2739484

tmi man.

damn....

I only have one extra word to say.

Sequel?

2783451
Got a lot of projects I'm working on at the moment (okay, really just one big story that has to be completed before I post it).
I was considering throwing something together for Father's Day, but I couldn't do it justice, so I was reluctant to push it out.
However, I'm not going to rule anything out.
And as far as incest fics go, there will be plenty more where that came from, considering I'm a full blown (lol, pun intended ) member of Incest is Wincest!

Good show. I applaud thee. Ending was a tad abrupt, though.

The entire thing... Kinky and beyond.

I loved it.

~Skeeter The Lurker

2783508
Perhaps that's true.
This chapter did go through a lot of editing (all done myself. In the future I probably won't be so arrogant as I've already gotten a few opinions on my next story, but I didn't want to get an editor halfway through and change the "tone" of the fic) as its original size was around 6,000 words cut down to 4,000.
Maybe the editor in me got the better of my artistic side, but I felt there was a limited number of ways to say: "Today I learned that I like having sex with my family ."
I didn't want to drag the reader though all those different ways I could say the same thing so I tried to end it with a memorable scene and line.
After all, this was mostly a fic for clop's sake so I think it's kind of an appropriate ending.

2783559 Also, I didn't find it very clear- Is this anthro?

2783627
Heh, heh, heh...
Busted, it's not really anthro (I mean the picture is and everything) I wrote them as ponies. However, imagination is a powerful thing.
I'm a firm believer that everyone can interpret art differently. And though the intentions of the author might have been different, who am I to tell someone how they should enjoy my work?
So yeah, whatever anyone wants to clop to is fine. But I guess so far all my work has been pony only.

2783506
You mean like the whole thing is just a dream in a supposed Twilight's comatose state? Lol, that type of ending would be so mean. Such a cock-tease.

Pregnancy perhaps?

this isn't normal incest it is WINCEST at a very high level well done

This story is glorious!!!
Can I have a chorus for such occasion plz?

Close enough...
Please make more wincestfics like this and I will be forever grateful!
keep up the epic work my good sir.

Yours truly... NecromancerX69

Ps... I am watching you.

Another great chapter!

This is the work of Slaanesh!

Good job.

2783672
Ahhhh... That's one way to make me have an amazing orgasm. Good job, Mate! 5 star clop!

gonna start chapter three soon :D

It seems a little too sudden for me, but this is some fine wincest.

2838272
Exactly. Hey big brother, what are we gonna do on the bed? --> POMF

It was built up soo much, only to have both of the male orgasms glossed over! They need to be fleshed out a bit more, more detail and attention. All things considered, those were kinda important story...
climaxes.

2849938
Ah, keeping things short and sweet: my arch-nemesis.
I guess I'll bore the comments section with a little insight on my writing process.
My intention was to keep this within "one-shot" range. Chapter two really disrupted the "flow" of the story, going back to the past, but I thought that it was necessary for plot development.
Then in chapter three, things just went on, and on, and on. At least that's how I felt when editing. I constantly asked myself: when are they gonna just do it?
So yeah, maybe I came up short in a few areas, but sometimes you've gotta let things go... *cough* excuses *cough*

In all seriousness though thanks for the feedback. And a thanks to everyone else who also took the time to read (and hopefully enjoy). Stallions gotta get love too.

This greatly appeals to my latest fascination with incest. Thank you.

3164762
Then I think you're going to like it around... *Ahem* HERE *Cough* lol

2783532 just gotta say. I did a double take on your profile pic.
at first I was like

I'm really interested as to how this would affect Twilights social life, especially her closest friends. I mean I know the fic is already completed, but it's a thought.

Gud, butt needs more proofreeding

that's weird , i came across this fic a long time ago , but i never read all of it? maybe it wasn't completed when i first saw it?....

Applause is in order here. Bravo. Might want to have a proofreader give it a once-over, though. Found some misused words here and there (not many though).

2783400 indeed.

Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
of ten
Good ummmmmmmmmm..............grammer.
ME GUSTA

I'm confused if this is anthro or not...

4182130
Honestly it was written intended for the ponies to be just that, ponies.
But, I don't think I went out of my way to explicitly go against the cover on this one. dl.dropbox.com/u/21167245/FiMFiction/Emoticons/misc_Octy_something.png
Therefore, I'd prefer to let imaginations to believe whatever they'd like to believe...
Even if that's a little convenient of an excuse.

4182386

You just made me flip my shit :|

~unf~

mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw2626-RDWingboner.gif

Yes I love it

Awesome, I would like to see more ^^

I wish less people liked anal Every time someone/pony licks, prods, or penetrates an anus, I keep thinking of shit and my Bonner goes bye-bye.

Anyways, the story was great and I really did enjoy it.

we need more sparklecest in these parts

..... Why...WHY?!! What could've possibly come over you to write this?!!!

I mean it's.. wrong. But whatever. Greeks did it, and it also happened in a passage in the bible. No, seriously. If any of you take a minute, and actually skim over it, you'd find tha it contains some of the dirtiest stuff in it.

Ain't nothing wrong with a little bit of Sparkle-cest.

Good job, keep up the good work and keep writing more.

A very satisfied reader,

Mist.

why is this in all the rape folders now?

6648273 I would also like to know.

ok, so..umm..I need to ask...how is this in any way considered rape. You know, except in the minds of the most closed minded of people. is it the "All Incest is Rape" nonsense?

Yo I'm with them. I was looking through the Rape folders and this one was in all of them. I thought JACKPOT but so far everything is 200% consensual. What gives?

......cdn.leagueoflegends.com/stickers/slayer140/slayer-pantheon-thumbs.png

Night Light and Twilight Velvet character tags are now available.

why is there no anthro tag?