Hostage Situation

You had many things planned today, getting kidnapped by Rainbow Dash and Applejack was not one of them.

An entry in the Thousand Words Contest II

07/09/23: Featured.

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Twilight Kiki Sparkle

Twilight Kiki Sparkle #1 · Jul 8th, 2023 · · ·

Damn. What rough day to had.

Mystic Sunrise

Mystic Sunrise #2 · Jul 8th, 2023 · 5 · ·

... What is it with Rainbow Dash and kidnapping other creatures? This is nowhere the first story she did that. It's usually with Pinkie, and they're kidnapping Twilight.

Themaskedferret

Themaskedferret #3 · Jul 9th, 2023 · · ·

Cute. Short and sweet.

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #4 · Jul 9th, 2023 · · ·

Why is there just a random tag?

Felwinter

Felwinter #5 · Jul 9th, 2023 · · ·

A thousand words isn't really enough in my opinion but still great short

midnight arrow

midnight arrow #6 · Jul 9th, 2023 · · ·

Great story wish there was more

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #7 · Jul 9th, 2023 · 4 · ·

I will actually freaking sue them to court. "Bearers of the elements", my a**!

Time Waster

Time Waster #8 · Jul 9th, 2023 · 9 · ·

Hitting someone's head hard enough for them to pass out is not harmless like most movies portray it as. He needs a doctor to do a check up on his injuries and a lawyer to sue the hell out of the bearers.

EndlessPossibilities58

EndlessPossibilities58 #9 · Jul 9th, 2023 · · ·

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Do you think it should be tagged as comedy as well?

TallBrew_CoffeePone

TallBrew_CoffeePone #10 · Jul 9th, 2023 · 1 · ·

*insert SpongeBob “YOU WHAT?” meme here*

Fireeaters

Fireeaters #11 · Jul 9th, 2023 · · ·

I think that they might qualify for disability benefits, lmao

Savant Sentral

Savant Sentral #12 · Jul 10th, 2023 · · ·

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yeah lmao y'know what causes you to pass out? Brain damage

Mystic Sunrise

Mystic Sunrise #13 · Aug 10th, 2023 · 1 · ·

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Same .

Bicyclette

Bicyclette #14 · Sep 18th, 2023 · 1 · ·

"Quiet down in there ya varmint," said a voice with a southern accent, a voice that sounded oddly familiar for some reason.

aww well, being kidnapped into a sack is okay when it’s Applejack doing it!

That sounds like a pretty mundane day for you, so how could it have turned out like this?

that does indeed sound like a very generic day

Did you seriously just get kidnapped... by Rainbow Dash and Applejack?

hell yeah!

Rainbow made quotation marks with her wing fingers around the word 'volunteer'.

aww love the many ways ponies can do the quotation mark with fingers thing

"Heh, sorry about that," said the pair.

classic AppleDash idiocy, causing Twilight all sorts of stress and trouble. and we never find out what Twilight’s plans for the “You” is, i wonder what they could be? thank you for writing!

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #15 · Sep 18th, 2023 · 1 · ·

Spending most of the word count building up a mystery doesn’t work when you give the solution in the long description, the short description, and the character tags. Having the one bit you didn’t reveal lead to a shaggy dog story doesn’t do you any favors either. Sorry, but this one just didn’t work for me.

Negativity enjoyer