wait a second isn't this the fic that was being talking about being made in a recent forum post describing this but also that celstia is the leader of this group and it's actually some sexual de-devainting group? how come that isn't included in this description?.....
I've seen a lot of "Secret cult with Celestia in the know" stories before. But this is... ratehr cheap. I guess you were going for that. The use of 'stank', cheap jokes, ridiculous powergaming from Celestia, and all the other touches that just scream 'hilarity.'
Seeing other things, especially a Molestia reference, makes me want to give you a thumbs up for a brilliantly subtle satire.
Excellent start so far my Dear student. I think Wet will definitly approve. Although I do have to ask in the grand scheme of things is this cult supposed to be good or evil?
2624211 Yeah I guess, still hard to say if that's always a bad thing I often feel that quotes overrated and I'm sure Wet would agree with me. Either way I'll make sure she sees this story.
2630117 Well, what I mean is, if you're thinking of the best name for a sex goddess, you can't do better than Eros. Lilith has all sorts of very dark and negative connotations associated with her in addition to seduction.
2632617 Well, ya know... it's just kinda the 'in' thing in two certain countries... in Asia... that begin with 'C' and 'K'... which I'm going to bombard from space using mass drivers...
Let's just say I wouldn't mind being in that orgy!
“My faithful student,” she hummed as her hoof grazed the chin of her recent royal fellow. “What this is, my dear, is my new attempt to spread the magics of friendship and love in a whole new way.”
Makes sense to me!
A quick couple of questions though, if I may: first off, why the mass of tentacles/succubus? Isn't it enough that they work towards that admirable goal on their own? Is Lilith what introduced them to the idea? Also, why does it need to be so secret? Are there prudish ponies who would rail against this cult and stop them? I imagine so; sad state of affairs that there are so many taboos, in fact. Personally, I don't understand how the Abrahamic religions got to be as big as they are, considering how utterly idiotic they are...denying individual rights left and right and saying people who aren't them and refuse to cowtow to their tyrannical deity, or simply have never even heard of him, deserve to burn for all eternity.
so im calling that celestia has been hypnotized by the weird tentacles and is being used like a puppet to enslave more ponies to its will so that it can keep feeding long enough to reach its ultimate form and become the space god of everything
Hmm... interesting setup^^ Though I wonder how Celestia succumbed t this in the first place (or where she got her hypnotic powers). I mean I doubt that Celestia would just let herself be tentacle raped by some weird thingie and then accept it as her new lord and master. Also, I wonder what Lilith actually is. (most clicheed yet fitting nae btw^^) If you're staying true to the original myth then she's a demon but demons are usually pretty rare in Equestria^^ That would speak volumes about Celestia though^^ Being broken and made slave by a lousy little demon^^
This story seems rather interesting so far. I am looking forward to reading more of it as it comes out. Keep up the great writing!
Really liking this, though I'm curious as to how she would bring the others Into their ranks if she can't let the existanc of the Order be known?
wait a second isn't this the fic that was being talking about being made in a recent forum post describing this but also that celstia is the leader of this group and it's actually some sexual de-devainting group? how come that isn't included in this description?.....
I've seen a lot of "Secret cult with Celestia in the know" stories before. But this is... ratehr cheap. I guess you were going for that. The use of 'stank', cheap jokes, ridiculous powergaming from Celestia, and all the other touches that just scream 'hilarity.'
Seeing other things, especially a Molestia reference, makes me want to give you a thumbs up for a brilliantly subtle satire.
The first chapter was delightfully deviant. The descriptions could be a bit more lurid, but other than that, carry on sir.
2622383 I may add a comedy tag for that purpose, as looking back, there are quite a few gags I cashed in on.
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It's meant to be minimalistic to encourage people to read it.
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This next chapter should have at least one example of how it all goes down.
2623269 ah , i prefer knowing what something is before reading ti to know if it's something i even want to read :l ....
COME ON TWI! FIGHT IT! FIGHT THE MAGIC CELESTIA HAD PUT INTO YOU! YOU CAN DO IT!
But please do so only after dominating Spike and fucking his mouth/backdoor for like 5 hours, okay? Or 3 hours? At least one?
Excellent start so far my Dear student. I think Wet will definitly approve. Although I do have to ask in the grand scheme of things is this cult supposed to be good or evil?
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It's supposed to be a good one, but you know what they say about having too much of a good thing.
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Yeah I guess, still hard to say if that's always a bad thing I often feel that quotes overrated and I'm sure Wet would agree with me. Either way I'll make sure she sees this story.
Lilith, eh?
I guess they're going to start giving birth to ghosts and demons now?
Not to mention spreading chaos, creating infertility, and strangling newborns.
That's the mythology, after all.
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Not the same Lilith, mind you. I just chose the name because it befit the title of a sex goddess best.
2630049 Uhm... Eros...
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It was thematic, my friend. Not the same Lilith.
2630117 Well, what I mean is, if you're thinking of the best name for a sex goddess, you can't do better than Eros. Lilith has all sorts of very dark and negative connotations associated with her in addition to seduction.
Not to mention ending the world... (Evangelion)
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Kind of the point. You'll see why.
2630140 Oh dear, they're going to start eating foals to become immortal?
I hear that's all the rage these days.
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Lord, no! There's no gore here aside from a hymen being burst.
2632617 Well, ya know... it's just kinda the 'in' thing in two certain countries... in Asia... that begin with 'C' and 'K'... which I'm going to bombard from space using mass drivers...
Let's just say I wouldn't mind being in that orgy!
Makes sense to me!
A quick couple of questions though, if I may: first off, why the mass of tentacles/succubus? Isn't it enough that they work towards that admirable goal on their own? Is Lilith what introduced them to the idea? Also, why does it need to be so secret? Are there prudish ponies who would rail against this cult and stop them? I imagine so; sad state of affairs that there are so many taboos, in fact. Personally, I don't understand how the Abrahamic religions got to be as big as they are, considering how utterly idiotic they are...denying individual rights left and right and saying people who aren't them and refuse to cowtow to their tyrannical deity, or simply have never even heard of him, deserve to burn for all eternity.
Actually, does any of that make sense?
4048268 Me too and Im a guy
so im calling that celestia has been hypnotized by the weird tentacles and is being used like a puppet to enslave more ponies to its will so that it can keep feeding long enough to reach its ultimate form and become the space god of everything
Hmm... interesting setup^^ Though I wonder how Celestia succumbed t this in the first place (or where she got her hypnotic powers). I mean I doubt that Celestia would just let herself be tentacle raped by some weird thingie and then accept it as her new lord and master. Also, I wonder what Lilith actually is. (most clicheed yet fitting nae btw^^) If you're staying true to the original myth then she's a demon but demons are usually pretty rare in Equestria^^ That would speak volumes about Celestia though^^ Being broken and made slave by a lousy little demon^^