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Thanks for the favorite! :pinkiehappy:

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You're quite welcome!

I very much appreciate the interesting and rather unique concept you've come up with for this story, it's reminiscent of an HIE fic, except there's no humans involved, only a bipedal golem.
One thing that I really like in a story is a protagonist that hold his/her own in a fight, and obviously this character you've created is pretty damn badass.

The primary thing I don't like about this fic is the lack of a 4th, 5th, 6th, and 7th chapter.
Also, make sure you don't make him too powerful, or else the story won't be interesting.

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