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Silly, but awesome.
Man I love to see Celistia face if she walked in on them
Your story was great and funny, I hope you keep writing and do not leave it halfway. I wish you luck.
Sincerely, your new fan Mattgenesis.
PS: Sorry for my english.
5782671 Thank you for those kind words, young one. I will continue to submit chapters whenever I can when I have free time.
the story is nice but cant help feeling that at some points it is a remake of the that displaced fic about gilgamesh, mighty warrior of epicness i think it is called, regardless of that the story is nice lets just hope the mc doesnt become another gary stu
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I somewhat doubt about the Gary Stu bit, whoever he is. Nice comparison about Gilgamesh though. Didn't really think about it until now. I've been somewhat of a fan and the Displaced series gave me an idea on how to introduce Dragonok into the MLP Multiverse. Just wait until he finds a couple of his allies from his home multiverse later on.
I can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
Love it
^^ nice work, I'm awaiting more chapters soon ^^~
5911819 Thanks, mate!
You mixed the words Sentinel with Sentient in couple of places
5913306 Thanks for pointing those grammar errors out! I really appreciate it! By the way, great reference! I love it!
i would post Warhammer 40k here, but then it would be heresy.
PUPPIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Brilliant Fluffle Puff reference
5967181 Thanks!
*sudden evil laughter*
well I don't know how to word that in English but in German it is called "Freifahrtschein"
Just say so and I will come up with any number of entities you can desire
Example: 'The coherent Onion of fade' a Onion but with a own immaterial mind, a very powerful and clever magician that will satisfy your need to eat for all eternity if you just eat a little bit of it... at least if you survive the backlash that comes from biting a chunk out of someone...
Critic:
Aris Flashback happens a little bit too sudden you don't know that it is a Flashback; something like "Aris remembers back than it was hard, until this one fateful day."
5970764 Give it your best shot, mate! I have some ideas of my own but additional ammunition would be greatly appreciated.
this chapter is almost exactly the same as Gilgamesh's
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Check the comments below for an explanation. Hope it helps!
I'm sorry for the lewdness but did they just give pinky a party orgasm don't read this if you don't want inepropriateness.
5986617 No, but that is interesting to imagine. It's just her Party Sense going on overdrive, that's all.
5986622 I know I'm just tired to my imagination is on overdrive and that's what it seemed like
nice nice ^^
So I suppose, you want more evils ^^
That can be arranged ^^
5987597 Whatever floats your boat, mate.
Trollestia getting trolled by a chaos being... =
5985007 doesnt make it any less awesome
Damn. Your poety is awesome!!!!!!!!!!
6054245 We thank thee for thy kind compliment. We sincerely appreciate the gesture.
If i find time tomorrow I will add some more stuff ^^.
But Daemon styled and in an black elegant dress, that would be rather interesting *grins idiotically*
Okay, I know i still have five chapters to go, but to hear an almost omnipowerful shadow wielding being use the word "nummiest" just made me lose my shit
Man I like the story so far but it needs more sex scenes
Keep up the good work see you next chapter
5779857 I agree entirely.
more story?
6665423 It's currently in-progress but I have to also deal with my part-time job and a ton of college work. Sorry for making you wait.
A little late but... First
A little later than this guy 6782199 << but... Second
*le gasp*
Origin story link not working.