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I like this premise.
You have my attention.
an interesting start
Hmm... it's missing something.
nice job on chapters out so far
is he still gonna try to rule the world
I like what you are doing here keep up the good work
An interesting idea but I personally think it would have been amusing if it was a more canon pony Equestria (Anthro would be fine) with Anon showing up to guest star for this version's role of Ryuk.
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Eh not really a fan of the Anon character
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Nah too cliche this is a parody
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Apples?
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I dunno... chili dogs?
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Maybe or mellons lol
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Well it does feel a little short.
Okay, looking good...though I've got a few questions regarding the rules. Is it just the three established in the prologue, or are there extra rules that specify further details? (Like how in the Death Note there were the extra rules about what you write in beyond names and how that kicked in, and the effects of misspelling names, etc.)
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There will be more rules i have written them down and thought it would be neat to do as in Death note reveal them at random and have some of them being used in chapters as i work on this project
I think you meant "spike couldn't help but notice how her SKIRT bounced up, showing she wasn't wearing (underwear/panties)."
Only issue I found in the whole chapter. However I am not the best proof reader.
I’ll be back to read this in a moment. Just need to go get a bag of chips.
The premise is okay, but you really need to get a proof-reader or beta-reader. There are glaring grammar mistakes in almost every paragraph, and you seem to misunderstand how/when you should use capitalization.
Interesting start, though honestly i wish Spike took up on Ms. Harshwhinny's offer; there needs to be repucussions for both Button Mash and Diamond Tiara for that shit they pulled on Spike.
I'm a vengeful bastard, sadly..
I wonder who will be the first victim of Spike's desire.
Hmm, only thing i see is this notebook only makes people horny. Not make em instantly want him unless he planned it out. If he just wrote a girl's name they'll jump the nearest guy/their boyfriends. Not him if he isn't there.
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It was a joke but obviously you are not much of a fan of a sense of humor either.
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Why did my comment gave me 4 downvotes??? I understand it is my thoughts, but damn, didnt think there were gonna get so much flak....geez.
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No idea and i liked your comment it was a pretty good one. Probably a petty guy
Premise is interesting. Hope that turns out the 'Erokami' is Nightmare Moon or "Demon" Shimmer. Sunset works if she isn't already a human, while NM works as her own separate character that takes the form of Luna to look "normal".
Edit: A word
nice work
Now Spike got a taste of what it does. Who will be written next.
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Trolls who hate others who like Spike, trust me, Phantom Dragon, I , and many others who review Spike stories or say even one word in a comment have been getting that many down votes as of late
She's going to be fired nice Going Spike you ruined her career
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Its ether that or ratings are going to go through the roof
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I suspect the latter one since this story was marked as comedy.
Oooh awesome chapter and loving this idea could be a lot of fun for sure. :)
oh dear. this is gonna go crazy big time.
In before Snips and Snail are revealed as the duet behind renowned detective known as ‘S’ who combats the mysterious wielder of the Lust Note in angst ridden detectivery.
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Who told you my plans!!!
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Perhaps in time, shuddering breath but my… employers do not enjoy when I possibly organic sound share my sources.
Until then… Mr Fre- Mrmidnight.
Spike realizes the note does work. And wait until Twilight wakes up when the affects wear off. How will she feel knowing what she did and not know why she did it.
Twily will be in for a surprise when she wakes up to see her little brother in his birthday suit hugging her.
so ........... the notebook works huh.
They Didn't check if the condom broke. can't wait for morning
Diamond tiara should be the next person to get affected by the lust note because to be honest I think a little bit of revenge is an order
Another awesome chapter part of me wishes they were related to see them cross that taboo~ But good with step siblings too plus i'm looking forward to seeing what Spike will do now that he realizes the power in his hands.
Though i'm confused about something why did you call Trixie, Jessica Steel?
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Fixed it sorry my bad
I’m already liking this note book.
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It's cool no worries.
Payback Time!
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Rarity feels like the next logical choice to me, but Diamond does also make sense at the same time...
Come to think about it... Death Note is a tool of a Death God... does this mean Lust Note is a tool of a Succubus or something?
nice work