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Love to write about Sunset Shimmer and her journey through the human world and more.


Instead of being forgiven for her crimes against the Equestrian Princess, Twilight Sparkle, Sunset Shimmer is sentenced to a lifetime in Tartarus. But when trouble rises in Equestria, Twilight Sparkle and her friends come to an unlikely solution.

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WOW Luna a utter Hypocrite! Did she not try to kill Twilight, her Friends and the entire world as Nightmare Moon!!
BITCH! Hope that thrown in her face hundreds of times!

That may or may not play a role in the story :trixieshiftright:

But, who's going to stop the Dazzlings, if not Sunset and Twilight?


Hmmm, you'll see.

Personally I have a hard time believing any of the princesses would sentence someone to Death to begin with, other's have done worse and gotten off with less.

Given what happened to Cozy Glow, I can't exactly say they're not prone to harsh punishments, but it still kind of feels like Luna's going kinda wild here for no obvious reason and everyone else is just letting her, especially Celestia.

Showing remorse is basically a get out of jail free card in the show, so that's kind of tainting my perception.

Should add the only REason Luna was executed was due to being Celestia;'s little bitty sister.
This be twice celestia failed Sunset, failing to be the reacher she needed and mother figure ad failing her again when Luna sentenced her!

Hope this haunts them for a long time.


It really plays a huge factor in the story, and remember, this is an alternative universe. Like I said on my notes, the beginning was a bit Rocky but I'm hoping to smooth it out while I write the story.

The next chapter will really take your side on this one :trixieshiftright:

Didn’t expect a new story from you!! Interested to see where this goes. Will Sunset and Chrysalis meet? Even Tierk and Cozy Glow?


Guess you'll have to wait and find out :trixieshiftright:

It's also kinda weird that Luna is the one that decided this too, especially since the show has traditionally showed Celestia making all the major decisions like in Twilight's Kingdom and Twilight's Seven in particular.

Still I have been waiting for a more medieval take on these characters reformations since School Raze so this should be interesting regardless.


It will play a big part in the story, I'm looking forward to showing it to you guys!

Great update! I already want more! :raritydespair:

I might update earlier if I get ahead, but for now I think I'm going to stay on schedule. :twilightsmile:

oh, it's an AU, ponies are just different. Then how'd things stay the same up to this divergence point


Was shooting for the more medieval realistic style. And hey! Don't be such a smart ass about it, thanks :twilightsmile:

Alright, this looks interesting so far, tracking.

Small nitpick:

only to have that opportunity snatched away from the other Princesses

Should probably be "by"

So this is all about Luna's self loathing? Okay, that makes more sense. I hope she cleans up her act before the end.

I'm curious to see where this all goes.
Bit of a continuity error though. Twilight should have beaten Sunset a fair bit before she ever met Tirek. He should be free right now.

I hope Celestia and Luna are taken down, and who ever does it be Tirek or Chrysalis rub salt in the wound on them.
Also hope Twilight rips into her brother, reminding him that Luna tried to kill her and her friends yet he so chummy with her.
I also wonder how this effect all of Equestria, will they be view as monsters, brutal cruel rulers or Power hungry as Luan was spared because she is Celestia's sister so they are allowed to do what they want.

Thanks for the catch!


Yeah, I know, I was hoping to change that up a bit.so he would be back in prison, everything is going to change.

that opportunity snatched away from the other Princesses.



Yup, keep forgetting to change that, thanks.

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