Sometimes, there are words that were never meant to be said and ideas that were never meant to be known. When the truth exposes those things we wish left hidden, what happens then? Does that truth set you free or utterly damn you?
A/N: Innumerable thanks to Aatxe360 for his assistance. Twilestia. Lunajack also based off of "What The Night Remembers". Marked "Teen" for content. Considered prior to the end of Season 3.
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Why does my brain tell me that this is the beginning of a love triangle?
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Maybe. Maybe not.
Tracked. I like this.
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Was going to read it... then I saw 1837383 THAT.
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Sorry but I have a very intents dislike of Trollestia....
1837425 Understandable. FWIW, it's not the intent nor premise.
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Alright I'll give it a shot...
I read this, then immediately thought of this:
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Seriously though, awesome stuff, looking forward to more. Liked and faved.
Alright great start, so both are stubborn and don't want to admit it... and the idea of Celestia banging her head hard enough to push her horn through her desk... ok I think that anatomically impossible but still funny.
1837450 Here Lies TCSNxs:
Died Dec. 21st, 2012
Passed away from a DDDAAAAWWWW attack.
Thank's man.
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Thanks. It might be, but it served a purpose. Given that fact that ponies also fly, do magic, and (in the case of the Royal Sisters) live for thousands of years, I felt had a little leeway with that.
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Okay, you have my attention. Faved, thumbed, Merry bucking Christmas to you good sir.
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Likewise, good sir!
Note to all you unicorns: it's a lot less painful simply to facehoof.
I have a feeling that this is going to turn wonderfully messy, very quickly.
Pretty neat, would like to see more
1837670 I've created stranger situations.
1837671 Within due time.
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Thanks for the new background!
1837686 There's a reason Good Guy/Stallion Fancy Pants is my avatar, ya know.
1837701 And a Happy Lunear.
Hmm, a bit short, it could go anywhere at this point. Still, I'm faving in order to watch this. Looking forward to it~
interesting opening. the writing is rather...intricate, ill have to remember to only read any upcoming chapter only whilst fully awake.
on a side note: when you say comedy, do you mean painfully embarrassing comedy?
1837787 Thanks. The shortness was, I admit, by design. A fair portion of my stories trend towards the wordy. There was more to it, which will roll into the next chapter. I just was curious if folks wanted to read it, more or less.
1837789 That's usually a good thing when dealing with most of my stories, for better or worse.
I like this introduction, the mirror situation that Twi and Celestia are shown in makes for a wonderful introduction, with Spike and Luna repsectively trying to pry out the crush. I am a big fan of the Twilight and Celestia romance (Which I am hoping this is going for already, lol). Will have to wait and see what all you have planned exactly, but you did a solid job with the intro here.
/fingers crossed for a good humorous TwiLestia fic. : )
1838265 To be honest, those are the plans.
Somehow, I get the feeling that this Twilestia fic will be different from the usual(which is often good anyway). I'm DEFINITELY in.
This story is different... I like it!
Favorited and upvoted!
Come oooooon, TwiLestia! -rolls dice- Daddy needs a Nat 20! Come ooooonnnn....
Anyway. Favourited for possible TwiLestia. I'll stick around either way, if only for horns in desks.
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I figured. I like good guys. They're usually awesome.
I like where this is going
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Im stealing that gif.
This. This looks good. I applaud you, because I haven't seen a good twilestia in a while.
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Can't wait for more :D
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I hope this doesn't turn into a love triangle, lol. It's been too long since I've seen a good Twilestia played straight. Ironic wording is ironic.
When can we expect the next chapter good sir?
1843997 I was going to let this sit for a bit, but given the response it's gotten, it'll be a few days at most. I have a chapter for another story I'm doing on the front burner at the moment (Lunajack). But I'm also stuck at work through Christmas, so this should leave me with ample time to get work on both of them done. Being a computer monkey has advantages.
1843326 Hopefully this doesn't give away too much, but those angles have been done a few times (some wonderfully so) and I doubt there's anything I could add to such a story line to make it worth while. I dislike the notion of making readers cover the same ground that's already been done putting enough twist on it to make it unique.
I've read more then a few Twilestia's and wanted to do one for a while. I believe I've got a few avenues I can pursue and make it worth while for the readers.
So I hope anyway. 
It's been months since I last read a [Comedy] Twilestia. This has a good start.
1844036 I hope you update soon, not many a story capture my interest as this one has.
Sup guys.
There was a few ways this story could have gone, so I left the first chapter open ended. I entertained a few ideas involving multiple love interests, but they became overly complicated and took away focus from Twilight and Celestia. I've already used Appluna in another story that's approaching completion, so it made sense to carry that over and use it.
This won't be an overly long story, but I hope to make it fun. As always, thumbs up if you like and comment if you feel or just want to say I suck.
ONWARD!
And AJ might just do it, too.
Welp, the AJ and Luna pairing is rather odd. I've seen a few ponies besides Twilight put alongside Luna, and its usually Fluttershy, but can't really recall one with AJ. Should be interesting I suppose.
There are some grammatical and structural errors in this chapter, would probably be easily alleviated if you have a friend or an editor who can spend some time looking through it. There isn't anything major, just some spots with typos, incorrect tense usage, and either missing/added words.
The premise you're building up has potential, and I am looking forward to seeing how you move forward with this 'royal vacation' the sisters are taking to Ponyville. Till the next chapter, cheers!
Oh boy I've read enough fanfiction to know this won't end well. So I'm guessing Luna and Applejack will try to push them together... and shenanigans will indeed insure.
Concentrated awesome as always, good sir, Keep it up!
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You're right. I re-read it and think I caught most of 'em. But your suggestion is a good one.
As far as Applejack and Luna, it is unique. Funny thing is it worked surprisingly well in another story, given the characters involved. They are oddly complimentary and I never felt it was much of a stretch.
1871503 I will neither confirm or deny this. But like I said, I hope to make it fun. I've usually prided myself on keeping things unique or adding something fresh to an established premise, so we'll see what happens.
1871546 I intend to.
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We are always really bad at catching errors within the first, oh, 5 days of writing something. At least with grammar and some structuring. It is a real pain in the ass and takes another pointing it out, or us looking through our own work a dozen times. The first is a lot easier than the second by a long shot xD
And for the Luna and AJ combo, wasn't knocking it, just in case. It is indeed unique, and although at first glance it seems the priority is going to be on Celestia and Twilight getting together, those two should make for good support characters in getting things rolling.
Third Chapter Summary: Awkward diner between Celestia and Twilight. Luna asks where Applejack is. *Cuts to a statue of Applejack, somewhere in the Everfree*
1871573 So damn true. I will usually sit on something for a day or two and go over it to be sure I can live with it. I can't say that it bothers me overly much correcting my mistakes (I did commit it after all). You are dead on right about needing a second pair of eyes though as I never catch them all.
As far as Applejack and Luna, I've used them for a few stories and loved the results. Go with what works.
1871574>>1871584 I salute you both.
I'm kinda expecting AJ and Luna to tell eachother about the crush (Luna tell Aj about Celestia and Aj about Twilight) and then they'd work together to get them to date
Appluna? Never seen it before, but it sounds cool. Also, Luna's little scene. That was awesome.
That said, I can see many MANY attempts at matchmaking going horribly wrong soon. Great chapter!
I agree with Spacecowboy, it needs work and has some grammatical errors. I am looking forward to seeing how this plays out. But seriously find time to fix those mistakes and try and find a proofreader or an editor.
Till next chapter, good sir.