When Spike accidentally sends Celestia an explicit romance novel of Twilight's, Twilight will stop at nothing to get as far away from Ponyville as she can. Of course, it wouldn't make a great story if the whole of Equestria didn't find out, right?
First two chapters set up the story, from then on up it's gonna be longer chapters, more exciting things happening, and "juicy" gossip.
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LET'S DO THIS SHIT, GUYS.
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I honestly can't wait to see where this goes.
Good job, good luck. You've got a reader in me!
...although I'm reminded greatly of Where the Mind Wanders/Where the Mind Roams...
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Aww i wanted to be first...
But anyway...
Good job on this. The only concern is that the first chapter is a bit too short. All in all, it is interesting. I'll fave this so I can see what happens next. (lol England
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inb4 Celestia's gustas pierce the dimensional plane and give the Old Ones multiple planet-crushing orgasms.
But, this is hilarious and awkward, and worth a track. The trauma train has no brakes!
oooooooooohhhh! this seems interesting!
Lesson Zero all over again...
412918 Cthullu, The Great Old One, disaproves of your comment.
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Would that be regular England or ponified England?
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Why not both?
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The name is spelled as... Cthulhu.
I was just pointing out the spelling error.
You might want fix your summary.
Currently it says:
-> Spike sent a romance novel written by Celestia to Celestia which embarrassed Twilight.
Whaaaaaat?
Oh and yes, I know what you mean but you get my drift. :p
...England?
(Yeah, I know they talk about "French" fashion and so on in the actual show. I still got a bit jolted out of the story there.)
Now I am wondering who was in the "romance novel." I don't see how she would be so embarrassed unless Celestia was a major character in it... man that would be awkward.
Bravo so far, and you have a tracker!
Damn this is awesome. You know what would be even more awesome? If it was a Twilestia romance novel she sent.
Visiting england?
Like so?
Good day.
To clear this up, yes, it will be a ponified version of England :)
This I gotta see.
Wowza, I'm one story position away from being in the featured stories banner! Thanks so much everyone ^^
I'm interested lets see how this plays out
Twilight insanity goes off yet again please continue!!!
LOL oh Spike what crazy shenanigans will you and Twi get into this time!!!!! *Audience laughter*
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So a pony version of England or England with ponies in it?
413145 Ok, spelling fail on my part
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OooOo... not really sure yet. I'll decide when the time comes. However, Twilight and Spike are going to pass through a number of different places which are parodies of other cities and countries. Hopefully.
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All will be revealed sooooooon enough
Minor gender mixup (more funny than anything else):
Spike screwed his face in confusion, and could do nothing except watch her closest friend writhe in utter embarrassment and distress.
Basically, Spike seems to switch from boy to girl in mid-sentence.
The Plot thickens, though not that kind of plot!
Meanwhile, Celestia is shopping for scented candles and Kleenex.
But I want that kind of plot to thicken also Sieurin
First rule of fanfiction: You do not send fanfiction.
Second rule of fanfiction: You do NOT send fanfiction.
Aaaaaand things go from bad to worse.
Twilight's either dead or about to be horribly embarrassed in about an hour. Fun times.
This isn't going to end well.
Spotted a mistake:
"Spike, you go ahead and follow behind you."
I think there should be an "I'll" in there
Stereotypical Scottish Character GOOOO!
There's been a lack of scottish characters. I feel my race is sorely underrepresented.
549131 It might have something to do with the haggis.
PRINCESS CELESTIA IS GOING TO READ ALL THE SMUT THAT I WROTE! damn twilight you naughty
This obiviously isnt a letter from Twilight, looks like a fanfic...it probably wasnt meant for me..
READ IT ANYWAY
So... are they gonna visit BUCKingham palace?
So...are they gonna play HOOFgolf now?