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Spartan889
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Meh. It's alright. However it's the same thing as your other stories. Go to Comic Con. Meet Merchant. Transport to Equestria as that character. Now I don't hate the story but your stories to me are getting repetitive. Keep up the good work though.
6700065
Thanks and I'll keep that in mind.
Death... Gun?
I'm not even going to try. 
6700126
You watch Sword Art Online?
on one hand cool on the other
EVERYONE OUT OF THE UNIVERSE!!
but all together my thoughts on this story can be summed up with this memememeblender.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/08/Joseph-Ducreux-cool-story-bro.jpg
Just some quick revisions on the long description, friend.
6700129 I watched the original in English and the second in Japanese. if pinkamena is in this world who is the element of laughter?
6700717
Oh she is the element of laughter. Is just that, this is her 2nd job. Meaning the hyper active pinkie works at day time while the murderous pinkie works at night.
I actually like this fanfic. The story reminds me a lot of classic 90's comics (the ones where you have anti-heroes packing heat) and I like that, since it shows that just because the Displaced is Death Gun doesn't necessarily make the story the same tone that the original Death Gun had and that it depends on who the person wearing the costume rather than the costume itself.
I'm really interested in seeing more of this, including the criminal that the merchant spoke of. Also, if you don't mind, I'll point out some minor typos:
Think there might be some words missing there.
Emphasis mine.
Other than that, good story so far.
Any particular reason you couldn't come up with a title for your own displaced fic, and used mine instead?
6700803
wait what?
changed and sorry about that.
6700874
It's not against the rules or anything so you're fine, it just feels a little distasteful is all.
6700803 I just looked through your stories and I didn't see one of yours with that name, so it's free game for him to use.
I'm curious on who this Displaced is.
6701185
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/178610/i-will-hunt-you-down
6701262 Stall not the story name.
6701445
I don't think you're understanding entirely what happened.
Before this story name became 'The Mantle of Death' it was 'I will hunt you down."
I'd recommend not stepping into a problem you only know half of.
6701459 If you're not using the name anymore than it's still free game to use. Also when are you going to update that story?
6701498
I never said that it was not free game to use, though copying the title of another author's work is generally considered bad etiquette.
6701512 But you never said that it was your title and that it was only for your own use.
6700726 Can't wait to of the Elements to be sent after Death Gun
when i hear of kitchen knife in a world of magical little ponies i think that it is the equivilent to a butter knife
Well, now I need to start paying attention. Lance is in even more trouble
6718764
Indeed he is. Now Lance needs to watch out for Death Gun and the members of Laughing Coffin.
6718844 Oh trust me... He's ready. He's got some new tools he's ready to play with.
Excellent chapter.
6700129 I don't know what that is...
Stay awesome mate.
Please tell me this mosquitoes were combined with some other animal. If they were this is what I think is happening. IMPOSSIBLE CREATURES!!!!!
Can you do more please
i did not expect stuff from one punch man to show up here. and is gremmy the one quincy that uses imagination from bleach?
maretropolis ghoul was deleted i believe cause when i checked the link, it says there wasn't anything there. when i check the author, they were still there but not the story. you might want to check that out.
Something
He said with a glee and pulled the trigger
U dead?