A knight in Shining Armor has never had his metal truly tested.
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I don't think this is my best work. Am I getting favorites for the song?
Make more
6057884 Right away Mr. President. Ya look good for a dead guy.
6057894 lol don't rush it though
6057952 More will come. It may come haphazardly but it shall come.
Awesome...
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La la la la la la la la
La la la la la la la la
Also, this story is amazing! Please make more soon.
I like this story, it's original, there are some epicness, I can understand why you rushed the first chapter, the second was good
however, if you use nudity, be careful to not make it too graphic
Have a good day sir, this story can be a piece of gold if you play well your cards
I love the story so far!! Can't wait for more!!!
MOAR!!!
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Hurry! I can only beat the meat so much!
6059291 This will be a story that happens to have sex in it, rather than a clopfic. So no worries.
6062099 erm....Okay...you do that....
I actully chocked up when i read the part where he gave his Little brother one last Farewell, that scene was just Beautiful.
Hm. This is getting interesting.
6063674 he said his heart hurt but he doesn't have a heart, he's nothing but bones! Skull joke! Yo hoho hoho!
6064026 That reference made my day.
Anyway, great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
6064026 Oh, I'll get to the puns. But the story is rather bare bones at the moment.
6064197 That... had to be... one of the.... single worst puns... I have ever seen............. I LOVE IT!!!
6064212 What can I say? No Guts no glory
This story is...intriguing. I like your writing style but think you should invest in a proofreader/editor if possible. Few minor things here and there. Nothing glaring, but little stuff like the lack of capitalization in
will likely irritate some people. Nitpicky but it can really kill immersion for some and make it harder to read. In any case I look forward to where this will go. Tracking for now, though I see it making favorites very soon.
Also, your username. Helluva song.
6064245 Thanks. Criticism is greatly appreciated, because I can't fix things I don't know about. If you're offering to proofread, I could really use the help.
The sadness if intense in this episode. I shed a man tear at the scene in his little brothers tomb.
6064344 I had to go hug my little brother after writing it.
6064401 I would've hugged my little bro but it would be weird if I just drove over to give him a hug, plus I don't have a car.
6064212 if you liked that one, wait till he 'marrows' the story down.
I'm sure we'll all find it quite 'humerus'!
Yo ho ho ho ho ho!
6064219 but he has no guts, he's nothing but bones!
Skull joke!
6064485 There is going to be so much Brook jokes during this story.
Woooohoo yeah drauger life for ze winz!
You have my attention, have a fave
Yay a draugr that doesnt what to kill you just be friends
Good god the chapter seems so short after reading a 11 thousand word chapter...
That quote at the end!
It's great that he finally got his voice back. Loved that quote at the end! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
He's got his mojo back! Now he can fully enjoy all them mares!!
*Bows* Thanks for all the support! However, I am serious. Some cover art that ain't some random stock photo would be nice.
6081449 a drauger pic would pic Nicely if i do say so myself
6086710 They don't have the armor I described. Besides, I don't want to use stock photos.
6086733 fan art drauger friend the armor you want and other stuffsiz
6086776 warriorsfortheworkingday.com/images/drawings/houscarlclear.jpg This is the armor. Draugr wear that dumb chestplate that doesn't cover the midriff
6086812 the armor ze draugers Wear is ancient and worn down to a Shell of it's former glory you know.
This latest chapter fills me with sadistic glee.
A little short, but still good.
A feeling of cold, unrelenting fury filled my gut (at least, it would have if I wasn't mostly skeletal)
SKULL JOKE!!!!
6120722 That's what the gore tag is for. Worry not, There will be much gratuitous violence directed at the morally corrupt and easy-to-hate bad guys.
6120734 I just looked up brook because of all the references you made. I have a new favorite character.
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There already were Brook jokes at the beginning of the story. How did you not know who Brook is (or was because he's already dead)!!! I'm so mad I can just scream until my lungs burst!!! Ah but I don't have any lungs because I'm a skeleton. SKULL JOKE!!!
6121144 Because I never really got into one piece. (I lost my place like 60 episodes in and after a week of searching I couldn't find it. I eventually just gave up.) the "Brook jokes" you keep talking about in the story are actually products of my own terrible sense of humor. I figure a dead guy would make the best of a bad situation with a bit of humor.
Nothing warms my heart more than Reading about scum finally getting what's comming to them, a lovley, slow,dragged out DEATH!
This just makes me hate slavers even more, good job
Good on ya kill all slavers.