:trixieshiftright:

"Ruined"? To me, it didn't seem to be trying to make the reader jump to a false conclusion.


The episodes are flash videos.:trollestia: And someone will make this even if I have to hold a gun to their head while they do so.:pinkiecrazy:

amazing, funny and the song is incredible thanks for the laugh

This was a really entertaining story :heart:. Not what I was expecting, but I liked it a lot :twilightsmile:

Haven't listened to Jamiroquai in ages. Good stuff, although the dancing did go on a while. (I know the song does too, but still.)

Well, nicely written, different, short and sweet; a good idea and well-executed overall. A 4 from me.

...4.5. The song's so darned catchy. Now where'd I put that album...?

oh god, the plot twist :facehoof:

This was great :rainbowlaugh: Very entertaining, very much in the spirit of the show, and just good fun. The moral at the end was a good one, and honestly I can say it brightened my day just to read it. The only real 'issue' I noticed with it was an inconsistency with "feet" and "hooves" in here, but that was so miniscule I may as well have not noticed it. Short, sweet, well-written, funny, and a great premise with a lesson at the end to add to it: be proud because this is more than deserving of 5 stars.

The reply from Celestia... Seriously. :rainbowlaugh:

Have all the stars, you certainly deserve them.
I don't see the reason this couldn't be made into an episode. :twilightsmile:


I meant an unofficial one. Like Magneighto.

More and more fics putting music to go with them. I'm loving this!

Luna doing the conga. . .:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Princess Celestia's reply... Priceless 5/5 good sir :rainbowkiss::twilightsmile:

someone should make an episode
for reals
i loved it
that is all

The only thing I can see for Hasbro not making this an official episode is that it's too short! it took me 10 min to read the whole thing and that's because I read the description of the dance steps, in a video, all that will be reduced to about 5 to 7 mins long.

Still I have a good laugh... :twilightblush:

lol Twilight... Good at dancing? Preposterous. Excellent story. :twistnerd:

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