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nice start but put more detail into the plot and keep writeing the more you wright the better it gets
The writing picked up this chapter. Also you should make Spike some sort of henchmen or Assistant if you will, too Twilight's perverted and sinister doings.
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That's a good idea, I will consider it
bdsm
Nice spell casting there, hopefully Twilight hits all of her friends and maybe some others too.
I'm keeping my eye on you...
Do no disappoint...
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Uhh i will try not to disappoint, but no promises. there will be some crazy stuff happening late in the story.
Boobies!
I'm a bit miffed at the grammar, but the premise is fun. One question, though. Will she get pregnant? Cause I hope the answer is yes.
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Well grammar wasn't my strongest subject in high school sorry about that, if there is anything in the story that screams, "I can't read this because the grammar here is so bad." Feel free to comment about it and I will go back and edit.
1893108 I'm far too lazy to point anything out, but it could use a little sprucing up. It was mostly fine, though. Nothing horrendous like some of the filth I've read
I would suggest hopping over to one of the editing groups (and composing a well-thought-out letter to them) to see if you can nab one of em.
repercussions sirrah, not re-precautions. auto spell correct is a lying son of a goat. D:
Why does spike have two dicks?
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I based spikes anatomy on the flash game "double the fun" by Buttercup Saiyan.
(Note: game is highly NSFW)
1922422 It is not uncommon for dragons to be treated as squamates, (scaled reptiles). The squamates do not have a singular penis but rather a pair of hemipenes.
IOW: Lizards have two dicks, if dragons are a type of lizard that means....
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Dragons are mythical which means... You could put 3746456 dicks on them so doesn't matter but I just want him to have one.
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well don't worry too much, you wont see spike again in this story for a while with another scene like that.
Thy princess enjoyed this story!
Thou hast been favorited in the royal archives.
Perhaps we shall be in thy story?
Did Twi jsut impregnate Rare? o.o
"I am so exhausted"
"Hey Twilight, you wanna fuck?"