... Wut

Not gonna lie, the ending seems a little rushed. Probably could of used one more chapter.

The two then proceeded to stand, walking to Twilight's bedroom. As the two of them prepared for another sensuous romp, Twilight placed a sign on the door before closing it.

On the sign read for simple words.

DO NOT DISTURB

BRAINSTORMING

Headcanon accepted. Twi doesn't use a 'sock on the doorhandle' as a 'DND: Getting Laid' sign. She uses that.

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I'm planning a denouement chapter, but as it stands, I wanted to get the important bit of the story done so I could bring it to the readers.

If you need a bonus chapter, how about a small epilogue?

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That's kinda what a denoument is for.

how about an alternate ending where when Twilight is unable to force Octy to feel anything, so she bucks her away, declares her a freak and decides since everyone else just needs some encouragement they must really be willing. Basically her encounter with Octy instead of convincing her it's rape makes her decide it definitely isn't

I truly loved this story. Also, is it bad that this story made me think of Lilith looking like one of those S&M demons in the Tainted Coil from the video game Brutal Legend?

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Not at all! In fact, 2995103 thought the same thing! It's actually a rather funny coincidence.

4279666 Yeah. I was thinking Lilith might look like one of those Battle Nuns or maybe a Dominatrix.

Something is certainly getting stormed

Something is certainly getting stormed

The ending was hilariously rushed. But overall it was silly to begin with so it sort of fits. I liked it.

I'm a little confused. Did the mane six keep their gifts (twilight with the tentacles, rainbow being same to melt, etc.?)

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Probably, but they keep it private.