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Golly... I have to say, this is very interesting.
Most people would say this is 'fucked up', but it's in the morality behind it. People will say "It's wrong!"
Sure, sister and sister is equal with brother and brother, but I don't want to think about that.
Honestly, thinking about that cringes me.
Anywho, I liked this plot very much. Very intriguing, unique, and just interesting.
Four hooves up.
Wait, Futa? Oh, you got me worked up now!
FOR-EV-UUUUURR!!!
2711982 thank u for leaving a comment lol and yes if this was a real life situation it would be Hella effed up....I had this idea stirring in my brain for awhile...I think I watch too much anime lol cuz there is a lot of implied sibling jealous over friends in lovers in many of them! I liked the premise that Luna wanted Tia for herself! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
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Eeyup.
I too saw many anime and parts of dramas where siblings that don't know their siblings fall in love each other...
Interesting, but just very odd.
Pretty good. I wanted more exposition at the end with how Luna and Celestia handled their reunion. Did celestia remember or bring up the night they went away? Had she had a talk with Luna about how this couldn't work? Had she shoved it under the rug? I don't know. I think a scene or even just a line about it would help. But pretty good.
2712374 I think it was strongly implied that Celestia kept thinking Luna was being controlled and had no idea that Luna was a bit crazy lol so I believe she probably shoved it under the rug and chalked it up to Nightmare Moon's influence. Thank u for the comment! Glad u enjoyed!
2712136 hehehehe he!
not bad , still like eternally loved the most though.....
Wow. During the twilight-doll scene, I was thinking about my mimiga OC, Zypheros. And, this happened:
Zypheros inched closer to the doll's head. Closer. Closer... Zypheros looked up. Princess luna was staring at him, a nice, big WTF look on her face. Zypheros gave a suspiciously cheeky smile, grabbed the doll body from luna's hooves, and the head from the floor(after scooping the stuffing back in).
"Ehehehe..." Zypheros chuckled, sweating with nervousness. Spying a window on his near right, he leapt- only to be caught by luna's magic.
"....WHAT THE BUCK???" Exclaimed luna, pulling Zypheros closer to her face. "HOW THE BUCK DID YOU GET IN HERE??? IN FACT, WHAT THE BUCK ARE YOU?"
"Eheheheh..." Zypheros chuckled again, fainting with fear immediatly afterwards.
You know, when I saw the Twilicorn tag, and Luna thought she was pregnant, I immediately thought that twi was going to be the daughter of the two of them
that got really creepy really fast
I did run...and then I came back.
2714457 How the fuck are you going to call that snippet of text about your OC relevant to this story in any way.
Fun fact: "bestia" in Spanish means "beast".
2719836 I can't!
Why didn't you have Luna seduce Twilight so that they could have a threesome?
2722577 I Like your idea lol...
2719877 ooooo I learn something new everyday lol
2719209 I have that problem as well...."hey there don't look at this"...well now I have to lol
2720622 interesting lol ur oc must be a twihard lol
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But my guess is that you're not going to create for a while.
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Zypheros: *gives a sucpicious glance* Don't tell ANYONE, especially NOT TWILIGHT!
Love the fact that Luna was kinda crazy and still possessed somewhat by nightmare moon
You should do a sequel were Luna doesn't like that Twilight is getting close to Celestia and lures her into a closed off room in the palace
to "put the whore in her place". Only for Twilight to reveal that the princess she is after is Luna not Celestia, and worst of all Twilight
is just as crazy about Luna has Luna is about Celestia.
2746327 hmmmmm lol I really like this idea.....lol...crazy is as crazy does! Twilight schools Luna in how to properly stalk the object of her affection ....sexy times ahead :)
Huh, yandere Luna makes sense oddly enough.
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I thought it was tsundere.
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Tsundere is they like you but refuse to show it and tend be perpetual grumpy. Yandere is the obsessive/possessive lover with tendancies for axe crazy.
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Ohh. I always get the two confused.
17 people don't appreciate good clop
2746978 crazy is as crazy does? but if crazy is as crazy does, that could possibly combining too different crazys and poissibly turning some one who is quite possibly not so crazy. or crazy is as crazy does would insinuate that crazy is normal when there is no such thing!....
. then why be crazy? cause for most people to try and be insane causes mass murder and a long trip to the mental ward..... wait..... if every one becomes insane, then i lose one thing special to me since more people would be bonkers
!!!! at least only people like Charles Manson's insanity could range as the likes of mine... what was my point again? oh yeah! i like your magical talking pants!
p.s. please dont call the mental ward, i'd prefer to avoid them as long as possible... ten thousand voices agree hehehehuhehahaha
(and hi :3)
Princess incest is wincest.
My body was not ready for this GOOD JOB
Starscream and Thundercracker? Coincidence or transformers reference? :3
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=F4afOMEJvLM
http://bossip.files.wordpress.com/2014/01/fleece_johnson__the_booty_warrior.jpg?w=640
Very good clop, but I still have that feeling of i'm not reading about Luna and Celestia it jus feels like two Alicorn OC's who happen to be sisters, Luna and Celestia being together like just doesn't seem to work, if someone feels the please explain it cuz this doesn't feel like Lunestia
Oh, with that ending, I'm hoping you'll have some time to make a delicious little followup. You know, a spicy little "competition" between Twilight and Luna? A rough "tumble in the hay?" A test to see who is the better mare for the job?
Also, interesting story. Not bad.