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Lol, it's complete now. I hope that wasn't too long of a wait. I know, I feel the same way when I look at stories sometimes.

"It was time for Sun-butt to get off her high horse."

(Ohh and not to gloat or anything but yeah, I loved writing that line too.)

HAHAHA!

That was too good.

And DAMN. That was also very hot and I loved every second of it!

~Skeeter The Lurker

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>posts when will there be update
>reloads and finds the update
rejoice i guess , although apparently not since this is the last installment , that's rather disappointing......

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Thanks for pointing that out... It's fixed now.
Also, glad to hear that you enjoyed the story. It's obviously what authors love to hear, that their work is appreciated.
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rejoice i guess , although apparently not since this is the last installment , that's rather disappointing....

Lol, I saw when you posted that comment after I just uploaded the final chapter and knew it was the prefect time for a little--->
But anyways, stories have to end eventually. It's onto bigger and better things! (umm, hopefully I guess...)
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Wow, nice. I did feel like the last chapter was a giant experiment in "pornology" (if that's a thing) I'm glad to hear that you liked it. I thought I was definitely bordering on the excessive.

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Keep that in mind, then. This was quite good I thought.

~Skeeter The Lurker

dude, you rocked the house to its core with this one , or should I say bed. cant wait to read more from you.

:O

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I found it on some blog or wiki and never found the artist, so if you're actually able to find me a link to the original, I will give you a free muffin, your choice of flavor.

Deadpool: *take a deep breath of the post-sex smells* Mmmm...smells like victory.

Errant hairs from Cadance’s mane hung down loose over her forehead. Earlier it had been properly quaffed, but now her hair returned to a disheveled state.

I think that should be coiffed; I rather doubt anypony would want to drink Cadence's mane.

Aw.. It's over? WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO DO NOW? Well, Thank you for writing this!

Now... All I have to do is wait...

They shoved their snouts together forming a cohesive froth of enzymes that conjoined them at the lips.

I will admit, I lost it right there imagining that Twilight was watching them and writing this.

This was hot as hell and I liked the ending, but I must admit I couldn't concentrate on the sex, (which led to a lot of confusion with the positions.) because I was trying to find out if you were doing this on purpose.

to give Luna an excellent view of her perspiring privates. A single drop of sweat beaded, trickling down the slope of Celestia’s bulging breasts.

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That's quite kind of you to say. My smile was much larger than this when I read that, but Pinkie will have to do.
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Let us never speak of this again ... It's corrected now, thank you.
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So happy you enjoyed it and of course, like I said in the description, there's a whole group for this kind of thing so you can go check it out. Or read some of my other fanfics (lol, a little shameless but who knows, maybe you'll enjoy my other material as well)
Of course I'll be writing more regardless.
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Lol, yeah what can I say, science gives me a boner. And so does alliteration apparently. At first I didn't mean to have such silly syntax, but after a few natural occurrences I decided to roll with it.

well... it's time to wash my bed sheets.

That was a... satisfactory read? Yeah, that'll work.

Upon further reflecting of this story, I have come to a ghastly revelation...

Princess Cadance is responsible for the birth of Princess Molestia!!!!!

I have to admit, this really only caught my eye when I saw that the last chapter had the same title as my own smutfic. XD

I'm glad I stopped and took a look though. Pretty solid story. It's in need of a few sweeps of a fine-toothed editing comb, as I saw an unfortunate number of spelling and grammar errors that tended to jar me out of my immersion, and I was a bit disappointed that you started out with a tease of Shiny/Cadence action that you never got back to, as it left me feeling like Cadence needed a bit of closure there, but those were the only big issues I had.

Also, goddamn you have a seriously massive word-boner for alliteration. I mean, Jesus. It was.....well, it did sorta break me out of enjoying the erotica, admittedly, but at least it was funny.

Keep it up.

--CG

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Aww shucks. Well thank you for dropping by, reading, and sharing your thoughts. It's always nice to get some feedback.

I was a bit disappointed that you started out with a tease of Shiny/Cadence action that you never got back to, as it left me feeling like Cadence needed a bit of closure there, but those were the only big issues I had

I will admit that in the original version, I had a "coming home" scene planned out for the fic, but I felt like it dragged it out to an unnecessary length (plus there was originally a word cap for the contest- 15,000, which I did blow past anyways...). Heh, maybe I'll come back to this one day and finish it out with a epilogue *snicker*

Also, goddamn you have a seriously massive word-boner for alliteration.

Lol, yeah, I get a boner for the weirdest things. Fun to write, but I can understand how they sound coming from a reader's perspective.

I have to admit, this really only caught my eye when I saw that the last chapter had the same title as my own smutfic. XD

Well, you know what they say... great minds minds think alike .

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Oh, I see everything as sexy.

Slowly however, humans don't seem as sexy as ponies... me likes.

Some of the tenderness in the previous moments faded, replaced by an escalating mutual desire for Luna to fill her sister. Impregnate her, consummate their relationship.

And thus, the next generation of princesses are born.

I really liked it. I wished it lasted a little longer, but it was an enjoyable read.

Wonderful story.

Am I the only reading this as the dawn of princess Molestia?

An awesome story!
Though, I wished a bit of exploration on Luna and Celestia and their love between them was a bit short, but still awesome. And why aren't there more Princest stories such as this are hard to find? I will never know, nevertheless have some mustaches

The alliteration...
Excellent clop though.

So hot and touching!

While being a very enjoyable read.... Just know that there is such a thing as too much alliteration. Actually, speaking frankly, it was very distracting an somewhat annoying. Other than that it was very hot.