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princest
Princest indeed. And with tiny, freshly-saved Luna too, just to boost the icky!
Keeping an eye on this one.
Um... since it hasn't been said yet, guess I'll take the plunge.
Molestia strikes again. Big time.
Princest is wincest!
Definitely more planned, but I'm always looking for any criticism for to make improvements!
This is a good story. I am a huge fan of CeleLuna and can never get enough of it. That being said, I have to say that the grammar was good and the clop scene was excellent, even if it does seem a little bit like rape since Luna was very resistant. I hope to see in future chapters this story explores Luna's feelings and how she ultimately accepts Celestia's love.
God damn you have a good vocabulary. I actually had to look a word up (furor). It's not very often I'm impressed by vocabularies, so kudos to you!
Bestcest wincest is princest!
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I'm... not sure how I feel about this.
on the one hand, Celestia/Luna is my OTP, and given how uncommon it is, I'm always glad to see people write it. princest is wincest, etc.
but on the other hand, Celestia was so out of character during the clop scene that I found it difficult to keep reading.
This wasn't even 'molestia'... as much as I hate that meme, at least it's just played as a joke.
But this was just straight-up rape, no matter how you sugar-coat it.
I can't imagine the real Celestia ever being that forceful. Especially with an emotionally-fragile Luna who has just returned from exile. If anything, she'd be extra careful not to overstep her boundaries, for fear of hurting her poor sister worse.
It doesn't matter if Luna "always wanted" it. She still resisted-- tried to escape, even-- and Celestia outright ignored her.
If she truly cared about Luna, she should have stopped at the first sign of resistance and waited until Luna had sorted out her own emotions.
Forcing someone into sex before they're ready won't suddenly make them accept their own forbidden desires. It will just make them feel frightened and confused and betrayed.
and yes, I realize this is a porn fic about magical ponies, and I'm probably making a huge ass of myself... but rape really bothers me, especially when it's romanticized like this.
all of that said though, this was a good story. it was well-written, tasteful as far as clop fics go (no vulgar words-- thank you!), and in-character (at least in the beginning).
You portray them as having a genuine loving relationship, which is more than I can say for most clop-fics I've seen... the 'conflict' was just handled very poorly on Celestia's part.
If you intend to write more, by all means go for it. I just humbly request that you try to make future installments a bit less 'rapey'... or else add a dark tag and a rape warning.
thank you for your time, and I apologize for probably being an asshat.
Ah, I see. I completely understand what you mean and I apologize if I offended you or anyone else. I did debate whether I should put a tag or note on it. I will do that now!
I really appreciate your input! It's really helpful, so do not feel bad!
Honestly, I do want Celestia's more aggressive nature in the relationship to be a part of the conflict, and it is meant to contrast with her otherwise canon personality "out of the bedroom" so to speak.
That aside, to you, sa, and anyone else truly offended by how much the scene resembles rape, I am very, truly sorry. That was not my intention as much as it was to just show Luna's overwhelming uncertainty and the friction in the relationship--whether it is something entirely physical or something deeper.
Thank you again for your earnest feedback.
I am inspired to finish Chapter 2 quickly, as it will provide much greater context to Luna's actual feelings in the aftermath.
What the hay else sits beween lust and love?
Lunestia. Kinda weird though because they are only sisters.
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Good point. XD
You can see I was having difficulty writing the summary of all things, and went into a marketing mindset of "insert eye-catchy platitudes" mode. I've changed it. Thanks!
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But it is the OTP!
Joking aside, I know it can make some people uncomfortable. Personally, in the realm of fantasy and fiction, I think it can be interesting if it's handled well. This pairing really intrigues me because I think it's arguably in its own category. Princest!
I think the argument can be made that we do not really know for sure that the princesses are blood related, especially when they threw in Cadence as Celestia's niece but not Luna's daughter. We have no idea how they come to be, especially since Celestia and Luna are really goddesses in alicorn form. because of that, they apparently live far beyond the age of normal ponies. Any relationships they have with normal ponies would be strained by this fact.
So I think that they are referred to as sisters is more an embodiment of the duality and closeness of their relationship, that they are more akin to equals as goddesses. Of course it may literally mean they are blood related, and in by our parlance the fact that they refer to each other as sisters already puts this in the realm of incest regardless.
but I think their position as co-rulers of Equestria and pony deities makes the relationship, to go back to my previous choice of words, "something else entirely." (which I think is what I was getting at XD) Though I have nothing against the pairings, I personally wouldn't be interested in writing Applejack x Applebloom or Rarity x Sweetie Belle. But the princest feels unique to me and sparked my creative juices!
Just dont go too far.....and....please..please for the love of god nothing forced onto luna....please.
I fucking support this!!!!
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Don't know how to honestly react to this on one hand it's totally rape no matter how you word it but on the other hand the way it is presented poses and interesting idea. Not saying that it is acceptable the way celestia handled it but If you think about this outcome makes some sense, if you outlived every other pony would you really want to keep looking for a new love once the last died. So having feelings for the only other pony who will live as long as you do despite who she is makes some sense. That or I'm just being a total idiot and over thinking this.
Hmm...
On one hand, Celly and Lulu sexing it up...
On the other... I kinda felt bad for Luna. I mean, sure, she had a thing for her sister for the longest time... but Luna obviously wanted to talk before f**king, and the "ever-benevolent" Celestia just kept going. But, as much as it almost-kinda-halfway pains me to admit, I liked it.
I'M SO CONFUSED. But still, good job. Unrequited feelings is one of those things I like in shipping most of the time.
this was added to the group:
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/1554/Celestia-X-Luna-Shipping
can you confirm for me this will have no gore or body altering fetishes like whipping, but to the point of permanent body damage or anything else that could be considered fucked up and not simply sex?
i simply wish to know how to categorize this fic, thanks :)
this is pretty good. hope to see more in the future. have a feeling that things will get even more complicated between the sisters as bet luna will freak out once she has a moment to think. have a fave
Really enjoyed this read, my hats off to the author of this being able to put into words so much love and passion. The foreplay was good in the beginning but not too much to make Luna uncomfortable.
Well done sir! Well Done *claps hoofs together with approval*
what am i doing with my life
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i ask myself that everyday