Deep within the catacombs of Canterlot Castle lies a forgotten secret. One that promises incredible power to those who wield it. But such power isn't without a price now that the secret has seen the light of day. Twilight, Applejack, and the rest of the Elements of Harmony must endeavor to recover the greatest legacy of Star Swirl the Bearded before Equestria pays the price once more. However, does one among them have ulterior motives?
Edit: 5/26/13 - The story is on hiatus while other projects are completed. My apologies.
A/N: Some LunaJack, hints of Twilestia. Marked Teen for content. Artwork courtesy of Emkay-MLP of DeviantArt.
Chapters (2)
AWESOME!!
Colour me intrigued.
2546681>>2546527 Thanks guys.
My feed said you posted a new chapter... why aint it shown up?
2547641 The Edit and Publish buttons are too close together. Sorry about that.
Oh... lol
So, shall I expect a new chapter soon? I am curious as to what comes next.
2547681 A day or two. The framework's complete, but I've room to play with it.
And It has to be the pony least of us suspect....
Good read. I take this as a sequel to your previous work involving LunaJack and Twilestia?
2566522 Yup.
To be honest, the advent of canon Twilicorn pretty much chucked my ideas for the first Twilestia out the window. I can adapt them to this one, so that'll work. As much as I want to continue the other one, my longer stories turn into long novellas I've found, and I don't have so much free time. I want to do an adventure tale (something I've never done) with intrigue (explainable, I promise) and history from previous works. I hope it comes off well. We'll see when Chapter 2 hits after the LunaJack story finishes.
As far as the "incident with the moon", well, that would be a lot of ground to cover, but long story short,
had herself a bit of an unintentional frolic with it thanks to a certain sapphire princess in my LunaJack. I'll explain in more detail later.
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I'm sure the important bits were covered in that story....I was just pointing out that grammatical error.
And It doesn't have to perfect, but I hate stories not having any kind of ending.
2566606 Corrected.
And agreed about stories not having an ending. It tends to bug me as well.
Did you get the Forge of Creation from Ben 10?
2605432 Not that I'm aware of. I scoured the site before using to make sure it wasn't duplicated. Is there another story using something with that name?
2605479 The Forge of Creation is a location from the Ben 10 Ultimate Alien series.
2605495 It's an item planned in the story and I wasn't aware of the other usage. The name will be changed though to avoid any confusion. Thanks for pointing it out.
Cute story so far. Has me wondering which pony stole the Amulet. I have a few ideas on who it might be. But i know its a wait and see at this moment. Its nice to see Luna thinking things through about AJ becoming her Designate. But I hope AJ does.
