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Ebon Mane



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Warning: Incest.

Celestia's mother returns from distant lands, bringing with her the sister that the princess had never met. What will come of their meeting?

Celestia/Luna shipping.

Written for the Writers' Training Group ( mlp-wtg.deviantart.com ) week 7, the prompt being a fic inspired by a song.

Inspired by Forbidden Lovers by Be Bop Deluxe. Here are the lyrics: http://www.lyricsvip.com/Be-Bop-Deluxe/Forbidden-Lovers-Lyrics.html

The song put me in the mind of a swift and passionate love that burns out quickly, a love doomed to fail from the start. And here it is.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 29 )
#1 · Sep 6th, 2011 · · ·

This is really good. I hope we get an update soon.

Saw this on DA. I love it! :pinkiehappy:

#4 · Sep 7th, 2011 · · ·

OHHHH SNAP!

#5 · Sep 8th, 2011 · · ·

Wow, I can't wait for chapter 2 now!!:pinkiehappy:

Ah the illicit shivers from taboo thrills - I love it :heart:, bring it on!

#8 · Sep 12th, 2011 · · ·

When awesome had an name that would be the right one to take.
Also...
Celestia approves::trollestia:

You my dear sir have done a splendid job on this and I hope to see more in the comming future.:moustache:

I really hope that eventually this will be updated. :derpytongue2::trollestia::moustache::eeyup:

i whant to read more

Ice

0_0' I'm liking this already

Hope this isn't dead. I was searching for some Celestia x Luna and this is the only thing I could find.(that wasn't clop anyways >.>) I'm really liking this.

Very good, no haste and certainly no clop. That's how it should be.

:heart:
All that needs to be said

Well, all things considered, incest happened quite a lot with royalty. Trying to write and handle that subject tastefully, however, can be very tricky. I'd love to give this one a read sometime, so consider it Tracked :twilightsmile: .

you should add the "Alternate Universe" tag to this as its not very true to the lore.

beside that, some of it i disliked and some of it i liked, i didnt really like how it was jumping around time and how you seem to want to throw out the parents of the story... could perhaps have done that a little more suddled if that is you intent ofc.

but i would like to see another chapter of this to see where you will take it.

Incest that isn't smut?! :pinkiegasp:

All of my love. :pinkiesad2:

Wow.. Agreed with Twinkie, hardly ever see incest that isn't a clopfiction.

That was so much better than I thought it was going to be! You handled that with more dignity and grace than I thought someone would use for Princest, great read, please keep it up!

Will this story still be updated?

Besides that nice story :twilightsmile:

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Eventually, but not soon.

why does it have to fail? i think they are perfect for each other, since no one else is immortal. still once this goes from on heitus to incomplete i will add it to the group "Celestia X Luna shipping"

also anybody know of any other fics with luna/celestia shipped together?

Why do I hate incest so much?! It stops me from enjoying good fics like this! :fluttershyouch:

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