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DickDastardly


Writer of truly pornographic shorts. If you let your kid read my stuff, you are a bad parent. I don't feed the trolls.

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Very well done, I like it. The psychology behind what can only be described as the perfect example of a willing red collar was very good.

Uummm know your place?!

Loved it, Great work!

Hilarious. This is so over the top that it's not even porn anymore.

We need a sequel of this, Twi the breedingwhore of Shining :p

awesome i was looking for some FOE to read and fap too

SEQUEL! PLEASE! SOON! NOW!

Oh god you know whats my only problem is with FE (not calling it FOE because it stands for fallout equestria) is that its rape because unlike you people who get aroused by it but i dont get aroused by rape and honestliy i did get a bit sick reading this (this comeing from the guy who watched 2 girls one cup and elfin lead back to back without flinching) i would much prefer if it was just mindless sex

Jeez Louise, Dick! I know that loosing the Wacky Races every time gets on your nerves, but this isn't the way to relieve the stress of it!

Nah, just kidding! Great work there, my friend! Keep it up!

“I’ve been wanting this since the fall, Twily. When I saw you paraded in front of the Caribou with your fresh red collar. When I saw them training you. When I came to buy from Spike and saw you lapping his cum up off the floor. I relished every bit of your fall, Twily, relished seeing the family favorite realize what a worthless cunt she really is!”

“Fucking bitch. Not so high and mighty now are you? Just another stupid cunt, like your sister-in-law, or that worthless mare you called a teacher!”

With these word choices, and Shining's focus on his family, I thought we were going to be leading to something bigger concerning his character, like maybe he's always harbored feelings of impotence and resentment. He became royalty by marrying into it, and even in the show, it seems like it's only Cadence who gets the special treatment. She gets a throne, a crown, regalia, alicornhood (immortality?), and access to meetings where the fate of Equestria is decided. And then his SISTER gets all of that! Apparently, she was just more worthy! Of course! Just look at all of those dangerous missions that she went on and got got lauded for, instead of someone from the actual military getting assigned to protect Equestria!

This sir was awesome. I demand another!

4745111 FOE doesn't stand for Fallout Equestria.

Hot! :heart: I'm curious to see how Spike gets to be in possession of Twilight, based off a few things I've read or my own thought on how he becomes her owner, including this with her breaking from a black/whatever to red, even if she's gotten off to some of the sex stuff in Twilight Falls. So she's kinda giving in, but not fully there yet.

Anyway, not a bad little story even if not sure how 'accurate' some of this is with Twily training other female ponies/whatever to be slaves, if they're already willing or mostly not. And the taking by her brother, as I hoped would be in this story by the tags of Shining Armor and Cadence! Though unfortunately Cadence wasn't in much of a scene, but still surprising to see her here! Even if you used the name of a toy pony, if memory serves... well, still nice! And almost like a friendship lesson at the end, even if it wasn't actually being taken down. :twilightsmile:

now this is a proper FoE fic.

no 'resisting the corruptive magics of the caribou

no half-wuss supporting the black collars and rebel scum.

just a stallion fucking his good little toy.

Kleora #17 · Dec 5th, 2014 · · 7 ·

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Then don't fuck read it. Content like this isn't out here for people who don't enjoy it, it's out here for people who do. Don't read something you know very well you dislike, and then come and bitch about it. The same could be said to you, 4682483 . I see your hate comments on almost all FoE stories. No one is forcing you to read them, and if you had two brain cells to rub together you'd stop reading and commenting on them. Literally all you're doing it trying to antagonise the people who actually appreciate these stories. Everyone has their fetishes, so bite your tongue and leave them be.

“Damn, it’s like shoving a hotdog down a hallway. I don’t know why I don’t get rid of you and trade you in for some younger, prettier filly. Maybe one without a disgusting horn scar or those hideous things you used to call wings.”

The story doesn't say it but, are Twilight's wings encased in a pair of wing cases?

5558517 well yeah kinda obvious

this is sick really

I would think there would be 1 rank above red which is for compliant but cooperative mares. Mares that have their servitude so drilled into them they no longer need reminders and can actually be trusted to be intelligent and independent. They can actually talk to their masters and advice them. They can even talk back if they think their master is going to make a bad decision. Of course if the master insists they will stand down.

I do like your more balanced writing. Some masters would indeed have a strong fondness of their slaves. This was also so historically.

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One thing I always do find weird is that they say mares are worthless so often. After all if this is a commonly accepted fact they wouldn't say it. They would just say 'mares' especially since they are worthless in a relative sense. They aren't truly worthless of course.

I still find it strange they keep using nicknames like Cunt and such. Wouldn't names be simply easier? Or at least unique nicknames? That way you can call them the same thing every time.

“Nonsense! Every mare is for sale.” Shining got up, walking over towards Twilight. He was massive, in both senses of the word. “Besides, I’m your best customer, and your best supplier. You can at least let me test drive your floor model here.”

Well if mares belong to stallions then that is Spike's call to make. If he decides she is not for sale than she isn't.

Before she knew it, the entire world was a blank whiteness, the blast of orgasm overwhelming her every system. Before The Fall, Twilight had known some magics to provide something approaching this level of clarity, but nothing was like the feeling a male could give her with his cock, especially when properly coupled with appropriate levels of pain and abuse. She imagined this was what a blank must feel right before her emotions and personality were stripped away -- absolute, beautiful clarity of purpose, position and value. Even as she came down, she knew that everything was right, everything was perfect. She knew that she was a worthless cunt, that her enslavement was the greatest gift that could ever be bestowed on one as low as her, and that she had no higher calling than the pleasure of the males around her. No drug, no spell, no act of friendship or magic had ever made her feel as good as she did now.

The new religion of Equestris (2257256 on derpi).

Before she knew it, the entire world was a blank whiteness, the blast of orgasm overwhelming her every system. Before The Fall, Twilight had known some magics to provide something approaching this level of clarity, but nothing was like the feeling a male could give her with his cock, especially when properly coupled with appropriate levels of pain and abuse. She imagined this was what a blank must feel right before her emotions and personality were stripped away -- absolute, beautiful clarity of purpose, position and value. Even as she came down, she knew that everything was right, everything was perfect. She knew that she was a worthless cunt, that her enslavement was the greatest gift that could ever be bestowed on one as low as her, and that she had no higher calling than the pleasure of the males around her. No drug, no spell, no act of friendship or magic had ever made her feel as good as she did now.

I'm really curious of the ponies religious landscape now after realizing cock worship puts them in a religious trance. :twilightsmile:

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