You always got to watch out for Freudian Ice. If you slip, you may slip under the covers with your sexy, sexy mother.

well, im glad this aint overly cloppy. some authors just go too far with it. urs was just nice, coming from a non-clopper :D

Not bad. Do more pl0x.

You were in the clopfics group for the mothers day post, weren't you?

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Hey, if you can't keep it in the pants, keep it in the family.

Tempting....

Mother's day was the death of me. Though this clopfic didn't make it seem all that bad, besides the fact that I spent the whole Sunday walking 16 miles to the beach by myself, no food, no water, no money, but i can still say, what a great mother's day.

Whoa! There's incest? I feel as if somehow I had no warning as to the content of this story. The name is incredibly misleading, and there's not even a warning in the description. -420 points

BOING

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>>>/ponychan/

I am okay with this... carry on...

This was a great start!

Must have MOAR!!!

I'm ok with this.

This is a good start to an interesting story.

Hey everybody. Again sorry for the poor correspondence, it's just I've been traveling a lot lately and hardly have time to nail down a sufficient internet connection.

But, now that I have time, let's take a look into the mailbag...

2570676 Hmmm, lol, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Of course this one was for the clop, but it's good to know it was a readable story as well. Thanks!

2570912 Aha, the great founder of the illustrious wincest group. I was going to add this story after it was done, but looks like someone did that for me! As you can expect more is on the way, but for now I'll leave this here: becasue a little group promotion never hurt anyone.

2570974 Yeah, you caught me. For those of you who don't know this is what spawned all the bad ideas going on around this site lately. So yeah chalk up another one to Regidar for the inspiration...

Speaking of which 2575396 the man himself. Sorry I didn't drop you a line when I put this up, but I see you found your way here regardless. Allow me to extend an additional thank you for starting that amazing thread. The stories resulting from it have chaffed my dick raw really been a great addition to the site.

Well that's all I suppose. Thanks for the likes, views, and favorites, it's much appreciated. I'll be sure to post the next part when finished, but I will likely be traveling so not sure when you can expect it. For now, I hope my continued thanks and appreciation is enough.
IRpony out!

2578707 I'm responsible for all these incest fics?
All right!

2578707 You got to the idea before I could

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I've said it before and I'll say it again:
There can never be too many incest fics. Especially with Twi's mom. What a milf...

2578898 Touche...
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well it was bound to happen

Hot. More please! : )

C'mon, more! This is hot!

He worried that his efforts, including the part were he had gotten up early in order to cook, had gone to waste.

I think that's supposed to be "where."
I could be wrong, though.

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Shhh, don't tell anybody...
(but seriously, thanks. It's fixed now. I'm always bad with that. You'dve thought I'd sound out my words by now. Have a )

2582693 Okay, my lips are shut!

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Are you whispering things behind our backs?

2582768 Lol.

2582771 Damn it man run, he's onto us!
2582768 No, of course not. Lol, whatever gave you that idea?

(Though I'd like to say in all seriousness if you find an error in the story, I welcome you to point it out. That way I can go back an fix it. No one's perfect, but you got to try to be professional you know...

2582818 Along the lines of the second part of your comment, I made like 10 stupid mistakes on the first chapter of a sequel I released today. What is even more embarrassing is that I even used "you're" as possessive! That mistake of yours is nothing! But, I guess that's the problem of writing on a tablet (which I do).

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What is even more embarrassing is that I even used "you're" as possessive! That mistake of yours is nothing!

Yeah, small things like that can often slip through the cracks. And like I said nobody's perfect. One of these days I may need to get a second pair of eyes on my material, but for now I'm like: "hey, I'm competent enough to edit my own work. Here goes!" and then I end up with stuff like "were" instead of "where." So again, thanks in advance to anyone who points out my grammar mistakes.

So, I'm guessing the Sparkle family line is just one big incest-fest, then? Do they have any... well... special... relatives as a result? You know what would make this deliciously fucked-up? If Twilight was actually Shining's And Velvet's daughter. In fact, I'm calling it now.

Oh, and the clop in this chapter is good, too.

I can somehow agree to this, very interesting so far and nice use of words. I'm intrigued, carry on.

when I read the titile I assumed that Shining Armor + Twilight Velvet=Twilight Sparkle

2583276 What do you mean by special relatives?

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A by product of inbreeding is usually genetic abnormalities in the offspring.

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Retards. Obviously.

*pomf*

Couldn't even bring himself to cum in his own mother, what a soft cock.
It would make for an interesting chapter or two if he did knock up his mom

2583276 Funny you should say that... BBBFF's Other meaning.

It was a simple statement. Just a name. But hearing her voice suck on every last syllable provoked Shining Armor to ravenously buck his hips into the canal that had sired him.

The use of the term "sire" seems really odd here since siring is something that males do, not females.

There is just something about females 'raping' males that really makes stories more interesting. And after reading 'Adventures of a teenage foalsitter', I really would picture Velvet as that kind of individual.
Nice read.

6865152 ... what's the purpose of putting quotes around that word? Females are indeed capable of sexually assaulting males, putting it in quotes as if it's not a legitimate thing is rather offensive.