Two siblings are full of mischief and are going to do no good. Would that also include sneaking to the kitchen and eating cookies? I think that counts!
Inspired by a comic I had seen!
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Cute story.
Also:
Their should be they’re
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Ooops! Thanks!
A cute little story. Also, bad Shining for using your little sister to get out of trouble.
Thieves!
That was a good story.
This story made me think of the above video.
With some streamlining, you could enter this into the 1000 words contest!
Well she does learn fast
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Huh, good idea!
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She sure does!
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Thanks!
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Yup! Cookie Thieves!
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But, isn't that what siblings do?
Aww!
That's what I think when I read this story.
An adorably sweet little story, but you have to remember to start a new paragraph whenever it's a new speaker. It's somewhat confusing to the reader otherwise.
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Thanks so much! And about the paragraphing, I'll remember!
Velvet then turned her hardened look to her husband. Poor Night Light began to sweat again. "What?" he asked. Velvet shook her head at him. "Your very helpful," she stated flatly.
Great story!!!
But the "your" should be "you're" (you are)
And easy way to remember the difference is that your refers to an item such as your cookie. And you're means that you are something such as happy, helpful, etc.
This seems to be a very common mistake and I see it many places.
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Thank you!
Sweet story!
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Thank you!
This story is so adorable! I was smiling throughout this whole story, thinking about cute little Twily and Shining Armor stealing cookies. And Night Light, if Velvet were out of the house Twilight could get away with anything.
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Thank you!!!
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After I get a couple of longer projects I'm working on done, I'm thinking of shifting to doing more stories like this one. I did one involving Lyra and I felt just as good writing it as I did reading this one, happy inside.
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That sounds lovely!