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Barrobroadcaster


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Captain Jack Sparrow, a name many would like to forget. But Jack is not about to let himself be forgotten. Although the great mysteries of the world seem to fade, a few secrets still hide at the edge of the map. Along with his first mate Joshamee Gibbs, Captain Jack Sparrow tries for one last shot at becoming a legend. It's a good thing though- all he's ever needed is one shot.

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Comments ( 62 )

Not bad. A little short, but you seem to have characterization down pretty well, and the premise is interesting. You have my attention.

One note:

"GotDAMN it, why does magic NEVER work when you need it?!!" the captain yelled in frustration, slamming a hoof on the bannister.

Unless this is a euphemism I haven't heard before (or the captain is German), that should be God, gods, Celestia, etc.

OK, I'm intrigued, keep the writing as good as this and this story will surely be epic :pinkiehappy:

POTC got to love it.:pinkiehappy:

This looks interesting.

I'll follow along. I hope for the best for you and that your work may blossom into a beautiful story.

:heart:

3111589 Admittedly my dear, this is going to be on the backburner for quite some time, I'm afraid. It's my goal to reach 100 stories on this site within the next few weeks. It is an endeavor which will require much time and effort, a personal goal which I cannot slake from. Rest assured that I fully intend to devote my efforts to every last one of my stories in due time. But for now, they must sleep.
I can only apologize so much for keeping you waiting and appreciate so much your attention thus far. I am forever grateful.

3111630 It's okay, I'm a patient fellow on the sea of fanfics, I've actually got too much to read at the moment, but I'll definitely pay attention to this. :heart:

3111734 I recommend my Dan Vs. crossover as its what I will be working on. Despite my goal to reach 100 fics, it is something I update every Saturday with a new episode.
Also, if you love good crossovers, I'm about to submit a James Bond one that in my honest opinion, will be quite epic even in the first chapter.

Finally! After a year, somebrony puts up a mlp fic with jack sparrow:pinkiehappy:

I'd kiss you but I don't swing that way

Much better than what I expected to find going in. Was a bit disorienting when you swapped scenens to Tortuga. You may want to add an additional line space or add something to announce a scene change. (I've discovered --- works nicely)

First a story with Barbossa... and now this... IT'S A MIRACLE!

jack sparrow is the most amazing character ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!x100xbadassx:moustache:

......PLease.....Please.....please.........







WRITE MORE OF THIS MOST EPIC OF FANFICTIONS!!!!!

3118379>>3118379>>3112815 Guys, seriously this isn't my best work. What about it do you like so much? Of course, I'm going to continue this story but seriously, you can see the plot coming from like a nautical mile away.
...
Or can you?:moustache:
You know how long this fic is going to be? You see that I've put it in sea ponies, right? Do you know the epic adventures I'm going to have Jack, Gibbs and more go on? The different and various islands in the Equestrian Sea and in the Caribbean, the lost civilizations and ancient secrets, both human, pony and other that are just waiting to be uncovered? Do you honestly see how many places this fic can go?
This story's going to all of them. So buckle up.

Is banister spelled 'bannister' where you're from? Two instances of this.

Instead, they were having to sell part of them as toys to make end's meat.

I always love this movie :D

I thought this was about the movie and it was a crossover D:<FUUUCKKKKKKKKKKKK

3121963 moar. moar did i say moar if not MOAR!!!!:flutterrage:

This is promising: I look forward to where you take this.

I'm loving this! so glad it's updating!

You told me a month ago you went back to work on this, and you didnt dissapoint....now I must ask....moar???

3205302 Actually, that was only two weeks ago. As for an answer...
Ask and you shall receive.

I thought jack would have already tried just pouring it out...

Heh, so he's gonna be going to the worlds edge again? Gonna be hilarious if he and the Pearl just drop right down into the middle of Canterlot. :pinkiehappy: Good luck with the rest of the story!

To the edge of the world and beyond.

Wonder how he'll cope in a world of talking ponies and no rum.

3207911
Yes, because all they have is cider! Barbossa might like it, though.

Keep the updates coming!

Wiat, is Jack going to ponify and then become addicted to cider:trixieshiftright::trixieshiftright:Questions needed to be answered.

3205338
Yo, its been mo' than three weeks, where's 'dis chapta' bro?

3324154 I'm sorry, I'm not going to lie to you. I'm not committed to this story at all. I submitted it at a time when I was trying to hit 100 stories, had no idea it would get this popular.

Rest assured, it'll get done in its time. But I have a few other things I have to commit to first, like my Dan Vs. series. I highly recommend it and I'm very sorry to disappoint you. It might be a couple more weeks on the third chapter but I will work on it.

ACK!

Dude, you're killing me with all these unfinished stories!

They're so good too!

I'm just like 'No, don't end yet...'



.... You will be the death of me.

3324215
This is what I hate about some of these authors. They try to write fifteen stories at a time, and wind up delaying all of them. Would it be too much to ask for you to concentrate on one or two? Even three? Just write down your ideas for other stories, instead of actually writing them, and get to them in their time. You know what? I wouldn't mind if you put this on haitus, and completed your other stuff first, just so when you resumed it, I could have an idea that the next chapter would be out soon.

Sigh.

Sorry about the rant, but I see too many stories by too many authors and not nearly enough updates. Though I suppose I'm not really in a position to complain considering I have ideas but don't write stories.

Either way, keep up the good work (you do write well).

3617716 I am working on 5 at this point, including Dan Vs., my most ambitious project so far. I highly recommend it as it's my best work by far. Sadly, I am going to have to put this on hiatus as you have suggested.

3617752
Okay, thanks. I'll check out your other stuff till you got time for it.

s1

3617752
I hope Jack bumps bump into Hoofbeard from the MLP comics.:pinkiegasp:

Just a question even if this story is on hold, how long will it be till you continue it?

This guy.....this guy. Is the greatest human ever.

Hope you continue this, it's good:twilightsmile:

One word.. magic


Yes, love it love everything about it

Don't give up on the story.

Will this ever be continued? I think it holds a great deal of potential.
~Dollars.

5107591 Eventually, yes. I work on it from time to time, trying to perfect what I can.

To let you in on a secret, Captain Rhymes is actually supposed to be an antagonist. He hates pirates, as you'll soon find out and while he's not the "bad guy" of the story so to speak, it's clear he and Jack won't get along when they finally meet.

5107890 Awesome! can't wait it looks interesting. I found something similar months ago, but, it was pretty bad. :facehoof:

~Dollars.

Noooooooo. On Hiatus, why you do dis?:fluttercry:

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