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AdamThePony


Gamer, Anime Fanatic, Casual Fan of Horses and Men. Viewer of various shenanigans. Writer of things that really should come easier to him.

Comments ( 22 )

>bad grammar in the summary
>first person human clop

Downvoted without reading.

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I may go back and do some revisions on this one, to try to make it a bit longer and more substantial. I did this over the course of a night, and I wasn't really thinking that hard. I will revise this.

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Can't really call it clop.

Added Dark Category. Honestly, I should have done this first.

Oh Yawnarama. But if your gonna continue this at least make a little more realistic outcome. Avoiding Luna, looking at her with disgust, wishing to go back. That is if you want to continue with Celestia. Just sayin, even I get bored sometimes.

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I have plans for a Molestia follow up...

>Switches between human and pony with no reason why.
>Don't know what's going on half the time
Downvoting like a Boss.

i found myself getting cconfused between the human and pony switching but other than that i liked the story

I kept getting confused. His name is Adam, he is supposed to be human, yet he keeps being referred to as a pony.

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He's a Human In Equestria. IE, he was ORIGINALLY human, but BECAME a pony.

..... I love Luna she best pony, but rape... Ok fine it was good. :pinkiehappy:

This is amazing! Make more, please! I eagerly await thou posting of the new addition.

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Boom. This sequel is 20% kinkier with 120% more Molestia.:trollestia:

>>AdamThePony OH MY CELESTIA!!! THANK YOU!!!

Decent. The rape thing was kind of annoying. I was almost pissed at the main character for not enjoying it more and almost acting like a baby.

Ah well, please continue.

545649 Once again, it already has a sequel: By The Dawn's Early Light

i was okay with this until it got to " I have a wife and daughter" then i'm like Luna you little shit
i will go grab my spartan laser and will finish you

*author's called "adamthepony"
*story is written in first person
*The description already contains poor syntax
Let me guess, the protagonists is called Adam, isn't it?

7612653 Don't act like you never wrote a story starring yourself. :rainbowwild:

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Nope, never have, and I could get you a wide and long list of writers who haven't either. Or if they did; they weren't shameless wish fulfillment stories, were subtle about it at the very least, or never actually published them.

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There are very few stories I've ever removed from publication on this site. I can only name one, and that was because of the fact it was both an objective failure and a story I had no idea how to properly write.

Even these embarassing wish-fulfillment stories aren't bad enough for me to remove. They more serve as a mark of where I've come as an author.

Then again, I could just be trying to justify the actions of my silly younger self to try and keep myself from having an adult existential crisis.

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