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AdamThePony


Gamer, Anime Fanatic, Casual Fan of Horses and Men. Viewer of various shenanigans. Writer of things that really should come easier to him.

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This story seems rather interesting so far. I am looking forward to reading more of it as it comes out. Keep up the great writing!

Really liking this, though I'm curious as to how she would bring the others Into their ranks if she can't let the existanc of the Order be known?

wait a second isn't this the fic that was being talking about being made in a recent forum post describing this but also that celstia is the leader of this group and it's actually some sexual de-devainting group? how come that isn't included in this description?.....

I've seen a lot of "Secret cult with Celestia in the know" stories before. But this is... ratehr cheap. I guess you were going for that. The use of 'stank', cheap jokes, ridiculous powergaming from Celestia, and all the other touches that just scream 'hilarity.'

Seeing other things, especially a Molestia reference, makes me want to give you a thumbs up for a brilliantly subtle satire.

The first chapter was delightfully deviant. The descriptions could be a bit more lurid, but other than that, carry on sir.

2622383 I may add a comedy tag for that purpose, as looking back, there are quite a few gags I cashed in on.

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It's meant to be minimalistic to encourage people to read it.

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This next chapter should have at least one example of how it all goes down.

2623269 ah , i prefer knowing what something is before reading ti to know if it's something i even want to read :l ....

COME ON TWI! FIGHT IT! FIGHT THE MAGIC CELESTIA HAD PUT INTO YOU! YOU CAN DO IT! :flutterrage:

But please do so only after dominating Spike and fucking his mouth/backdoor for like 5 hours, okay? Or 3 hours? At least one? :fluttercry:

Excellent start so far my Dear student. I think Wet will definitly approve. Although I do have to ask in the grand scheme of things is this cult supposed to be good or evil?

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It's supposed to be a good one, but you know what they say about having too much of a good thing. :trollestia:

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Yeah I guess, still hard to say if that's always a bad thing I often feel that quotes overrated :pinkiecrazy: and I'm sure Wet would agree with me. Either way I'll make sure she sees this story.

Lilith, eh?

I guess they're going to start giving birth to ghosts and demons now?

Not to mention spreading chaos, creating infertility, and strangling newborns.

That's the mythology, after all. :raritywink:

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Not the same Lilith, mind you. I just chose the name because it befit the title of a sex goddess best.

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It was thematic, my friend. Not the same Lilith.

2630117 Well, what I mean is, if you're thinking of the best name for a sex goddess, you can't do better than Eros. Lilith has all sorts of very dark and negative connotations associated with her in addition to seduction.

Not to mention ending the world... (Evangelion) :trollestia:

2630140 Oh dear, they're going to start eating foals to become immortal?

I hear that's all the rage these days. :pinkiecrazy:

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Lord, no! There's no gore here aside from a hymen being burst. :rainbowhuh:

2632617 Well, ya know... it's just kinda the 'in' thing in two certain countries... in Asia... that begin with 'C' and 'K'... which I'm going to bombard from space using mass drivers...

:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Awwwwwwwwww, i expectevTwi to fuck her friends into succubis.... :C

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Don't despair. There'll be more to come.

Its been 5 weeks! PLEASE HURRY!

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Believe me; I'm working on it; just trying to find a spark of creativity.

Is it weird that when I first read the title I thought of these guys? api.ning.com/files/4V2ekOB3bB071bKgKRh*oD9SoteHHauGg-MKoSsgTNoXieZQ9jR-9Vcm8DZD74xtO00*L9mPJTB-IHDiQW*EnA__/Tainted_Coil_Symbol___CLEAN_by_itachi776.jpg For those who don't know this is the tainted coil a group of S&M demons who live up to the S&M version.

2995103 nope. :eeyup: Those guys could travel in time by fucking.

Vinyl and Octy, Ace detectives.

Aaaaaww Yeah.

Edit:

Something smells rotten in the state of Pony! :pinkiecrazy:

I like how the second-last paragraph suggests by implication that Fluttershy is no stranger to large orgies.

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Was just going to say the same thing.

i was the like number 100... Something like that did (when i remember it right) never happen to me...
But i would have prefered to be like sixty-nine.
but you can't have everything.
aaand i still play with textsizes...

Well Soon it will be time for Octy and Vinyl to Break out the Crowbars and tomes of Eldritch Knowledge and get to the bottom of whatever dark cult has taken root in Arkham Ponyville.

Comment posted by AdamThePony deleted Jan 24th, 2014

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Never fear; it's still alive; I'm just juggling another fic and this one; Chapter 6 is probably going to be the longest of them all, and as of this writing, it's approaching almost 10k

Let's just say I wouldn't mind being in that orgy!

“My faithful student,” she hummed as her hoof grazed the chin of her recent royal fellow. “What this is, my dear, is my new attempt to spread the magics of friendship and love in a whole new way.”

Makes sense to me:trollestia:!

A quick couple of questions though, if I may: first off, why the mass of tentacles/succubus? Isn't it enough that they work towards that admirable goal on their own? Is Lilith what introduced them to the idea? Also, why does it need to be so secret? Are there prudish ponies who would rail against this cult and stop them? I imagine so; sad state of affairs that there are so many taboos, in fact. Personally, I don't understand how the Abrahamic religions got to be as big as they are, considering how utterly idiotic they are:facehoof:...denying individual rights left and right and saying people who aren't them and refuse to cowtow to their tyrannical deity, or simply have never even heard of him, deserve to burn for all eternity.

Actually, does any of that make sense?

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I was under the impression their will was being somewhat subverted by the tentacle thing.

so im calling that celestia has been hypnotized by the weird tentacles and is being used like a puppet to enslave more ponies to its will so that it can keep feeding long enough to reach its ultimate form and become the space god of everything

they do get stopped and turn back to normal dont they? or does sex win this war

Oh dear, it seems my dear Lilith has some competition.

Some very powerful competition.

Not gonna lie, the ending seems a little rushed. Probably could of used one more chapter.:trixieshiftleft:

The two then proceeded to stand, walking to Twilight's bedroom. As the two of them prepared for another sensuous romp, Twilight placed a sign on the door before closing it.

On the sign read for simple words.

DO NOT DISTURB

BRAINSTORMING

Headcanon accepted. Twi doesn't use a 'sock on the doorhandle' as a 'DND: Getting Laid' sign. She uses that.

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I'm planning a denouement chapter, but as it stands, I wanted to get the important bit of the story done so I could bring it to the readers.

If you need a bonus chapter, how about a small epilogue?

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