"Celestia was confident. There was no reason she shouldn’t be. But the embarrassment against Chrysalis reminded her of one thing: Never underestimate your opponent.
Not that she would. Twilight Sparkle was, in some ways, the most dangerous opponent she had ever faced."
A/N: Marked Teen for content. Lunajack glossed over. Revised 5/26/13 for clean up.
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Poor Celestia, going senile in her old age. Youth wins this time.
that was a cute amuse little piece to read
Great! I loved it. Amusing and exciting, it's a fun read.
Twilight Sparkle FTW!
"I believe there was a particular one involving a waitress who had a trist with a branded stallion in Manehattan."
Tryst, not trist
Where her mane flowed typically along some unseen wind, it was waited down with the amber weight of honey, which also matted down her fur.
Waited down does not seem like the right phrasing here. 'm thnkng weighted down
Twilight quickly willed her magic to being, producing two small vials of liquid. One was of a slightly bluish color while the other seemed viscus it its consistency
Viscous
Touching down lightly and never breaking her gaze from her student, Celestia ensured her hoofs where indeed solidly connected to the floor.
where should be were
Ha! They need a rematch.
1832525 Yeah, I buggered those up pretty well. Corrected and thanks.
1832694>>1832135 There is always later. Celestia does have a right to a rematch.
1832185 In answer to why was Applejack there, I actually have a running LunaJack happening in another story with similar sort of banter. To be honest, I wanted a slightly MST3K kind of commentary in this, and rather then develop something between any other of the Mane Six and Luna, I wanted to keep running what I had. In such an thing, its better to run with what you know.
1833141 Sorry. Have a mustache on me.
Well, That was an enjoyable read!
It was interesting and enjoyable to read but what's with Luna and AJ
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