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Now witness the power of this filly armed and operational battlestation.

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This story is a sequel to Chrome Hearts


It's been a month since ponykind realized how much one of their elite stood to gain from their fights against the cyberlings. Now they unite to see justice done upon Blueblood, with Sunset and Chrysalis again at center stage. But it is what is around the curtain that'll determine whether it rises on a trial or a tragedy, as there are new schemers at work ready to inflame the tenuous peace between cyberlings and ponies - and it's up to Inspector Sunset to keep those fires from burning all she holds dear.


Commission to PrussiAntique. Pic credit goes to Underpable. Thanks to Shaslan, Muggonny, and Steel Quill for pre-reading/editing!

And an early Merry Chrysmas (misspelling intended) to all reading!

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Comments ( 18 )

I read the title and remembered the game with the same name. :rainbowlaugh:

Saw the title, cover, and description and thought of Freeport venture for a split second

This wouldn't happen to be a follow-up to Chrome Hearts, would it?

Is this relevant? Not really. But somebody else is thinking it too, so why not.

Is there supposed to be a prequel story?

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then please leave the relevant link. And it is inconvenient for beginners to switch to the previous story.

This is impressive , nice!

One is a unicorn out of this world, the other is a shape-shifting cyber bug queen! Together, that fight crime! Well, one is, at least, the other is kinda perpetuating them.

Ship it like FedEx.

Methinks Chryssie took the brunt off the explosion here, judging by relative durability of flesh and metal. I wonder if accidentally, or purposefully.

He does play dirty.

Now I wonder if she can repair herself by absorbing resources.

"... Chrysalis, where is my bed?"

"I needed the materials to rebuild myself, duh."

"... Why didn't you use your bed, then?"

"Obviously I need something to rest on."

"... Scoot over, I'm not sleeping on the floor."

"My, my, aren't we forward today, inspector~"

Yeah, it'd be a good idea to link this story to the previous one.

'Three wires were inserted from the back of her neck to the machines around him' - around it or her

'stand -peach fur' - stand - peach fur

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True I had to search decently long until I found the other story so it would be nice to have a link

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Same. Aargh, I miss it...

saw title, my mind immediately went to mutant/zombie apocalypse and energy drinks.

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Well don't worry, this story will have as many twists and turns as one of those!

New convenient Chryspack! With bonus endless sarcasm!

Welp, and the conspiracy is getting conspiracier.

We can rebuild her. We have the technology.

Now we'll never know how their feeding works.

'castor-oi' - castor-oil

'‘Swell. I’m going to be piggybacking again.”' - “Swell. I’m going to be piggybacking again.”

'to our systems functioning' - to our systems' functioning

'Utchid is in danger?' - I think you meant Urtica

Well, things just got more complicated, now didn't they.

they should've killed blueblood first and came up with excuses later. it's find as long as majority of population want him dead.

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