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I'm the pony of your dreams... Your hot, sweaty, fitful, Rarity & ice-cream dreams.
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This story looks awesome. Added to my read later list, so I can get to it when I'm not all mopey about writing and reading ponies.
" Chapter 1: To Be A Princess · 18th Jul 2013
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[( Click to toggle read status )] Chapter 2: "Neigh"gotiations · 18th Jul 2013"
"Chapter 2: "Neigh"gotiations"
"Neigh"gotiations"
oh you clever mother fucker......
LOL.........
-grabs a tub of popcorn- Dis gunna b gewd.
And this is why you don't try and get into the heads of others while under the influence of shitloads of sexual frustration.
Your description says "super-secedes". You meant supersedes. More comments when I read.
Very nice. I'll have to follow this - any story where Celestia gets put in her place gets nothing but love from me.
I will like and favorite just for the description.. Yawn... It's 2:15AM I will read this later...
Why did I just fave this?
2899454 It's 7 here
I have to admit that I'm enjoying this one so far.It seems promising.
Enjoying this so far.
2899548 Well whatdaya know? 7:36 Am, let's read!
Alright! Totally worth my time! I just had to laugh at Princess Luna's antics.
Somehow, I feel that Princess Celestia's attitude would be like this, if it were real.
I will be reading more about Princess Mi Amore Cadenza's and her aunts'
Does nobody care about the usage of the word 'indoctrination'?
Tactful and well handled, I look forward to reading this.
What?
You have just successfully confused/amused me.
*Reads first description* Well, this seems like a great exploration of Candence's character by shedding some light on her relationship with her two aunts. This ought to be-
*Sees mature and sex label accompanied by final warning*
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It should be ". . . where she couldn't care less." If she could care less, then she does care about the situation at hand (or hoof).
Besides that, great story. I can't wait for more.
god damn it! I wanna read this but I know I am just going to wind up looking back here everyday waiting for it to update.
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And I shall read this with joy!
~Skeeter The Lurker
All of my everything forever.
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He might have meant "induction".
Celestia is a total bitch, I just fuckin hate her. I would have been told her off.
I feel for ya Cadence. This story only makes me love Cadence and Luna more.
I only have one problem for this
Shining Armor is a dude, right?
And his wife is all but begging him to fuck her, right?
Why the hell didn't he do anything?
This is shaping up to be an interesting night for Cadance. I don't know if I ever seen a story where her love magic hasn't resulted in flaring libidos
Had you had this ready, it would have been stiff competition , but you got featured for it, so it evens out.
its molesting time already, oh how time flies.
I was interested in reading this story, but having tried to do so, I can honestly say you need an editor, or at least a pre-reader.
There's missing words all over the place, and several of the sentences don't really make all that much sense-- and this is just within the first section of the first chapter. I wasn't able to bring myself to read further.
examples:
" Its smell alone intoxicating." Missing Is, or was, depending on the tense, which I'm having trouble determining.
"Words not accompanied by a spouse, the lovers separated." I've only got a vague sense as to what this sentence is supposed to mean, it's very confusingly worded.
2903275 Because he's the perfect soldier. Country over anything else.
Why do Celestia, Cadence, and Twilight all have purple eyes? Luna is the only princess with out them. What's up with that!?
Ooh sorry everybody for the long silence!
Thanks for the corrections! As always I'm very grateful anytime people can help me by pointing these things out... 
I didn't mean to not respond, (but ended up doing so anyway... whoops) but you'll be happy to know that as soon as I got home from work I started editing the last chapter of this little number. So expect results by this weekend.
Anyways, onto the comments!
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Lol, that's dedication! Glad that you enjoyed it, sorry I kept you up so late.
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Favorite comment. "Tactful" is probably the best comment you can get when you write
porncloperotica2900863>>2901339
Which brings me to this comment. I don't know why you deleted it, it was a great question!
(Let me know otherwise!)
)
If I remember correctly, it was a comment about Celestia being somewhat OOC in the story. And yes, I did struggle with trying to keep the characterization consistent. Trust me it's not that easy writing a story about the three characters in the show that have been explored the least. (well at least Luna got her own episode) Mainly, the reason I made Celly a little harsh was to reflect the pressure on her to see other ponies didn't screw up her meeting. Maybe you realized this as you read the story, but I hope that I made it clear...
2903453
Mmmm... thanks for the input
I will admit that having a second pair of eyes on everything is probably for best, (y'know cause even editors shouldn't be so arrogant as to think they can edit their own work to perfection) but I figured "by Fimfiction standards" (whatever those are) this was above average.
I will agree with you that my syntax waxes a little poetic sometimes, but know that it was a conscious decision to make it that way. (Such as in the examples you provided) I rely a lot on context to make a statement for me and the tradeoff is sometimes I get more confusing sentences. Guess I like to give my readers a lot of credit. The English language is a canvas for exploration, if you want to write a sentence a certain way: write it! Who knows what impact it might have. (positive or negative, which I guess in your experience was the latter.
Whew, thanks for putting up with all of that. And a big shout out to everyone who has read my story so far: Thank you!
2904048
Because Luna is special
Oh, great job, Cadance. You broke Celestia. Or maybe, turned her on.
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2903275
I've read that Princess Cadence is in heat.
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Edit: I just read it. Cadance, you're in trouble! You messed with her dreams and that's influencing her now! OR she knows exactly what you did and is just getting back at you..
2904198 It's fine, it was DEFINITELY worth it.
*Sigh*
The possessive pronouns don't have apostrophes: His, hers, their, its, my, our, your.
2906188
Let's just pretend that never happened... 
It's fixed now Thanks for the help.
I really, really, really want to read those stories. (they're all on my read later list) 
That's good to hear! Sorry to make you wait so long... but I hope it was worth it.
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Thanks for the compliments! I'm ashamed to say that I've been working on this (and, you know, an actual job) so I haven't had much time to read.
Here's to the next competition at 350 though!
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2906441
I need to get a job, actually. No money makes life so difficult...
~Skeeter The Lurker
2905663
Maybe it's just been a long time for Tia too, and that little, ahem, intrusion reminded her of what she'd been missing.
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You might be on to something here...
Silly Cadance, sending a will-breaking love spell right into somebody's subconscious tends to alter their emotional state!
2906188
I'm sure the author knows that already, his fingers were probably just typing of their own accord while his mind was thinking of what happens next. Little slip ups like that *do* happen.
2900288
The colours in your comment just raped my eyes.
2911223 ...All according to plan...
Typo in the very last 'Celestia'
Love the story! Can't wait to see where this is going
"It was time for Sun-butt to get off her high horse."
oh my that's a great line lol......
when update?.....
2908390 your icon looks like it's by negative fox but i don't recognize the pic......
2915053>>2900902
Lol, it's complete now. I hope that wasn't too long of a wait. I know, I feel the same way when I look at stories sometimes.
(Ohh and not to gloat or anything but yeah, I loved writing that line too.)