The edits are finally out! I rewrote Pinkie's parts so she's actually a Pinkie I can get behind. I also posted a small breakdown of magic in chapter four with a bit of an explanation. I added a little bit more onto Blueblood's parts in order to flesh him out correctly and I also edited Celestia's letter so she doesn't sound like she froze her soul for all of five seconds that morning.
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I know it's a very weak foreshadowing, but I couldn't resist. Don't worry, I may not be writing it as of now, but I'm still developing the story as we speak.
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My favorite part... That's a bit of a tough one as the queens council was a part I thoroughly enjoyed for the interesting characters and their interactions, but one part does beat it for me. The part where Rainbow Dash and all of the others gloat a bit about protecting the land in front of the disguised queen, all throughout that interaction in my mind I was laughing because I knew they were making themselves sound like the perfect ponies to convert and defend the hive. I'm curious to see where the story eventually leads and what consequences come from converting the main six especially when the other queens find out.
Thank you for your favorite on "The Fractured Unity". What has been your favorite part so far?
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