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Just a humble brony checking out some of the awesome fanfiction being made!

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The peace of Canterlot has been shattered by song. A war within the walls of the castle that will be fought by two immortal sisters. Armed with only their record players and their voices, which one will triumph and will one will fold?

A/N: This story has already more or less been planned out and will be a three part series. Updates will come as chapters are completed. Enjoy!

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Not super fond of song fics, but the idea of the Royal Sisters starting a battle of the bands is quite funny.

Loved this story. Absolutely loved it.

...Why can I imagine the two actually doing something like this?:trollestia:

This is awesome ><

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Because it totally fits in with their canon characterization. Neither princess is above getting into a bit of mischief, and, well, they're sisters after all. :raritywink:

Hahaha, certainly a fun read, great flow and telling. The only thing that kinda stood out as odd for me was the utter and complete lack of ANY speaking from either princess besides their singing. It actually kinda reminded me of one of those Tom and Jerry sketches. Not sure if that's what you were going for or not, just thought I'd mention it :pinkiehappy:

250736 You be correct! Without spoiling anything, you shouldn't expect any sort of spoken dialogue in this story. I'll do my best to describe what their emotions are through their actions and facial gestures, but outside of that, the only dialogue you'll see is singing.

251311
Hmmmmm, interesting, I'm all the more intrigued now. Well, keep up the good work then!

the sun princess figured that maybe Luna wouldn’t play any more Conga for the night. She began to walk back to her room as she suppressed a yawn.

“Come on! Shake your body, baby! Do that conga!”


Son of a

Very funny song choices, and best of luck to you in keeping with that writing style. However, I can only imagine walking on sunshine as sung by Fry, from Futurama. Which in the end, made it that much more amusing for me.

XD XD This... this is just full of awesome and win. Both of them. All the time. XD

I really think that leaving out any spoken dialogue is an amusing and adorable thing to do; the sheer amount of giggles I had imagining Celestia pointing at Luna's record player, then Luna smiling sweetly and showing her the book... Priceless! I can't wait to see the next installment- and also which songs will be used for Volley Number 2! :3

I could see them dragging Ponyville into this for a real battle of the bands type thing.

Cute fic, but you might wanna proofread it a couple times.

"While it was a foalish attempt to her secret hidden, the sun princess figured that maybe Luna wouldn’t play any more Conga for the night. She began to walk back to her room as she suppressed a yawn."

I think there was supposed to be a "keep" somewhere there....

251311 Definitely sounds like a fun idea. i can't wait to see more.:yay:

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