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King Genesis


"It's only teenage wasteland..."

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UPDATE: Four chapters and the story is finally completed! Check out the end of this long description to see which chapters are left.
Arc IV - Chapter II - "Zero (Part 2)" (WIP)
Stone Chisel, one of the most notorious robbers of recent times, is finally caught in the Everfree Forest while trying to perform a spell to escape. Once he gets locked up in Tartarus, denying various offers that could give him an opportunity to start again, he finds out something that will not only change his life but also will make him commit the biggest mistake... setting free something... not so good.

This story happens during the Beginning of the End of Season 9, but in an alternate universe where something happened with the Great Galloping Gala and Crystal Faire (If you wanna know, keep reading!), and Flash Sentry is a unicorn.

Rated T because of violence, gore, death, and mild profanity. WARNING! SPOILERS IN THE COMMENTS!

More tags:
Princess Celestia
Princess Luna
Discord
Shining Armor
Princess Cadence
Starlight Glimmer
Flash Sentry
Flurry Heart
King Sombra
Grogar

CHAPTERS LEFT:
Arc IV - Chapter III - Zero (Part 2)
Arc IV - Chapter IV - Day of the Fallen
Arc IV - Chapter V - Privately
Arc IV - Chapter VI - Bye

Chapters (35)
Comments ( 212 )

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I can't tell you so much right now :twilightoops:, but the only thing I can tell you is that it would be tragic. :pinkiegasp:

Interesting. Just as they get whistled away by Grogar.

I’m confused about so many things.

Honestly, despite the fact we don’t know the whole story, I can understand him getting mad. If someone told me that the reason I’m doing what I’m doing is because of my lack of understanding friendship I would be mad too. Also, I’m a little confused.

"Then explain what it means to you !"

I would have said, “nothing”.

Also, this was interesting.

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Yes, this prologue has so many things that are quite a mystery :twilightoops:, but they will be explained. Don't worry.

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Confused about the story in general? The story is intentionally confusing, but if you want, tell me what's the matter.

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:rainbowderp:

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Yea, it was good.

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Thanks for the feedback, then. Means a lot.

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You mean “that”?

its kinda hard to take a ancient evil that has killed others that calls people dorks and stupid. Maybe use more sophisticated terms like cretin, imbecile, ignorant, fool, etc.
however I am curious where this goes.

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Yes, you're right. That's why today I was looking for better adjectives and words to expand Tenebris' vocabulary. Thank you for saying that!

Man, if I was chisel I would have been snuck away. Also, this was a little confusing.

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Man, if I was chisel I would have been snuck away.

Yeah, I'd have done the same thing.

Also, this was a little confusing.

Would you tell me why?

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There was a lot of things going on, and a lot of information in one chapter.

"Stop," says Iron Pick, and both journalists shut up. "Thank your butts I won't sue you due to public image defamation, Mr Tabloid and assistant Ink Pot, because what you've said is not only a nasty lie but also a grave and fake accusation that shows how stupid are you with your obnoxious sensationalism. I won't give anyone of you an impromptu interview and I'm glad to say, with my own tongue and mouth and throat, you can screw yourselves."

I wouldn’t be taking that insult.

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Because Imagine you just doing your job, and then this happens.

Ok, I'll give this a try later. At least the premise seems to be interesting.

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Sure! No problem. Thanks for reading.

"Chaos magic," says Tirek. "So you are the first creature of all Equestrian History which had chaos magic on his veins."

Then, what kind of magic does discord have?

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Well, Tenebris is the first one able to handle a magical fusion between Discord and the Bewitching Bell of Grogar while Discord only has his own powers, but I'll edit that part because it's not so specific. Thanks for telling me!

"Well... he hated me, and I hated him! It was a mutual resentment!"

I actually laughed at this part.

Flash Sentry laughs while listening to that but once he finds out nobody follows his game, he shuts up. "I'll enter first."

Don’t worry flash, we all have those awkward moments.

There is some kind of tension between the son, the papa and the mama which I'd prefer not to interfere because it seems to be quite bad, so it's good for me to stop talking about this odd relationship.

Now he says that?

Shiny Picks' momentum is on a meltdown because of his son's trial, and I'm afraid my unconfirmed theory, my thoughts, instead of breaking it in pieces, may turn some gems on fire inside the company. I don't mean this as revenge for what you told me on the Station, Mr Iron Pick and Mrs Poofy Lantern

Even though I still would have been upset. Also, did he really have a melt down?

Also, is shiny picks and iron picks the same character?

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Also, is shiny picks and iron picks the same character?

Shiny Picks is the gem company where Iron Pick and Poofy Lantern work.

Also, did he really have a melt down?

The company had it because they started losing their credibility due to Stone Chisel. If I was some colt living in Manehattan I would have recognized them as thieves instead of a normal company. :rainbowkiss:

"Woah!" shouts Tirek, and then Tenebris lets her go. "I can understand she can be annoying and whimsical... but she's just a filly. She won't hurt you... maybe mentally."

That’s surprising

"How many pegasuses are here?" asks Flash Sentry. "Please, raise your hooves."

I think it’s “Pegasus”.

"Don't, by now," replies Luna. "If we spread the fact we have Tirek, Stone Chisel and Cozy Glow out of their cages to all of Equestria everyone will turn crazy. By now, we need to solve this with you, Twilight & her friends... and I've got to admit the Wonderbolts and the Crystal Empire was an excellent idea."

You could just tell the leaders. Or creatures you trust to keep it a secret.

"Ok! Ok! Move on, move on!" shouts Flash Sentry. "Speedspear, you'll be the leader on East. Eagle Eye, on North. Brave Position, Speedspear, Eagle Eye, if something happens or you find something, we must communicate with each other through our magic. Remember, a red aura if it's bad, green if you found them."

They can change color?

Tenebris, who is listening to everything they are saying, it's just dissimulating his ears while walking.

What does that mean?

"And what does the rune mean?"

I thought he already said what it meant.

"And the statue you broke had four crosses painted on it, which means murder . "

Does that mean he murdered someone or he has to be murdered?

CRACK.

Brave Position's neck spins a bit before falling. Everyone heard that sound, and it was deafening and completely scary. Tenebris has just killed him with just using his magic, and that sound also calls the guards' attention who start shouting and running. "I think we have guests. Prepare yourselves."

Huh, that turned dark.

I think it’s “Pegasus”.

Yeah, I actually looked up for the plural of pegasus, but Google said it was pegasuses. I used Google Translator because English is not my main language, though. I don't know if that page is something 100% reliable.

They can change color?

I invented it to be some kind of communication between them, like cops and radios in the real world.

What does that mean?

Sorry. :rainbowlaugh: I tried to write he was just dissimulating, but now that I re-read it I truly didn't understand what I typed there. I'll edit it.

I thought he already said what it meant.

He asked for the meaning of that specific rune.

Huh, that turned dark.

And it's only the beginning. :rainbowderp::pinkiegasp:

Nice built up even his allies are done with him also nice comparison to villainy and psychopathy.

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Thanks for saying that! :pinkiehappy::heart: I appreciate it.

Twilight is going to kill Tenebris, and if she doesn’t kill him she’s killing someone.

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Is that a scared twilight?

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I would say a shocked one, not frightened.

The ram dares to stand on Starlight's body to take a look at what's going on outside. "Oh... we have more visitors."

Outside?

It's unbreakable, and even Flash Sentry with his magic can't break it.

Magic?

"Um..." struggles the robber, and then he chuckles. "My name is Stone Chisel and I like chameleons."

Why is that important?

But he isn't even listening, he only laughs. "It doesn't hurt... the gem doesn't hurt.. NOT ANYMORE!" he shouts and at that same moment, he breaks the Royal Guards' neck, something that shocks the Wonderbolts, which don't even doubt in attacking him at that same time... However, just because that didn't hurt, Tenebris dares to use his powers with the now dark grey gem one more time. He has something special in mind for those pegasi. Something special for the punch Spitfire gave to him in the face.

I thought that was discord that said that at first.

SHRACKK!

"AAAAAAARGHHH!"

The first one who shouts is Soarin, who gets stamped onto the ground and doesn't react. Blaze doesn't know how to react, and ends up crashing against a tree, stabbing herself with a branch. Thunderlane, on the other hand, lands on the ground but can't do anything because of the pain. Then another one, and another one, everyone falls on the ground, and Spitfire, now alone on the skies, feels an undescribable pain on her back... and when she turns around...

Wait, what just happened?

Outside?

Outside the forest.

Magic?

Eeyup. :eeyup: His own magic.

Why is that important?

It will be later explained in further chapters.

I thought that was discord that said that at first.

Whoops! I completely missed that colour and didn't even find out while editing. Thanks for telling me.

Wait, what just happened?

Wings [❌]. This.

... she finds out she has no wings.

Cool WTH moment. WTH means What The Hell

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Yeah, quite shocking. Thanks for saying that!

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No problem, I am just expressing my feelings.

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I wasn’t able to see your message because it didn’t have the numbers.

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Oh... I thought I clicked on the reply button. Didn't even realize that. My mistake!

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