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can somepony say 'SURPRISE BUTTSEX!' as they grab Celestia and begin to rut her?

2590060

XD I hear ya ^^

More please. :trollestia:

Celestia's eyes bulged wide as saucers, seeing her little sister.... and her dark counterpart.

Do I see a sequel?

2590513

Where could I go from here?

2591297

Possibility. I need some inspiration.

2592987

A definite possibility ^^

wait, luna has a dick?

2595436

She used magic to make one

You somehow made that hot in spite of many, many distracting tense changes and unclear and confusing descriptions of action.

In other words you got the imagery and passion down pat, if you make up your mind whether to be in past or present tense this would be great.

Keep up the good work

2597654

Sorry about that and thanks ^^

we need MORE like this.

2643529

I needs inspiration

Not a fan of futa, but I digress.:trixieshiftleft:

Good Job, Bro. I ain't like futa but I don't hate them too. So far this is the best fic including futa.

2707122
Your grammar hurts my cranium at it's low level. Anyway, you should really try giving Futanari a chance. It's good stuff.

This is a great piece of work, and I hope to read it later.

2771474

Basically why I wrote this.

2771478>>2771478

Thanks man ^^

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Oh look, somepony favorited one of my pieces of shit. XD :pinkiehappy:

2772713

They ain't bad ^^

2773418
Well, a lot of people think so.

the only thing that would make this more hilarious, would be if celestia got a wing boner at the end...:rainbowlaugh:

2779408

heh heh heh, I didn't think of that XD

2782434

I knew someone would crack at that XD:pinkiehappy:

2590060 sounds better as just plain "Surprise sex!":twilightsmile:

2785748

I needs inspiration for a new diddy ^^

2788137

Diddy = story or idea XD

And thanks ^^

2771474
Well I am not an American, so just accept my wrong grammar.

2869425
If anything, it's good that you're not "American". America doesn't exactly have a large list of people who excel in using actual English. I'm most likely one of the few who constantly check their grammar and punctuation, but even with foreigners it's like a blank canvas. If you put your mind to it, you could become a savant at speaking English more than Americans. Horrible grammar is everywhere though, even in Great Britain, one of the few places I suspected there would be a high amount of actual intelligent beings.

2869441I love how you like to lump all of your fellow countrymen into a pile of stupidity. I would like to think that my grammar is passable, but I know of other Americans that are effective both at writing and being a grammar nazi for others.

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Just because I live in America doesn't mean I fight for it. :pinkiehappy:

I believe your english is better than most I hear. :rainbowdetermined2:

3037765I was just a little upset that you seemed to put stupid Americans as the norm instead of the 50% that I think of it as. To each his own though.

I was half-way expecting time travel paradox creating sex, so I was a little disaponted to find out that it wasn't. Great story though.:twilightsmile:

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Well I'm sayin' this right now, there is no way in Hell I'll EVER do time travel stories in anything.
:derpyderp1: Sorry for your disappointment, but I'm glad you liked it. *Bows to Luna* ^^

Every fetish you used here, I love. I want to commission you to write clop for me read more of your work.

3352404

Thanks man. And honestly wouldn't mind a commission ^^

3354271 The day I meet you, I will give you money.

3355557

Well I live in Cali ^^;

3356203 Cross country, eh?

I WILL HARNESS THE MIGHTY POWERS OF :pinkiecrazy: WITH AN OFFERING OF SWEETS AND POP OUT OF YOUR CLOSET

EXPECT ME

3359669
Hopefully PInkie and not Pinkamena XD

Biggest points: You need to work on your tense changes and a bit of your grammar. I would suggest to get an editor.

That said, this was really hawt, but you could have drawn out the orgasms rather than leave it up to the reader's imagination.

3386618

Thanks for the advice man ^^

3360464i don't know they are both hot

Would this be considered Bukkake:unsuresweetie:? Because if so, I think I found my new fetish!:pinkiehappy:

3885666
Actually... kinda

Nightmare Moon joined Luna in sucking on her own cockhead as Luna grinds her cock against Luna's body and at the same time, rubbed her ass against Luna's dick in a hotdogging. Luna was even bucking her hips, humping between Nightmare Moon's cheeks.

The hell is Luna doing?

3910176

This story needs an editor... badly.

Dammit OP i didn't want to use this but i will.

Fit's part of the fic perfectly.

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