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Ponysopher


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Thumbed and favorited just for the cover image alone. Now, to commence read!

I've yet to read this, but from my phone I glanced at the title and reacted as such: "The what of what now?" Clicking on the link, I then read the description and had another late-night reaction. "I'll allow it." And I even nodded resolutely to myself.

I think its time I get some sleep. Will read this when I'm not sleep-deprived.

what of princess twilight and the rest of the mane 6

I don't usually get snippy and I apologize in advance, but seriously,

What. The. Fuck.

I don't have a problem with clop, princest, futa or even soul destroying rape for fucks sake. I do have a problem with people bloody mistagging.

When I finished the second chapter I was thinking that even though it was as grim as all hell, there must be a happy ending somehow since there's no dark or sad tag, just the romance. Obviously, I was wrong.

Now I know I sound like a whiny asshole, but please don't immediately tag your story romance just because it's clop, there's absolutely no reason for it or for not including other appropriate 'cough' Dark sad/tragedy 'cough' tags.

I'm also confused why you decided to warn against futa and light bondage and not the rape.

Now I expect this to be downvoted quite a bit, but frankly I think I have a point.

3240312
Your comment has been noted, and I've added a dark tag as well as the rape warning; however, I don't plan on doing anything else.

Awesome story, bro! I can't wait to see what other nice stories you come up with later!!!

Here, have five moustaches; you deserve them! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

3240354
Thank you, my apologies for going overboard there. It's something of a pet peeve for me.:twilightsheepish:

I don't care for princest but this was just so well written I had to keep going and thanks to you I needed some alone time.

Edging is a weakness of mine damn yoy

So with that said, you win friend.

You just win. :pinkiehappy:

Ah yes, NMM is still too stupid to realize that eternal night means the death of every living thing.

How can something that retarded possibly be smart enough to win?

Spacecowboy
Moderator

3240312>>3240354
This person has it right, author.

After reading it, there's no romance. It's simply rape. Romance implies some form of mutual return of feelings, or something, even if it arises from Stockholm Syndrome or being broken. This... not so much.

It's not bad, but... I wouldn't recommend it to folks I know. And it seems that your first featured story is a rape fic. Yikes.

What is it with "Princess Celestia gets sexually dominated by [insert pony here]" clop ending up in the feature box?! Give Princess Celestia a normal lovelife, why don't you?! Enjoy your downvote.

3241066
Instead of bitching about a fic you aren't going to read, how about you JUST NOT READ IT?!

Also, I'm putting this in my read laters.

3240785 who's to say that isn't her goal:pinkiecrazy:

3241112
Hey, guess what? I didn't read the story. :pinkiesmile:

Oh, and instead of bitching about a comment you don't like, how about you JUST NOT READ IT?!

See what I did there? Of course you didn't.

3241133
No, I see what point you're trying to make.

But you gave a story you didn't read a downvote. All I did was remark at the fact that a lot of users do that, and that I think it's a stupid practice.

3241147
I hate this endless stream of "Celestia gets sexually dominated/humiliated by [insert pony here]" stories that's been swarming the site and the feature box lately, and it's my full right to express this displeasure by making use of the tools this site offers to express opinion, be it good or negative. So if I want to downvote a story because it's of a despicable genre, then I'll do so, with pleasure. That's what the downvote and comment section are for. To express opinion. If the author (or his readers) can't deal with that, he shouldn't have posted this on a public site were giving a negative opinion isn't forbidden.

3241172
I see your point, even though I disagree with it.

I will leave it at that, and hope you have a good day.

I'm sorry Malefic, but I just read like a seriously detailed badass moment where Nightmare Moon comes out, and I had imagined it in my head so amazingy detailed I got goosebumps, and I went to the comments and the first thing I see is "Neat". You have no idea how much I just giggled, thank you.:twilightsmile:

3240826 i believe the elements didn't show up since it looks like chapter 3 takes place directly after chapter 2 since it it said Celestia's induction took place only a few hours before it hasn't even been a full day and with there being one last sunrise they have yet to find out though i do wonder what will happen when they do especially twilight

would it be too dark if Celestia became pregnant form the rape and gave birth to an Alcorn foal only for NMM to eat him/her right in front of Celestia? She was in heat after all.:scootangel:

Of course not:twilightblush:

Hey don't judge me until you tried glazed Alcorn Foal trust me you guys are missing out.

Alright fine!!! I won't glaze the next one. People can be so picky some times.

3240933 Well thats just feature box for ya.

Okay I've out worn my welcome got to go.
3241172 hugs and:rainbowwild:

3241561 There is literally no reason to pass judgement upon something without reading it. That's what judgemental, closeminded fuckshits do.

So shut up.

3241574
How about no? I don't like the premise. I don't like the very idea of this story. I don't care about how well it is or isn't written. I care that it was written at all, and I don't like it. Hence, the downvote. Only judgemental, closeminded fuckshits call other people judgemental, closeminded fuckshits for judging things by different criteria than their own. So kindly remove yourself from my presence. I will downvote this story and every story of its ilk as much as I want, and rest assured, I will. No matter how hard people like you try to silence others' opinions.

3241586 You're right. I won't be able to change your opinion, or get you to think of things more openly. It was silly of me to even suggest that I could. Whoopsie. :fluttershyouch:

3241596
Indeed it was. If that's all, I suggest you stop bothering me.

3241172 If you hate these types of stories, why would you click on it, and then proceed to comment your distaste all over it? Also, why would you downvote something without reading it? That's just plain rude! Everyone has a right to their own opinion, yes, but you didn't even give the story a chance! How would you like it if a bunch of people downvoted your stories JUST based on the descriptions alone? :pinkiesad2:

3241612
Because it was in the feature box, making it impossible to ignore. Because I wouldn't want the author to think everyone here likes these kind of things being in the feature box. Because I'm allowed to downvote things I don't like, that's what the downvote button is for. Because it isn't forbidden on fimfic to dislike something and tell people you dislike it (though given how whiny everyone gets whenever they get a negative comment, I wonder how long that'll last).

How would you like it if a bunch of people downvoted your stories JUST based on the descriptions alone?

Isn't a description meant exactly to tell the reader what to expect? I didn't have to read this story to know I would hate it, reading the description was sufficient enough for that. Credit to the author for that, he made an informative description that told the reader what to expect, allowing me to avoid reading it.

Furthermore, if people did that to my story, that's their choice. Must have meant the description failed to entice them to read it, or told them that they wouldn't like it even if they did. That's their opinion and I can't change that.

3241561

Nobody is denying that you're free to express your opinion, but there's no need to do so in such a callous manner. This is someone's work; their writing, and it's important to them, even if you don't give a shit about it.

While downvoting a story is acceptable in most cases, especially with reasoning provided, I'm of the opinion that you should NEVER do so based on concept alone, especially if you haven't even read the story in question.

If the site/feature box is experiencing an influx of stories that you just so happen to dislike, you suck it up, ignore them and move on. Your little hissy fit amounts to nothing more than trolling.

Now either read the story, or leave.

3241643
If you all were to stop replying to me and go all butthurt over your pwecious wittle stowy getting a downvote, I would've left eons ago. But no, you just couldn't let it go, could you? No, of course not, you just had to tell me how wrong and bad I'm being. If my presence here bothers you, you've got nobody to blame but yourselves. You're the ones who keep replying.

If the comment section happens to contain a comment you just so happen to dislike, you suck it up, ignore it and move on. Your little hissy fit amounts to nothing more than trolling.

3241637 You see, the feature box is based on an algorithm of sorts, where it takes several things into consideration; the length of time the story has been up, the amount of favorites, likes to dislikes ratio, the amount of views, and the amount of comments (not so sure on that last one). This calculates the amount of "heat" the story has, and if it's level is high enough, it gets featured!

I know where you're coming from, I really do! Every time a foalcon story gets featured, it makes me cringe. :facehoof:

And also, if you don't want to see stories like this in the feature box, you can unclick the mature box, making it so that mature stories would be invisible on the site. Believe it or not, but this story wouldn't be in the feature box if you did that (seeing as it's mature)

And downvoting something just because you don't like it is kinda rude. If I see something I don't like/I'm against, I just move on.

3241643 Couldn't have said it better myself!: :twilightblush:

3240933
On the contrary sir, my first featured story is a currently clopless true romance fic. Perhaps you would enjoy it.

...Well.

In all seriousness, I just couldn't enjoy this. Also, REMOVE THE ROMANCE TAG.

That is all. Good day.

3241586

Get the fuck off of our site. I'm HOPING that your words here are enough to get you banned. You judge stories for their content, not whether you fucking agree with it you damned-soul fuckwit. Doing ANYTHING ELSE is not a violation of personal criteria, rather you're fucking up how the site's story-rating system works which means you are working against the devs and all the readers who are NOT total pompous asshole cocksuckers like yourself you shit-eating dickmaniac. If you don't like something, DO NOT READ IT. If you don't read it and still don't like it, WALK AWAY. That is what ANY sane and rational person does - which you must not be, no matter how you try to defend your /vastly/ skewed self-image to your sad and frail little psyche.

Do you see this? This is me wishing you'll spontaneously combust and make the world a better place, because no one needs you. No one wants you. You're a blight to any community you descend upon like a fucking virus. A vaguely humanoid-shaped hole in any social structure you sneak into because we damn sure would have kicked your ass out if we knew you were here. You don't deserve social contact, you don't deserve to have an opinion, you don't deserve entertainment. If anything, your parents should be slapped for not wasting you in a condom like the rest of the trash seed, you putrid fuck. I'd pity you, but the years you've wasted by existing and being a burden to others aren't worth any amount of compassion.
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This little bitch aside, why is it always NMM on Celestia? Let's get a little original here, switch it up. Celestia on top for a change. Unlike the above asshole, while I am not going to read this story - I am also not going to cast a vote on it, because I actually happen to be a decent human being, despite my language.

Spacecowboy
Moderator

3242103
Featured on submission, not update.

And really. Romance tag needs to go. You've been around long enough to know this.

3241066 I think you should only downvote if the writing is bad, or if the charcters are majorly OOC, instead of downvoting it for having a story you personally dislike.

Just finished reading this. :fluttercry:

The first chapter was amazing. I love the way you wrote Celestia, and the writing was so interesting an engaging... well done. A few errors, but nothing major (French or Prench?).

I didn't enjoy the second chapter as much though. It was good, just... Your word choice really made me cringe in a few places. The flower analogies in particular; they're so cheesy.

Also, I thought that you used too many... what's the word?

"The blue and silver moonlight shone brightly through the ceiling of glass"

These. Not exactly a negative or a complaint, but too much flowery description can be jarring.

Otherwise, I thoroughly enjoyed this. Have an upvote. :pinkiesmile:

3242221

You judge stories for their content,

That's what I did. The story was about Celestia being once again the subject of sexual humiliation, and for that I downvoted it. Please try and not miss the obvious.

rather you're fucking up how the site's story-rating system works

Oh really? Please, quote the line in the rules where it is said you can't downvote a story because you don't like what it is about.

who are NOT total pompous asshole cocksuckers like yourself you shit-eating dickmaniac

Bravo! Clearly you have such a moral high ground over me. I mean, I downvoted a story because I didn't like what it was about. Clearly I must be pompous because of it. Please, do spew some more insults to add "strength" to your convincing "arguments". Show us all how brilliantly mature you are.

If you don't like something, DO NOT READ IT.

Well, I didn't read it, so what is your problem? Well, I did read the summary. And I have a question for you, oh smart one: if you do not read a story (or its summary, at least), how can you know you do not like it? I know I don't like this genre only because I read it in the past and grew to dislike it. If I hadn't read it, as you suggested I should, why, then I could never form an opinion (positive or negative) about anything at all.

If you don't read it and still don't like it, WALK AWAY.

Why? It's not against the rules. I'm doing nothing that is wrong, at all. You have nothing, nothing at all to hold against me. You're just a butthurt little fanbrat who acts like he's all tough because he can spew some cuss words on the internet. You do not tell me what to do and you never will. If I chose to downvote a story based on its content, and have the decency to inform the author that I did so, then I will do so and there is nothing, absolutely nothing, you can do about that.

That is what ANY sane and rational person does - which you must not be, no matter how you try to defend your /vastly/ skewed self-image to your sad and frail little psyche.

No, a sane and rational person is free to express his opinion, good or negative, in a civil way, which is what I did. Do you not realise the irony of your words? Yes, clearly I must be the one who is not sane and with the frail psyche, and not you, who is foaming at the mouth and spewing swear words everywhere in an attempt to intimidate me and appear tough. Please, who are you trying to fool here?

Do you see this? This is me wishing you'll spontaneously combust and make the world a better place, because no one needs you.

Congratulations, you just wished death on a person because he downvoted a story. You are such a moral being. The world stands in awe of your goodness. Really, have you no shame?

No one wants you.

Says who? You, the foaming-at-the-mouth, anonymous person on the internet, who swears like a fishwife to appear tough? You're going to tell me nobody wants me and expect me to believe you? Excuse me for a moment, I have to go outside and roar with laughter.

You're a blight to any community you descend upon like a fucking virus.

Yes, clearly I am a virus and a blight because I expressed my opinion and downvoted a story. Why, all of us who downvote should be put into camps, gassed and burned to ashes! How dare we exist! How dare we have our own opinion and standards!

A vaguely humanoid-shaped hole in any social structure you sneak into because we damn sure would have kicked your ass out if we knew you were here

Tell you what, I'll give you my adress, so you can come over and do that. Come on hotshot, I'll be waiting. But be sure to ask mommy for permission to leave the basement, okay?

You don't deserve social contact, you don't deserve to have an opinion, you don't deserve entertainment.

Because I downvoted a story. Really? Man, your moral views must be fucked up beyond recognition. I'm beginning to suspect you're typing this from a tablet or laptop you stole from a poor soul who came to visit you in the pyschiatry. Any human being with morals like you wouldn't normally be left to wander the streets.

If anything, your parents should be slapped for not wasting you in a condom like the rest of the trash seed, you putrid fuck.

Ooh, good one. Why don't you add "ur mom!" to it, for completionist sake? Do you feel big now, hmm? Do you feel big and tough now, little boy? Oooh, you cussed out someone on the internet, how brave! Safely hiding behind the anonimity of the internet while trying to act all big and strong, as if you're worth something. Does it boost your self-confidence, hmm? Do you need this in order to feel like you're worth anything at all? You're such a sad, sad person.

I'd pity you, but the years you've wasted by existing and being a burden to others aren't worth any amount of compassion.

Please, if I ever felt even compelled to accept pity from a complete sociopath and psychopath like you, who wants to murder and kill people because they downvoted a fanfic on the internet, I'd shoot myself.

Crawl back under the rock you hid yourself under, creature, and don't bother civilized, rational, sane human beings anymore. You wished death, murder and all the holy love of Satan and the seven dwarves on someone because he downvoted a fanfic. On the internet.

And then you have the gall to call me insane? Excuse me, but now I really gotta go and roar with laughter. If I die because of you, it'll be because I can't breathe from laughing so much! Thank you for the entertainment, thank you for showing us all here what an utterly terrible, atrocious human being you are, and have a nice day! :twilightsmile:

And where does reformed faggot discord fit into all this? Great story.

3241586
Dude... can you come and downvote my stories, one of them involves the forced ingestion of diarrhea and scootaloo.

3242392
Psh, where's the fun in downvoting a story that was written to be downvoted? I think you'd feel more insulted if I upvoted it. :rainbowlaugh:

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