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After all of the chaos that the Cutie Mark Crusaders had put them through, Big Mac and Cheerilee still managed to end the day without being hitched against their wills.
That doesn't mean they can't go out for a cup of coffee.
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Most enjoyable thus far!
Can't wait to read the rest!
Ooo... CheeriMac?
2220755
...CheeriMac.
Well... it's a good start, nice and slow in terms of them hooking up, I look forward to seeing the next chapter and to see if they do hook up. Still I will go ahead and add this to my CheeriMac group since it is leaning that way.
Cute. Can't wait for more.
Well written?
Taking things slow?
.....proceed.....
more!
Well done....well done...
ChaoticHarmony...
I foresee... pain, suffering, hate....
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Carry on, carry on...
Knowing you Chaotic, something tragic might happen in the future...
Proceed.
Well.... I guess there go the next 100 glasses of Zap Apple Jam for Filthy^^
So Cheerilee's love life was crap and Mac is hiding something... well ok still looks good
Ooh, Big Mac's past! Sounds interesting.
Good chapter!
2236123 I know, it seems like it's getting dull. Next chapter will fix that
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Hey I never said it was dull, I like a slow build up for the romance. As long as Cheerilee and Mac do hook up in the end I will be happy
hmm... *waits patiently here for the next chapter to see if his theory is correct*
2238633 Theory? I'm intrigued... Tell me about this... Theory.
Wait... what? He's what?
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...
......
.........Wait a minute, he can't be gay if he falls for Cheerilee. That would make him bi.
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Well there goes any potential for this to be cheerimac. *packs bags* I hope you have a wonderful evening and I hope the res of the story ends up great but sadly I do believe this is my stop
Aw man, this bums me out. Cheerliee and Mac are the only ship, that I can get behind and to find that Mac is a coltcuddler. Man,
I won't stop reading as I like the story but that was so disappointing as I wanted the two of them together.
Didn't see that coming. Is Big Mac bi then? And will he still be shipped with Cheerilee? I hope he is still shipped with Cheerilee.
Meh. Having Big Mac ending up bi/gay just doesn't seem to fit......not at all.......Seems more like this is a 'making-a-statement' chapter, rather than a natural occurrence.
Kinda disappointing actually.
'tis my view.
Let's see what happens in next chapter; my interest is perked now.
2282851 Finally ONE comment that is isn't all bitching about my story planning.
2282898 Heh...but the idea of Big Mac being a coltcludder in this story is great by itself because I could see Cheerilee trying to work her flank off to bypass that if she ever wants a chance with him.
Beside, changing one's sexual preferences isn't easy and rarely works out at all. If all, I guess that Cheerilee probably would try to get him back together with his..ex coltfriend at great pains to herself at first.
Ah, enough rambling for now. I shall await next chapter.
So Big Mac have chosen to take action and ask that stallion out eh?
Somehow great ending with alot of pains to come for Big Mac and sad end for Cheerilee.
Will there be an sequel? I would like to see what kind of short-coming that Big Mac would face and what kind of stuff Cheerilee have to put with with her own feelings.
-Morfonious
So... there was never any CheeriMac...
2300084 I didn't plan on a sequel, no. I'd rather just leave it here. I was thinking about an epilogue but in the ned I decided that rather than wrapping it all up in a weak way I'll leave it at a powerful moment. Y'know?
2300109 Nope. I had planned it that way from the beginning.
You may now shout "Troll! Troll in the dungeons!"
2300112 I understand where you are coming from with this ending but I hate having unanswered questions xD, which is why I made that post about asking for sequel or something.
2300125
*taps fingers against desk* Please excuse me I need to remove this fic from the CheeriMac group
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Just kidding :P
I really wish I could personally relate to this story...but I can't. The only keeping me here is the possible CheeriMac ending and that's it.
And 50 lashing from a bullwhip are you shitting me author?! Do you even know what a bullwhip is capable of? When done properly, a bullwhip is supposed to break the sound barrier causing ear popping effects and fully grown bulls to whimper like a little calf with one strike. But 50!?! on a child no less, that could probably cause death or permanent scaring both mentally and physically! Certain homophobes might be drastic, but there still human!
I think this could have been ended differently, but I am happy with it nonetheless.
Was the stallion in question someone seen in the show, or a non-canon character?
2300214 Who he is isn't important, it's what he is, a stallion, that is important to the story. Why do you think I never named him?
2300193 Tell that to Matthew Shepard, an 18 year old boy in Wyoming who was tied to a fence out in a field where nobody could hear him scream and beat so severely that his skull was nearly turned into powder.
All homophobes are human? No, some aren't.
Well...
2300269 2300257 Not every story is written to play to your dream pairings
So...
1) Big Mac's an emotional bitch huh?
2) There was never any CheeriMac.
3) Cheerilee remains alone...
It started well enough, and then...well...
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I believe this is where I get off. Farewell author person.
2300303
1) Nothing wrong with being unafraid to show your emotions to someone you can confide in. Bear in mind that these have been surpressed for a long while.
2) Nope. I meant it that way from the very beginning, even when I had just thought of the idea.
3) Yup, but alone by choice.
You should learn to appreciate a story for the story, even if it doesn't play towards your fantasies
2300240 Fair enough...But in the story you said that Brae was beat in front of HIS WHOLE FAMILY! Certainly there has to have been some heart in a group good southern people who pride themselves on chivalry and family unity.
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No CheriMac....
Big Mac a colt-cuddler?
Never made any sense to me....never seemed right for him.
Well written, but disappointing.
-RB
2300331 If it makes you sleep better I did 'like' your story anyway simply for the fact that; Yes, you kept my attention throughout the whole story even though it fell apart at the end for me.
2300276
Is not as much that it didn't end up Cheerimac (in fact I just joined the Cheerimac group because I had never bothered to look it up until Celestia's Paladin brought it up) In my case,it was the feel of lack of closure.
It could just be me,of course.
2300370 As I said in a previous comment, I had thought about doing an epilogue, but I just felt that this would be the best spot to end it. Sometimes an epilogue, instead of making a story better by ending it with full closure, makes it pure awfulness.
Case in point is my story called "Something to Remember me by"
hehe^^ nice to see that my gut didnt decieve me for once^^ Hmm... I wonder who that guy was.