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What type of adventures do these girls have after the movies?

Sunset Shimmer has five new friends despite what happened at the Fall Formal. Rarity, Apple Jack, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, and Rainbow Dash forgive Sunset for her mistakes and take her in as a friend. But will she be able to let go of her past and fit in?

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Update 11-5-16: This used to have all the Equestria Girls Adventure stories in this one, but I decided to make them separate to not get people more confused.
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This story is a sequel to The Phoenix's Family


I'm working hard to take this off of hiatus.


A few years have passed since Celestia had to banish her sister. She and Philomena shortly moved to Canterlot since The Castle of the Two Sisters had been mostly destroyed. Philomena decided to stay with Celestia and not finish her search for her father because Celestia would need her now more than ever. But she wishes she left with her family. She wanted to find out what happened to her father.
This one MIGHT be a little (whats the word...) 'darker?' than the others, but more like mistery I think...

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I'm working hard to take this off of hiatus.


This is in the same universe as Stage Fright

The Apple Family Part 1 (meaning there is 2 more stories to finish this one)

What Happened to Applejack's Parents?

After the newest addition to the Apple clan, life seems to be looking up. Young Applejack, especially, is thrilled to have a new baby sister to shower with the same love which she feels for her parents. But when tragedy strikes not long after little Apple Bloom's birth, the family must learn how to cope with the massive weight which now rests upon their shoulders. This is their story.

WARNING!!! In chapter Manticore, there is mention of blood. Not too gory or anything.
Edited and proofread by atronosthelast
Found the beautiful pic on DevianArt

Notes: There might be a possible sequel!

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This story is a sequel to Inverno in F Minor


Warning: The following story is currently unedited and will contain classical music. The story is inspired by the anime show: ClassicaLoid. If you do not like those, you know where the exit button is. Also, since I'm trying to portray these composers as closely as to how they were, it only stands to reason that I put an M/M tag on (especially with three particular characters) Lully, Schubit, and Tchaicoltsky.

Cover art was created by Mix-up, aka amalgamzaku.


Taken place after the birth of Flurry Heart, Cadance and Shining tried to get their adopted son to interact with foals his age. But their son, Inverno, is easily bored with them so he decides to use magic to craft some friends that he wanted to have. So following the instructions of a mental resurrection spell from his biological father's (Sombra) he brings the minds of history's greatest composers back. However, they are immediately separated throughout Equestria. Inverno goes on a quest to recover these brilliant minds while discovering that they come back with something more than he could imagine.

Story dedicated to the voice actress and friend: MLPGal. To her, that has gone through much but still presses forward.


Music used in this fic:

- "I Have Become Lost in the World" by Gustav Mahler (Chapter 4)
- Nutcracker ~ Russian Dance Rock version! Arranged by Mark Klett (Chapter 7)
- Anderson & Roe | DER ERLKÖNIG | Steinway Piano Factory (Chapter 8)
- Prelude & Fugue No. 2 in C minor (WTC. BWV. 847) by Bach (Chapter 9)
- Mozart Turkish March - Remix by Andrej Stojanovski (Chapter 10)
- Symphony No. 6, 1st Movement by Beethoven (Chapter 10)
- Children's Corner, "Snow is Dancing" by Debussy (Chapter 10)
- Nocturne Op. 9 No. 2 by Chopin (Chapter 12)
- (Glichy) Marche pour la Ceremonie des Turcs by Lully (Chapter 12)
- 5th Symphony, 1st Movement (Funeral March) by Mahler (Chapter 13)
- Spring, 1st Movement by Vivaldi (Chapter 14)

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Warning: The following story is currently unedited and contains dark humor, an odd set up for a practical joke among immortal Princesses, whom one of them will no doubt go crazy, random things before she thinks she "kicks the bucket."


It just might be the most ingenious prank that Princess Luna has ever conceived. A simple one at that. All she had to do was to bribe her sister's most trusted doctor to tell her that she's dying. With only about a week left, Celestia then decides that she will spend her last eight days doing the crazy, immature, random and funniest things that she could think of while preparing for her own funeral.

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I hung my head staring out the window, looking at all the ponies with their families, laughing, playing, talking. I had no family, my own didn't love me enough to even care for me. They just left me all alone in the cold all those years ago... I was just a foal, in the cold during Hearth's Warming Eve. That day is just a terrible reminder that my family didn't want me. For the past 12 years, I've wanted a family to care for me and love me. Is that too much to ask?

This is my first attempt for Fluttercord and Screwball story, so accept any errors that won't be fixed.
Thank you atronosthelast for helping me with this idea and editing it for me. I wanted to post something for Christmas since it's one of my fave holidays. (Along with my Birthday)

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Days after the fall of King Sombra, when the Empire was starting to put itself back together again, a couple of guards have discovered that behind a hidden door, a colt that had a resemblance to a particular, hated king.


A huge thank you to Exanime32 & AlaskanBabe and for helping me edit this. And his Highness PrinceCelestia for the cover art.


Music used in this fanfic are, in chronological order:
-Bach: Goldberg Variations, Aria for Solo Piano.
-Tchaikovsky: Romeo & Juliet, Fantasy Overture (Love Theme).
-Mozart: Violin Concerto No.3 in G (from the Master and Commander Soundtrack).
-Bach: "Great" Fugue in G Minor.
-Vivaldi: Spring, 1st Movement for Solo Piano.
-Beethoven: Ode to Joy (Piano Lullaby).
-Mozart: Tondo Alla Turca for Orchestra.
-Mozart: Adagio from Flute Quartet In D Major Kv285
-Mozart: Sonata No 18 in D, K 576 - Adagio, 2nd Movement.
-Beethoven: Symphony No.5, 1 Movement for Solo Piano.
-Bach: Brandenburg Concerto No. 3, 1st Movement.
-Mozart: Symphony No. 40 in G Minor, 1st Movement.
-Beethoven: Symphony No. 9, 4th Movement.
-Chopin: Nocturne No. 20 in C# Minor.
-Tchaikovsky: 1812 Overture for Cannons and Choir.
-Stravinsky: The Rite of Spring.
-Vivaldi: Winter, 2nd Movement for Solo Piano.
-Beethoven: Fur Elies.
-Handel: Lascia ch'io pianga.

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Inspired by one of my favorite songs in my favorite show. Also inspired by others.

Edited and Proofread by atronosthelast and Griphongirl_Ellie
Art drawn by my editor, Ellie


It has been a few years since Twilight and her friends had given up the Elements of Harmony. They have been through so many adventures together with or without the Elements. Twilight knew even without the Elements, she and her friends would be able to come over whatever was thrown at them.
Or so she thought...

I have made a group to post stuff related to this story, but I'm still working on building it up. If you would like to go ahead and join, feel free.

As many of you know, music can make a big impact in people's lives, including mine, so I want to share with you my inspiration list. (not all of it is complete yet)

Chapter 1 - Helping with Flurry Heart: Friends In My Heart

Chapter 2 - The Sleepover: Best Friends Until The End Of Time

Chapter 3 - They're Back...:

Chapter 4 - The Plan:

Chapter 5 - Failure: Roxas Theme

Chapter 6 - Goodbye: (The song that inspired the story,) Cold

Chapter 7 - Not Again: Destiny

Chapter 8 - How Could He...?: Ventus's Theme

Chapter 9 - Nightmares:

Chapter 10 - Coma: All Our Days

Chapter 11 - Shock:

Chapter 12 - Not Giving Up Yet: Wings

Chapter 13 - Night Time Fears: You'll Be in My Heart Music Box Version

Chapter 14 - The Big Attack Part 1: All Things Must Die

Chapter 15 - The Big Attack Part 2:

Epilogue: Home


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I'm not sure if this one is technically hiatus, but I'm working hard to update it.


After I have been touched by the beautiful story; Your lie in April, it has inspired me to write this story. Seriously, it's a really good story, go check it out.
In a way, I kinda based the OC (coming in a later chapter) off of this guy from an amazing Piano/cello group.


Silver Strings is a young filly who loves to play the violin, but the loss of her mother was a big impact on her, causing her to quit playing because it had caused her so much grief. A few years later, she meets a colt, and goes through a crazy experience with him, that would change her life.


I would like to give a big shout out and thank you to my mom and Griffongirl_Ellie for helping me with a few edits on this (I want to test myself with editing on this one) Also, I submitted this for a Fanfiction Contest.
I want to have art in this too, if you would like to draw something, feel free!


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